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1、1“五檔五檔”作文在眼里作文在眼里抓標(biāo)準(zhǔn)抓標(biāo)準(zhǔn)(1)完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)；完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)；(2)覆蓋了所有內(nèi)容要點；覆蓋了所有內(nèi)容要點；(3)應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；(4)具備了較強的語言運用能力；具備了較強的語言運用能力；(5)有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊；有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊；(6)完全達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。完全達到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。2“五檔五檔”標(biāo)準(zhǔn)如何抓標(biāo)準(zhǔn)如何抓(1)抓抓“應(yīng)用了較多的詞匯應(yīng)用了較多的詞匯”解讀：詞性多樣、詞匯高級、短語豐富。解讀：詞性多樣、詞匯高級、短語豐富。(2)抓抓“應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)
2、構(gòu)應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)”解讀：感嘆句、倒裝句、復(fù)合句、強調(diào)句、非謂語動詞結(jié)解讀：感嘆句、倒裝句、復(fù)合句、強調(diào)句、非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)、構(gòu)、with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)等。復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)等。(3)抓抓“有效使用連接成分有效使用連接成分”解讀：段與段、句與句之間明晰的、合乎邏輯的順序組織解讀：段與段、句與句之間明晰的、合乎邏輯的順序組織與與安排，做到文意與結(jié)構(gòu)上層次分明、條理清楚。安排，做到文意與結(jié)構(gòu)上層次分明、條理清楚。(4)抓抓“完成規(guī)定的任務(wù)完成規(guī)定的任務(wù)”解讀：對于題干、要點提示、注意事項以及參考詞匯要做解讀：對于題干、要點提示、注意事項以及參考詞匯要做到到讀題全面，只有這樣才能確保完成規(guī)定任務(wù)。讀題全面，只有這
3、樣才能確保完成規(guī)定任務(wù)。1力保審題過程要力保審題過程要“全全”審題五方面審題五方面:審題是高考書面表達的關(guān)鍵第一步審題是高考書面表達的關(guān)鍵第一步,確保審題確保審題“全而不漏全而不漏”是得高分的基本保證。審題要注意以下五個是得高分的基本保證。審題要注意以下五個方面方面:(1)審文體審文體考生首先要根據(jù)情景提示弄清要求寫哪種體裁的文章，是考生首先要根據(jù)情景提示弄清要求寫哪種體裁的文章，是記敘文、說明文、應(yīng)用文，還是議論文。動筆之前認(rèn)真審記敘文、說明文、應(yīng)用文，還是議論文。動筆之前認(rèn)真審題并確定寫作體裁是至關(guān)重要的。題并確定寫作體裁是至關(guān)重要的。(3)審人稱審人稱審人稱，即弄清書面表達要求用哪種人稱
4、寫作。其中有主審人稱，即弄清書面表達要求用哪種人稱寫作。其中有主要人稱和次要人稱，這一點要引起考生足夠的重視，因為要人稱和次要人稱，這一點要引起考生足夠的重視，因為倘若人稱不對，評卷時閱卷老師就會扣掉相應(yīng)的分?jǐn)?shù)。倘若人稱不對，評卷時閱卷老師就會扣掉相應(yīng)的分?jǐn)?shù)。(4)審時態(tài)審時態(tài)審時態(tài)，即根據(jù)所給材料信息確定短文的基本時態(tài)?？忌鷮彆r態(tài)，即根據(jù)所給材料信息確定短文的基本時態(tài)?？忌欢ㄒ匾晻r態(tài)，因為如果時態(tài)方面的錯誤過多，評卷時一定要重視時態(tài)，因為如果時態(tài)方面的錯誤過多，評卷時閱卷老師就會扣除閱卷老師就會扣除35分。分。(5)審要點審要點表達出全部要點是得分的基本保證，如果漏掉要點表達出全部要點是
5、得分的基本保證，如果漏掉要點,得分檔得分檔次就會被降低，因此考生要細(xì)審題次就會被降低，因此考生要細(xì)審題,定要點定要點,巧構(gòu)思，列提巧構(gòu)思，列提綱。綱。(2)精準(zhǔn)規(guī)避三類錯誤精準(zhǔn)規(guī)避三類錯誤錯在各類詞匯錯在各類詞匯A拼寫錯誤拼寫錯誤a誤：誤：We got struck in the traffic jam so we were late for the meeting.改正：改正：struck改為改為stuckB變化錯誤變化錯誤b誤：誤：People throwed cans，paper，bags and so on into the river water.改正：改正：throwed改為改為t
6、hrewc誤：誤：The book presents us a lot of useful informations.改正：改正：informations改為改為informationC詞性錯誤詞性錯誤d誤：誤：During my summer vacation，I spent half a month in the country and played very happy.改正：改正：happy改為改為happilye誤：誤：Doing a parttime job always effects study.改正：改正：effects改為改為affects錯在語法結(jié)構(gòu)錯在語法結(jié)構(gòu)A時態(tài)錯誤
7、時態(tài)錯誤a誤：誤：In the morning，we had bicycled in the suburbs to plant trees.改正：改正：had_bicycled改為改為bicycledB語態(tài)錯誤語態(tài)錯誤b誤：誤：Children who raise in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.改正：改正：raise改為改為are raisedC主謂一致錯誤主謂一致錯誤c誤：誤：My hobby is widespread，which include
8、 drawing，collecting stamps and so on.改正：改正：include改為改為includesD比較級使用錯誤比較級使用錯誤d誤：誤：With the development of transportation，the world seems to be getting more and more smaller.改正：改正：more and more smaller改為改為smaller and smallerE非謂語動詞使用錯誤非謂語動詞使用錯誤e誤：誤：Comparing with other countries，the country pays littl
9、e attention to the pollution.改正：改正：Comparing改為改為ComparedF平行錯誤平行錯誤f誤：誤：Then I put my book under my desk，opening it and started looking for the answer.改正：改正：opening改為改為opened錯在漢式思維錯在漢式思維A純漢語式思維和漢語式語序純漢語式思維和漢語式語序a誤：誤：At this school studying，I really very happy.改正：改正：Studying in this school，I am really
10、happy.B句子成分殘缺句子成分殘缺b誤：誤：There are many students dont support the project.改正：改正：There are many students who dont support the project.c誤：誤：On the other hand，dogs are our best friends，bring us a lot of fun.改正：改正：On the other hand，dogs are our best friends，which bring us a lot of fun.C句子成分贅余句子成分贅余d誤：誤：O
11、n one day，he went to the cinema.改正：改正：One day，he went to the cinema.1運用三大原則運用三大原則，體現(xiàn)美不勝收體現(xiàn)美不勝收(1)新穎性原則新穎性原則寫作時恰當(dāng)?shù)皿w地使用高中學(xué)過的，別人可能想不到的詞寫作時恰當(dāng)?shù)皿w地使用高中學(xué)過的，別人可能想不到的詞匯，會給閱卷人耳目一新的感覺。但是需注意：既要避免匯，會給閱卷人耳目一新的感覺。但是需注意：既要避免使用俗詞，又要避開冷僻詞匯。使用俗詞，又要避開冷僻詞匯。(2014高考江西卷高考江西卷)In the coming three years，our school life will be
12、 difficult.In the coming three years，our school life will be challenging.(2)短語優(yōu)先原則短語優(yōu)先原則多使用詞組、習(xí)語來代替一些單詞，以增加文采。多使用詞組、習(xí)語來代替一些單詞，以增加文采。Developing a good habit is also important.Developing a good habit is also of importance.(3)避免重復(fù)原則避免重復(fù)原則盡量避免過多地使用某一個單詞，必要時選擇使用其他恰盡量避免過多地使用某一個單詞，必要時選擇使用其他恰當(dāng)?shù)耐x詞或詞組來代替。當(dāng)?shù)耐?/p>
13、義詞或詞組來代替。I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches.I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches.2頻變句型結(jié)構(gòu)頻變句型結(jié)構(gòu)，增加得分亮點增加得分亮點(1)肯定不如雙否好肯定不如雙否好對于考生來說，只要稍加注意，在文章中運用雙重否定的對于考生來說，只要稍加注意，在文章中運用雙重否定的句子可以給自己的書面表達加分。句子可以給自己的書面表達加分。We can imagine what life would be like
14、with phones.We cant imagine what life would be like without phones.(2)陳述不如倒裝妙陳述不如倒裝妙倒裝是一種最簡單易行的使句子呈現(xiàn)亮點的方法，它能使倒裝是一種最簡單易行的使句子呈現(xiàn)亮點的方法，它能使文章內(nèi)容突出，富有節(jié)奏。文章內(nèi)容突出，富有節(jié)奏。The library lies in the center of our school.The library is between the garden and the teaching building.In the center of our school lies the
15、library，which is between the garden and the teaching building.I was so excited that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.(3)主動不如被動巧主動不如被動巧使用被動語態(tài)符合英語的習(xí)慣使用被動語態(tài)符合英語的習(xí)慣,如果書面表達中有一兩個被如果書面表達中有一兩個被動語態(tài)句子，就會呈現(xiàn)出句型的變化動語態(tài)句子，就會呈現(xiàn)出句型的變化,使整篇文章句型
16、豐富。使整篇文章句型豐富。One day，when we learned the new word “eccentric” in class，the teacher asked us to make a sentence with it.One day，when we learned the new word “eccentric” in class，we were asked to make a sentence with it.(4)簡單不如并列、復(fù)合強簡單不如并列、復(fù)合強有時為了使句子連貫性更強，表達更貼切、自然，我們在有時為了使句子連貫性更強，表達更貼切、自然，我們在兩個或多個簡單句之
17、間加上兩個或多個簡單句之間加上and，for，or，not only.but also等連詞，使其成為并列句；有時根據(jù)上下句之間的關(guān)等連詞，使其成為并列句；有時根據(jù)上下句之間的關(guān)系，在兩個或多個簡單句之間加上系，在兩個或多個簡單句之間加上when，as，where，because等從屬連詞，使簡單句變成復(fù)合句。等從屬連詞，使簡單句變成復(fù)合句。I would really like to interview him.He is the first Chinese to go to space.He is one of the greatest astronauts in the world.I
18、would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world.(5)非謂語動詞不能少非謂語動詞不能少非謂語動詞包括動詞不定式、動名詞和分詞三種。巧用非非謂語動詞包括動詞不定式、動名詞和分詞三種。巧用非謂語動詞，使書面表達句式豐富多彩，增加高分亮點。謂語動詞，使書面表達句式豐富多彩，增加高分亮點。In the picture，we can see a boy in worn
19、 clothes.He is sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.In the picture，we can see a boy in worn clothes，sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.He is going to write a book.The book is based on this experience.He is going to write a book based on this experience
20、.(6)篇章結(jié)構(gòu)巧連貫篇章結(jié)構(gòu)巧連貫在英語寫作中，要做到篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，除在內(nèi)容的組織安在英語寫作中，要做到篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，除在內(nèi)容的組織安排上要注意前后的邏輯關(guān)系外，有時還需要恰當(dāng)使用能承排上要注意前后的邏輯關(guān)系外，有時還需要恰當(dāng)使用能承上啟下的關(guān)聯(lián)詞語。上啟下的關(guān)聯(lián)詞語。First，he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines.We stood around him and watched attentively.Then we started to have a try ourselves.The old
21、man walked around and helped us patiently.Finally，we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman.1“起起”好開頭好開頭(1)常用開頭詞匯常用開頭詞匯First，I think everyone needs friends and is eager to get friendship.Nowadays/Recently，people in many big cities are complaining about the hea
22、vy traffic.To begin with，smoking should be banned in public areas.Generally speaking，the more you practice，the more skillfully you can write in English.(2)常用開頭句式常用開頭句式As the proverb says/As the saying goes，“Where there is a will，there is a way.”As can be seen from the table，nearly everyone owns one
23、mobile phone in China.There is no denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind.It is well known that an elephant is a very kind and gentle animal.Im excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine.(3)滿分作文選粹滿分作文選粹As a student，I can tell you that there is nothing better than
24、 being praised by my teacher before my classmates.Im glad to hear that you will come to our school as an exchange student.As is known to all, shoes play an important role in our life，for it can protect our feet from being hurt.2“承承”好上下好上下(1)常用順承詞匯常用順承詞匯Secondly，we should get up early to memorize idi
25、oms and useful expressions.Obviously，a good learning habit can help us to speed up to reach our destinations.Whats more，good books can help us to develop good characters.I lost my way in the forest and to make matters worse/what is worse，it became dark.In addition，we shouldnt neglect that everyone w
26、ants a friendly and peaceful society.Meanwhile/At the same time，I will regard it as my duty to keep our environment clean.(2)常用順承句式常用順承句式Take Beijing for example，it is one of the oldest cities in the world.What is more serious is that we dont cherish wildlife.As far as I am concerned，they stand for
27、love，friendship and unity.(3)滿分作文選粹滿分作文選粹Besides，I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.Moreover，it seems that he always thinks more of himself than of others.Whats worse，some drivers.do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.3“轉(zhuǎn)轉(zhuǎn)”好過渡好過渡(1)常用轉(zhuǎn)折過渡
28、詞匯常用轉(zhuǎn)折過渡詞匯But unfortunately，I mind my own business without considering my parents.However，not until the match was over did we realize that we became the losers.On the other hand，online shopping also has many disadvantages.On the contrary，the volunteers always claim that they are tired of the life on
29、 earth.Contrary to what I had originally said，the trip turned out to be fun.(2)滿分作文選粹滿分作文選粹However，what amazes you most is the following new function.But now，because my left foot was injured，I cannot go with you as planned.4“合合”好結(jié)尾好結(jié)尾(1)常用結(jié)尾詞匯常用結(jié)尾詞匯All in all，traveling is the best choice to recharge
30、 ourselves and get ready for the new challenges.In conclusion，a good citizen should observe traffic regulations.In a word，success is important，and so is failure，because its the mother of success.To sum up，environmental protection is of great importance，which can make us live more comfortably and hea
31、lthily.On the whole，I find a bike more enjoyable than a motorcycle.(2)常用結(jié)尾句式常用結(jié)尾句式Id appreciate it if you could deliver them as soon as possible.It is high time that we did something to prevent the environment from being polluted.Only with combined efforts can we expect our hometown to take on a new
32、 look in the near future.We can，therefore，come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as peace in the world.Im sure that I still have a long way to go to achieve my dream.No matter how difficult it is, I will have it come true.(3)滿分作文選粹滿分作文選粹In short，not only has the inclusion poisoned Chines
33、e，it may also bring about distance between the Chinese people.In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful.Ill be glad if you can consider my recommendation.（2016全國卷I）假定你是李華，你校攝影俱樂部（photography club）將舉辦國際中學(xué)攝影展。請給你的英國朋友Peter寫封信。請他提供作品。信的內(nèi)容包括： 1主題：環(huán)境保護； 2展覽時間； 3投稿郵箱：；注意： 1詞數(shù)100左右； 2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)
34、，以使行文連貫?！敬鸢浮緿ear Peter, Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know youtake go
35、od pictures and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to . Hope to hear from yo
36、u soon.Yours Lihua試顆分析：本文于半開放作文。要求考生以李華的身份英國朋友Peter寫信，建議他參加你校俱樂部舉辦的國際中學(xué)生攝影展。文章要使用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時為主的時態(tài)。要對：1.校俱樂部舉辦的國際中學(xué)生攝影展， 主題為環(huán)境保護；2.展覽時間6月15日，持續(xù)三周；3.知道對方對攝影展很感興趣，也恰好有環(huán)保方面的圖片，希望對方能夠參加本次展覽。4.投稿郵箱：。在寫作時，注意書信的格式以及串聯(lián)過度用語；同時盡量使用熟悉的詞匯和短語，尤其不要出現(xiàn)中國式英語，并在能力所及的范圍之內(nèi)使用復(fù)合句或者諺語，增加獲得高分的可能性。A假定你是李華，你校英文報假定你是李華，你校英文報“外國
37、文化外國文化”欄目擬刊登介紹欄目擬刊登介紹美國節(jié)日風(fēng)俗和中學(xué)生生活的短文。美國節(jié)日風(fēng)俗和中學(xué)生生活的短文。請給美國朋友彼得寫信約稿，要點如下：請給美國朋友彼得寫信約稿，要點如下：1欄目介紹；欄目介紹；2稿件內(nèi)容；稿件內(nèi)容；3稿件長度：約稿件長度：約400詞；詞；4交稿日期：交稿日期：6月月28日前。日前。注意：注意：1.詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右。左右。2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3開頭語已為你寫好。開頭語已為你寫好。Dear Peter，Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English
38、newspaper._審題謀篇審題謀篇1審文體：應(yīng)用文，屬于提綱式作文審文體：應(yīng)用文，屬于提綱式作文2審格式：書信審格式：書信3審人稱：以第三人稱為主，第二人稱為輔審人稱：以第三人稱為主，第二人稱為輔4審時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時審時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時5審要點：注意要點要齊全，包括欄目介紹、稿件內(nèi)容、審要點：注意要點要齊全，包括欄目介紹、稿件內(nèi)容、稿件長度和交稿日期；寫作時注意恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂勉暯釉~和過稿件長度和交稿日期；寫作時注意恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂勉暯釉~和過渡渡詞，以使文章行文連貫、流暢。詞，以使文章行文連貫、流暢。滿分作文滿分作文Dear Peter，Id like to ask you to write an ar
39、ticle for our schools English newspaper.The“Foreign Cultures”section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States？And w
40、e would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals，and the life of American high school students.Youcan write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before June 28?Im looking forward to h
41、earing from you.Yours，Li Hua能力拓展能力拓展完成下列學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)完成下列學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)1句式升級：句式升級：你可以寫有關(guān)的東西，只要它有趣并能使人增進知識。你可以寫有關(guān)的東西，只要它有趣并能使人增進知識。低級：低級：You can write anything relevant，and its interesting and informative.高級：高級：You can write anything relevant _ its interesting and informative.as long as2句型轉(zhuǎn)換：句型轉(zhuǎn)換：The “Foreign Cultures”
42、section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.The“Foreign Cultures”section in our newspaper _ (receive用被動語態(tài)用被動語態(tài)) us students，_(非限制性定語從句非限制性定語從句) has a positive effect on our learning lives.is well received bywhich假定你是李華，計劃和同學(xué)去敬老院假定你是李華，計劃和同學(xué)去敬老院(nursing home)陪老陪老人們過重陽節(jié)人們過重陽節(jié)(the Double
43、 Ninth Festival)。請給外教露。請給外教露西寫封郵件，邀她一同前往，內(nèi)容包括：西寫封郵件，邀她一同前往，內(nèi)容包括：1出發(fā)及返回時間；出發(fā)及返回時間；2活動：包餃子、表演節(jié)目等?；顒樱喊溩?、表演節(jié)目等。注意：注意：1詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右；左右；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3結(jié)語已為你寫好。結(jié)語已為你寫好。_Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua審題謀篇審題謀篇1審文體：應(yīng)用文，屬于提綱式作文審文體：應(yīng)用文，屬于提綱式作文2審格式：電子郵件審格式：電子郵件3審人稱：第一人稱審人稱：第一人稱4審時態(tài)：一
44、般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時審時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時5審要點：審要點：(1)出發(fā)及返回時間；出發(fā)及返回時間；(2)在敬老院的活動：包餃子、表演在敬老院的活動：包餃子、表演節(jié)節(jié)目等。目等。滿分作文滿分作文Dear Lucy，Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.It is the day for the elderly in our culture.Well go and make dumplings an
45、d cakes with the elderly people there.Well also spend some fun time together singing，dancing and playing games，which we hope will make them happy.We should be back around 4 oclock in the afternoon.If you are able tocome with us，please let us know and well wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the
46、morning.Looking forward to your replyYours，Li Hua能力拓展能力拓展完成下列學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)完成下列學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)(句式升級句式升級)1我們將在一起唱歌、跳舞、玩游戲度過美好的時刻，我們將在一起唱歌、跳舞、玩游戲度過美好的時刻，我們希望這會使他們高興。我們希望這會使他們高興。低級：低級：Well also spend some fun time together.Well sing，dance and play games.We hope it will make them happy.高級高級:Well also spend some fun time tog
47、ether singing,dancing _ playing games，_ we hope will make them happy.andwhich2如果你能與我們一起來，請告知我們；我們將在上午如果你能與我們一起來，請告知我們；我們將在上午9點在校門口等你。點在校門口等你。低級：低級：Are you able to come with us?Please let us know.Well wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.高級：高級：_ you are able to come with us，please let us know _ well wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.Ifand
高考英語 書面表達總動員 5 備考策略課件
