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1、專題一　解題策略 寫好高考“書面表達(dá)”絕非一日之功，關(guān)鍵在于平時扎扎實(shí)實(shí)的訓(xùn)練。但是，在夯實(shí)語言基本功的前提下，熟悉、掌握一定的應(yīng)試技巧，也非常重要。根據(jù)“書面表達(dá)”常見錯誤及評卷要求，建議使用“一式，兩頭，三寫，四關(guān)”的應(yīng)試搶分技巧。具體為： 一式 寫對格式 要求記住英語常用文體的格式和應(yīng)用文體的寫作方式和特點(diǎn)。 二頭 寫好兩頭 要求靈活運(yùn)用熟悉的句式和表達(dá)手法，使文章開頭和結(jié)尾結(jié)構(gòu)正確，言簡意賅。 三寫 規(guī)范三寫 在高考英語書面表達(dá)的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中，正確拼寫和使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及書寫的美觀程度也是影響得分的一個重要指標(biāo)，因此考生要高度重視。許多考生

2、只重視書面表達(dá)內(nèi)容的訓(xùn)練和提高，卻忽視了卷面規(guī)范書寫的訓(xùn)練，導(dǎo)致本不該的失分。 四關(guān) 突破四關(guān) 所謂“四關(guān)”是指突破內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)關(guān)、行文邏輯關(guān)、語法規(guī)則關(guān)和習(xí)慣表達(dá)關(guān)。要求內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)確全面，行文邏輯通順嚴(yán)密，語言運(yùn)用正確得當(dāng)，表達(dá)方式符合英語習(xí)慣。 當(dāng)然，在備考過程中，有針對性地背誦一些高分句式，套用合適的寫作模塊，可以幫助大家在短時間內(nèi)在書面表達(dá)上搶得高分！ 真題導(dǎo)練 　(2019·全國卷Ⅲ)假定你是李華，你校將舉辦音樂節(jié)。請寫封郵件邀請你的英國朋友Allen參加，內(nèi)容包括： 1．時間； 2．活動安排； 3．歡迎他表演節(jié)目。 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2．可以適當(dāng)增加

3、細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 【審題謀篇】 體裁 邀請信 人稱 第一、二人稱為主 時態(tài) 一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時為主 要點(diǎn) 1.音樂節(jié)舉辦的時間；2.活動內(nèi)容安排；3.歡迎他表演節(jié)目 　 　

4、 　 【提綱要點(diǎn)】 1.第一段——點(diǎn)明主題發(fā)出邀請，并介紹音樂節(jié)的具體內(nèi)容 ①點(diǎn)明主題 A Chinese classical music concert will_be_held in the music hall of our school. ②發(fā)出邀請 I'd like to invite_you_to_join me. ③活動安排 Many music masterpieces will_be_played by a famous band. ④歡迎他表演節(jié)目 You_are_welcome_to_give a performance. 2．第二、三段——表

5、達(dá)期盼，期待回復(fù) ⑤表達(dá)期盼——我將在音樂廳入口等你 I'll meet you at_the_entrance_of the music hall. ⑥期待回復(fù) Looking forward to your reply！ 【潤色升級】 1.將①句增加時間細(xì)節(jié)，并用賓語從句進(jìn)行表達(dá) I'm glad to_tell_you_that_a_Chinese_classical_music_concert_ will_be _held_in_the_music_hall_of_our_school_on_November_8th. 2．將②句用非謂語動詞作狀語表達(dá)，并與④句合并

6、 Knowing_that you are fond of classical music, I'd_like_to_invite_you _to_join_me_and_you_are_welcome_to_give_a_performance. 3．將⑤句用if條件句表達(dá)，并增加細(xì)節(jié) If_it_is_convenient_for_you,_I'll meet you at_the_entrance_ of_the_music_hall_at_7：00_that_evening. 【規(guī)范謄寫】 真題導(dǎo)練 (2018·全國卷Ⅱ)你受學(xué)生會委托為校宣傳欄“英語天

7、地”寫一則通知，請大家觀看一部英文短片Growing Together，內(nèi)容包括： 1．短片內(nèi)容：學(xué)校的發(fā)展； 2．放映時間、地點(diǎn)； 3．歡迎對短片提出意見。 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 　 　

8、 　 　 　 【審題謀篇】 體裁 通知 人稱 第三人稱為主 時態(tài) 一般現(xiàn)在時為主 要點(diǎn) 1.短片內(nèi)容；2.放映時間、地點(diǎn)；3.歡迎對短片提出意見 【提綱要點(diǎn)】 1.第一段——點(diǎn)題：你受學(xué)生會委托為校宣傳欄“英語天地”寫一則通知，請大家觀看一部英文短片 ①Rccently, an outstanding short film will_be_shown in our school. Welcome to join_us_an

9、d_enjoy_it! 2．第二段——主體段落展開：短片內(nèi)容；放映時間、地點(diǎn)；歡迎對短片提出意見。 ②短片內(nèi)容：學(xué)校的發(fā)展 The movie is a documentary about the_development_of_our_school. ③放映時間、地點(diǎn) It will_be_shown in the library on June 9th. ④歡迎參加會后討論并對短片提出意見 Every one of you is be_welcome_to take part in the discussion held afterwards and give your co

10、mments. ⑤我們期待你的評論和反饋。 We are expecting_and_encouraging your comments and feedback. 3．第三段——表達(dá)期望 ⑥I have the confidence that you will have_a_great_time then. 【潤色升級】 1.句②通過增加定語從句來拓展要點(diǎn) The name of the movie is Growing Together, which_is_a_documentary _about_the_development_of_our_beloved_school.

11、 2．句③通過增加具體時間和地點(diǎn)拓展要點(diǎn) It_will_be_shown_on_the_fourth_floor_of_the_school_library_from_2：00_to_4：00_in_the_afternoon_on_June_9th. 3．句④和句⑤用非謂語動詞作狀語合并為一句，實(shí)現(xiàn)句式升級 Every_one_of_you_is_welcome_to_take_part_in_the_discussion_held_afterward s,_expected_and_encouraged_to_give_your_comments_and_feedback.

12、 【規(guī)范謄寫】 真題導(dǎo)練 (2017·北京高考)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記錄畢業(yè)前夕你們制作以“感恩母校”為主題的畢業(yè)紀(jì)念視頻的全過程。 注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。 提示詞：視頻video 　 　 　 　

13、 【審題謀篇】 體裁 圖畫類周記 人稱 第一人稱為主 時態(tài) 一般過去時為主 要點(diǎn) 1.激烈討論后決定制作視頻；2.準(zhǔn)備素材，采訪拍攝；3.后期制作；4.畢業(yè)典禮放映 【提綱要點(diǎn)】 1.第一段——點(diǎn)明主題 ①畢業(yè)在即，激烈討論后決定制作視頻 Graduation finally came. After a_heated_discussion,_we agreed on making_a_video. 2．第二段——主體內(nèi)容 ②準(zhǔn)備素材——采訪老師，拍攝學(xué)校生活 We interviewed

14、_our_teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life. ③后期制作——爭論保留什么 We debated over what_to_put_into_the_video. ④典禮放映 The video was played on_the_graduation_ceremony. ⑤發(fā)表感悟——很有成就感 That surely gave us a_great_sense_of_achievement. 【潤色升級】 1.將②句增加“花費(fèi)時間”細(xì)節(jié)，并升級為定語從句 Material_collecting

15、 took us a whole week, during_which_we_interviewed _our_teachers_and_took_pictures_of_every_aspect_of_school_life. 2．將③句增加細(xì)節(jié)，渲染討論及效果 We_debated_over_what_to_put_into_the_video._Some_compromises_were_unavoidable,_but_the_video_turned_out_perfect. 3．將④句升級用when狀語從句表達(dá)并增加“效果”細(xì)節(jié) Several days later, w

16、hen_the_video_was_played_on_the_graduation_ ceremony,_it_was_well_received. 【規(guī)范謄寫】 第1講　考場作文常見的錯誤及防范措施 一 考場作文常見的三類錯誤 考場作文常見的錯誤主要分為三類：詞匯類錯誤、語法類錯誤和漢語式英語。 ——　　(一)詞匯類錯誤　　—— 考試時，考生很容易出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫錯誤和詞形變化錯誤；而詞性不清和詞匯用法方面的錯誤主要還是受漢語思維的影響。其應(yīng)對措施是在備考時要多注意容易拼錯或容易出現(xiàn)詞形變化錯誤的單詞，真正用心去體會英語詞匯的詞性和運(yùn)用，對一些固定習(xí)語更不能想當(dāng)然地改

17、動。 1．單詞拼寫錯誤 誤：By the way, he's a senior High School student named Lihua from Tian Jin, china. 正：By the way, he's a senior high school student named Li Hua from Tianjin, China. 2.詞形變化錯誤 誤：People throwed cans, paper, bags and so on into the river water. 正：People threw cans, paper, bags and so on

18、 into the river water. 3．詞性不清錯誤 誤：Everyone in my family is like the dog. 正：Everyone in my family likes the dog. 4．詞匯用法錯誤 誤：He opened the light after he entered the room. 正：He turned on the light after he entered the room. 5．擅自改動習(xí)語 誤：Nowadays most parents attach much importance with education

19、. 正：Nowadays most parents attach much importance to education. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　即時練1 改正下列句子中的錯誤 ①Doing a part-time job always effects study. _________________________________________________________________ ②There is no doubt that keeping an English diary helps you a lot with writen English. ____

20、_____________________________________________________________ ③In my surprise, he has got the first prize. _________________________________________________________________ ④We must pay attention our pronunciation when we speak English. ___________________________________________________________

21、______ ⑤We are all entire responsible for our actions and for our reactions. _________________________________________________________________ 答案：①effects→affects　②writen→written?、跧n→To ④attention后加to　⑤entire→entirely ——　　(二)語法類錯誤　　—— 一個正確的句子除了用詞得當(dāng)外，語法也應(yīng)該準(zhǔn)確無誤。如果語法不正確，再好的構(gòu)思也難以正確地表達(dá)，語法類錯誤的多少會直接

22、影響作文的檔次。英語書面表達(dá)中語法類錯誤主要表現(xiàn)在： 1．時態(tài)錯誤 誤：When he came back, he found that his wife has gone to hed. 正：When he came back, he found that his wife had gone to bed. 2．語態(tài)錯誤 誤：Children who raise in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. 正：Children who are ra

23、ised in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. 3．主謂一致錯誤 誤：Some students like books that is written by Lu Xun. 正：Some students like books that are written by Lu Xun. 4.比較級使用錯誤 誤：With the development of transportation, the world seems to be getting

24、more and more smaller. 正：With the development of transportation, the world seems to be getting smaller and smaller. 5．非謂語動詞使用錯誤 誤：The teacher came into the lab, following by some students. 正：The teacher came into the lab, followed by some students. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　即時練2 改正下列句子中的錯誤 ①If it won't ra

25、in tomorrow, we'll go camping. __________________________________________________________________ ②Not only Tom but also I are tired of one examination after another. __________________________________________________________________ ③They think students should have their own time to study and i

26、t is more quieter at home. __________________________________________________________________ ④There are a lot of students stand in a queue to welcome the old soldier. __________________________________________________________________ ⑤She said she would pay a visit to Suzhou in the next month.

27、 __________________________________________________________________ 答案：①won't→doesn't　②are→am?、踡ore→much或去掉more?、躶tand→standing?、萑サ鬷n ——　　(三)漢語式英語　　—— 一般來說，英漢兩種語言既有許多相似之處，又有許多不同之處。在寫作時如果想當(dāng)然地去寫，會出現(xiàn)許多漢語式英語，其中主要包括： 1．純漢語式思維和漢語式語序 誤：At this school studying, I really very happy. 正：Studying at this

28、 school, I am really very happy. 2．句子成分殘缺 ①誤：There are many students don't support the project. 正：There are many students who don't support the project. ②誤：He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom. 正：He told me that all my classmates were sitting in the classroom. 3．句子粘連 誤：T

29、he old man has two sons, both of them work in the same company. 正：The old man has two sons, and both of them work in the same company. 正：The old man has two sons, both of whom work in the same company. 4．主謂搭配不當(dāng) 誤：He happened an accident yesterday. 正：An accident happened to him yesterday. 5．動賓搭

30、配不當(dāng) 誤：They are trying their best to improve their production. 正：They are trying their best to increase their production. 6．形容詞和名詞搭配不當(dāng) 誤：We walked a far way before planting trees. 正：We walked a long way before planting trees. 7．動詞和副詞搭配不當(dāng) 誤：My grandfather very likes black tea and has it every d

31、ay. 正：My grandfather likes black tea very much and has it every day. 8.介詞和賓語搭配不當(dāng) 誤：They will build a monument on memory of the national hero. 正：They will build a monument in memory of the national hero. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　即時練3 改正下列句子中的錯誤 ①We are impossible to finish the work in such a short time.

32、 __________________________________________________________________ ②It's known that the cost in big cities is very expensive. __________________________________________________________________ ③He came here to attend the meeting in car. __________________________________________________________

33、________ ④I haven't heard from your letter for a long time and I miss you very much. __________________________________________________________________ ⑤I have many collections of stamps, some of them are my favorite. __________________________________________________________________ 答案：①We are

34、 impossible→It is impossible for us ②expensive→high?、踚n→by?、躽our letter→you ⑤some前加and或them→which 二 防范出現(xiàn)錯誤的兩個措施 句子正確是作文得高分的關(guān)鍵和保證，考場上要避免上述低級錯誤，可采取以下兩個措施。 ——　　(一)確定主語　　—— 英語句子無論多長都有自己的主語(祈使句省略了主語you)。寫句子前首先要確定主語，其次要特別注意漢語與英語的區(qū)別。例如： 1．北京八月多雨。 誤：Beijing rains much in August. 正：It rains much i

35、n Beijing in August. 2．寫得很匆忙，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)書中滿是錯誤。 誤：Written in a hurry, we found the book full of mistakes. 正：Written in a hurry, the book was found full of mistakes (by us)． ——　　(二)確定謂語動詞　　—— 英語中沒有動詞就構(gòu)不成句子，但動詞千變?nèi)f化，稍不注意就會寫錯句子。在寫句子時應(yīng)特別注意以下幾個方面。 1．注意及物與不及物動詞的正確運(yùn)用 誤：The living standard of the people has

36、 raised in the past twenty years. 正：The living standard of the people has risen/has been raised in the past twenty years. 2．注意延續(xù)性與非延續(xù)性動詞的正確運(yùn)用 誤：His grandmother has died for fifteen years. 正：His grandmother has been dead for fifteen years. 3．注意一些不可用于被動語態(tài)的動詞或動詞短語 誤：That dictionary is belonged to

37、 the library. 正：That dictionary belongs to the library. 過關(guān)檢測(限時：20分鐘) Ⅰ.以下句子含有考生常犯的錯誤，請改正 1．It is high time that we do something to reduce traffic accidents. __________________________________________________________________ 答案：do→did或在do前加should 2．While having our dinner, the doorbell rang

38、. __________________________________________________________________ 答案：having前加we were或the doorbell rang→we heard the doorbell ringing 3．Recently our village has taken place great changes. __________________________________________________________________ 答案：Recently great changes have taken p

39、lace in our village. 4．Dr Smith, together with his wife, are to arrive on the evening flight. __________________________________________________________________ 答案：are→is 5．Eating at school is very convenient for students. __________________________________________________________________ 答案：I

40、t is very convenient for students to eat at school. 6．Would you please meet my uncle at the airport because this is his first time visit to the US? __________________________________________________________________ 答案：去掉time 7．The car hitted the old man and drived away. ________________________

41、__________________________________________ 答案：hitted→hit; drived→drove 8．I have two friends, their names are Tom and Jim. __________________________________________________________________ 答案：their→whose或their前加and 9．There are many students are planting trees on the hill. _____________________

42、_____________________________________________ 答案：去掉第二個are或在students后加who 10．At weekends, we would play basketball, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic. __________________________________________________________________ 答案：swimming→swim Ⅱ.下面的考生作文中共有10處語言錯誤，請改正 　假定你是李華，最近與好朋友Lucy吵架了，現(xiàn)在給外教Mel

43、inda寫一封郵件請求幫助。郵件內(nèi)容包含： 1．吵架的原因； 2．吵架后的心情； 3．請求Melinda給出解決辦法。 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 Dear Melinda， The reason why I am writting to you is because I quarreled with my friend Lucy and I need your help now. The quarrel was occurred when we were discussing whether we should go shopping a

44、t last weekend. Because the coming examination, she insisted on studying at school while I opposed strongly. After the incident, we have not chatted any more, caused me great depression. I am sincere sorry to see things going like this and I have been felt frustrated ever since. I really don't want

45、 to lose this friend. Could you please offer me some effective and practical advices? Looking forward to you reply. Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua 第一句：________________　第二句：________________ 第三句：________________　第四句：________________ 第五句：________________　第七句：________________ 第八句：________________ 答案

46、： 第一句：writting→writing; because→that 第二句：去掉was; 去掉at 第三句：Because后加of 第四句：caused→causing 第五句：sincere→sincerely; felt→feeling 第七句：advices→advice 第八句：you→your 強(qiáng)化特訓(xùn)11　書面表達(dá)(一)(限時：45分鐘) Ⅰ.按分類提示，改正下列句子中的唯一一處錯誤 題組1　連詞類錯誤 1．In addition, the climate here is very similar to that in the U

47、SA, thus there is no need for you to worry about it. __________________________________________________________________ 答案：In addition, the climate here is very similar to that in the USA, thu there is no need for you to worry about it. 2.Although it was not expensive, in order to buy me the g

48、ift, but my dad made every effort to earn the money. _________________________________________________________________ 答案：Although it was not expensive, in order to buy me the gift, / my dad made every effort to earn the money. 3.The reason is often because the pressure from their parents allow

49、s them almost no time for other activities. _________________________________________________________________ 答案：The reason is often the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. 4.Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use that we've learned in orde

50、r to have a better grasp of it. _________________________________________________________________ 答案：Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use we've learned in order to have a better grasp of it. 5.Around 540 million people are affected by second－h(huán)and smoke, that causes 100,000 death

51、s per year. _________________________________________________________________ 答案：Around 540 million people are affected by second－h(huán)and smoke, causes 100,000 deaths per year. 6.Our class is made up of 52 students, all of them are friendly and hard－working. _______________________________________

52、__________________________ 答案：Our class is made up of 52 students, all of them are friendly and hard－working.或Our class is made up of 52 students, all of are friendly and hard－working. 題組2　動詞類錯誤 7.Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confusing about the Chinese cus

53、toms, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details. _________________________________________________________________ 答案：Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and about the Chinese customs, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details. 8.Secondly, if I were

54、 you, I will bring some gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. _________________________________________________________________ 答案：Secondly, if I were you, I bring some gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. 9.What's more, in order to have much knowledge of Chinese

55、 culture, it of importance for you to be aware of the content, Tang poetry. _________________________________________________________________ 答案：What's more, in order to have much knowledge of Chinese culture, it of importance for you to be aware of the content, Tang poetry. 10.If you want to ha

56、ve a DNA detection, you have to pay for 125 pounds. _________________________________________________________________ 答案：If you want to have a DNA detection, you have to pay 125 pounds. 11.Only in this way they grow up to be independent and become truly successful. _____________________________

57、____________________________________ 答案：Only in this way they grow up to be independent and become truly successful. 12.Last of all, to promote the understanding and friendship between the students of the two countries, I hope you can do something, such as help us practice our spoken English. __

58、_______________________________________________________________ 答案：Last of all, to promote the understanding and friendship between the students of the two countries, I hope you can do something, such as us practice our spoken English. 13.Known that our library is going to buy books, I'd like to

59、give some suggestions. _________________________________________________________________ 答案： that our library is going to buy books, I'd like to give some suggestions. 14.Weather permits, we will have a picnic tomorrow. _________________________________________________________________ 答案：Weath

60、er ， we will have a picnic tomorrow. 15.We offer a wide range of holidays to choose. _________________________________________________________________ 答案：We offer a wide range of holidays to choose . 題組3　介詞、冠詞、代詞類錯誤 16.By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to e

61、xpress me clearly. _________________________________________________________________ 答案：By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express clearly. 17.Good opinions are worth sticking because they can benefit us all. ______________________________________________

62、___________________ 答案：Good opinions are worth sticking because they can benefit us all. 18.When I have different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority. _________________________________________________________________ 答案：When I have different opinion, I m

63、ay choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority. 19.Two years ago, our teacher offered us an answer for a difficult math problem in class. _________________________________________________________________ 答案：Two years ago, our teacher offered us an answer a difficult math problem

64、 in class. 20.The blackboard is in front of the classroom. _________________________________________________________________ 答案：The blackboard is in front of the classroom. 21.Nowadays there are still many poor students. They cannot afford to go to the school. _________________________________

65、________________________________ 答案：Nowadays there are still many poor students. They cannot afford to go to school. 22.She met and eventually married with a man considerably younger than herself. _________________________________________________________________ 答案：She met and eventually marr

66、ied a man considerably younger than herself. 23.Several years later, a word came that he had succeeded in solving the difficult problem. _________________________________________________________________ 答案：Several years later, word came that he had succeeded in solving the difficult problem. 24.Bicycles are environmentally friendly because it won't give off waste gas. _________________________________________________________________ 答案：Bicycles are environmentally friendly because won't