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1、第1講 合理恰當的細節(jié)添加
根據括號內的提示完成句子
1．However, it seems that people are not aware of the negative effects of mobile phones on communication. For_example,_many_people_begin_to_pay_less_attention _to_face-to-face_communication(比如，很多人越來越不重視面對面的交流)．
2．At that moment, I became the focus of the whole class an
2、d was_full_of_great _pride_and_confidence(充滿了自豪和自信)．
3．I suggest that the teacher should choose more English films, thus_making_ English_learning_more_interesting(這樣就使得我們的英語學習更加有趣)．
4．If_possible(如果可能的話), I'll take part in social activities so_that_I_can_ know_more_about_the_society(以便我能更多地了解這個社會)
3、．
5．I also helped children in the neighborhood with their English lessons. To_my_joy,_they_made_rapid_progress_and_their_parents_thought_highly_of_me(令我高興的是，他們進步很快而且他們的父母對我評價很高)．
6．Let's develop good habits of saving energy in our daily life and try_to_make_ more_contributions_to_our_environment(盡
4、力為我們的環(huán)境做出更多貢獻)．
在書面表達的“注意”中有明確規(guī)定：1.詞數80左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。這里既規(guī)定了詞數，又指出了充實文章的方法，即“適當增加細節(jié)”。適當添加細節(jié)的具體方法如下：
1．列舉具體的實例進行補充說明
①我要花一些時間和父母在一起。
I'll spend some time staying with my parents.
→I'll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework.
②我看到了一些不良行為。
I
5、found some bad behaviours.
→I found some bad behaviours. Some people scribbled on the wall; some played on the lawn and some threw rubbish everywhere.
③我是一個充滿活力的健康男孩，我非常喜歡體育運動。
I am a healthy boy full of energy and I like sports very much.
→I am a healthy boy full of energy and I like sports ver
6、y much. Whenever I have time, I'll go hiking or mountain climbing with my classmates.
2．增添相關的神態(tài)、動作、心理描寫以及背景渲染等內容
①我有時去村西的小河游泳。
I went swimming in the river in the west of the village now and then.
→Weather permitting, I went swimming in the river in the west of the village now and then, in which
7、 the water was very clear.
②旅行了一周后，他回到了家。
After a week's trip, he returned home.
→After a week's trip, he returned home, tired but happy.
3．增添相關的原因、結果、條件、讓步、手段、目的等內容
①我需要好好休息，我要做些閱讀。
I need a good rest. I'll do some reading.
→I need a good rest because I do feel tired after the hard work of
8、all these years. I'll do some reading for fun, as well as for knowledge.
②慈善募集的錢將送給急需的人。
The money raised for charity will be sent to those in great need.
→The money raised for charity will be sent to those in great need. This will not only help them through difficulties, but also give them warm
9、th and happiness.
③演講時要面帶微笑；要講慢些，講清楚。
You should wear a smile on your face when you speak. Besides, remember to speak slowly and clearly.
→You should wear a smile on your face when you speak, which will make you relaxed. Besides, remember to speak slowly and clearly so that you can leave a good i
10、mpression on the audience and judges.
4．結尾適當發(fā)揮，寫出個人感受、評價、愿望、倡議等
①Although I was very tired this summer holidays, I felt very happy for what I did.(個人感受)
盡管我這個暑假很累，但是我為我做的感到高興。
②I think such activities are necessary and meaningful.(評價)
我認為這樣的活動很有必要也很有意義。
③I sincerely hope my advice can be helpf
11、ul to you and that you can enjoy your new school life. (愿望)
我衷心希望我的建議能夠對你有所幫助，你能夠享受你在新學校的生活。
④As a student, it's our duty to protect our school environment and make it clean.(倡議)
作為一個學生，保護我們校園的環(huán)境并使之干凈是我們的職責。
根據提示，給下列短文增添合理恰當的細節(jié)
假設你是李華，你的美國網友Peter打算到中國留學，他寫信詢問怎樣才能受到中國高校的青睞。請你根據下列要點給對方寫一封回信：
1
12、．語言是道硬門檻；
2．適應能力很重要；
3．興趣愛好被看重。
注意：1.詞數80左右；
2．開頭語和結束語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。
Dear Peter，
In your letter you mentioned how to get the preference of Chinese universities. I believe there would be three main aspects to be considered.
Firstly, mastering Chinese is a basic need to live in China. 1.With_t
13、his_ability,_ you_can_communicate_with_native_speakers_easily_and_have_access_to_many_resources(有了這種能力，你與當地人交流就會很容易，而且還可以獲得很多資源). Besides, it is important to adapt to the new environment quickly. 2.The_sooner_you_ can_get_used_to_the_new_environment,_the_more_beneficial_it_will_become_to_you(你熟悉新環(huán)境越
14、早，好處就越多). Finally, personal interests and hobbies are also highly valued. 3.You_should_choose_a_major_that_you_want_to_take_up(你應該選擇一個想要從事的專業(yè)).
With all the strengths I mentioned above, 4.I_believe_you_can_overcome_all _the_difficulties_and_make_greater_progress_in_China(我相信在中國你能夠克服所有困難，取得更大的進步)．
Best wishes and good luck!
Yours,
Li Hua
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（江蘇專用）2021版新高考英語一輪復習 層級3 篇章結構 第1講 合理恰當的細節(jié)添加教學案 牛津譯林版
