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1、第二部分第二部分 高頻話題寫作指導(dǎo)高頻話題寫作指導(dǎo)九年級(jí)(全)九年級(jí)(全)Units 13-14學(xué)校生活學(xué)校生活寫作導(dǎo)圖寫作導(dǎo)圖 從廣西近五年從廣西近五年“學(xué)校生活學(xué)校生活”相關(guān)話題的相關(guān)話題的書面表達(dá)來(lái)看,其主要涉及的命題角度為:書面表達(dá)來(lái)看,其主要涉及的命題角度為:高中生活的暢想及打算和課余生活,如:高中生活的暢想及打算和課余生活,如:2014年河池以年河池以“My life in the high school”為為題,暢想自己的高中生活;題,暢想自己的高中生活;2013年玉林以年玉林以“豐富多彩的課余生活豐富多彩的課余生活”為話題進(jìn)行描述;為話題進(jìn)行描述;2011年貴港以書信的方式匯報(bào)
2、自己的學(xué)習(xí)情年貴港以書信的方式匯報(bào)自己的學(xué)習(xí)情況和高中生況和高中生活的打算。同時(shí),從全國(guó)近五年的命題活的打算。同時(shí),從全國(guó)近五年的命題方向可知,該話題還可從方向可知,該話題還可從“學(xué)校的體育學(xué)校的體育運(yùn)動(dòng)運(yùn)動(dòng)”、“學(xué)校的安全教育學(xué)校的安全教育”、“學(xué)校學(xué)校的校紀(jì)校規(guī)的校紀(jì)校規(guī)”等角度設(shè)題。以(等角度設(shè)題。以(2014年年河池)為例:河池)為例:peaceful, beautiful, quiet, be colorful with the flower and grass, wide, brightcampusOut-of-class activitiesMy life in the high
3、 schoolknowledge, kind, be strict with, care forhelpful, get along well, kindlearn by oneself, group work, work hardtake an active part in, colorful, wonderful, all kinds of, keep fitstudystudentsteachers亮點(diǎn)句型速成亮點(diǎn)句型速成常用句型常用句型:The homework is very difficult, but we must finish it.推薦句型推薦句型: The homewor
4、k is so difficult. But we must try to do it by ourselves and finish it on time. No matter how difficult the homework is, we must try to do it by ourselves and finish it on time.推薦句型:推薦句型:I feel terrible today for I failed again in the math exam.How terrible I feel today! I failed again in the math e
5、xam.常用句型:常用句型:I feel very sad today, because I didnt pass the math exam again.開(kāi)頭句開(kāi)頭句:1. My high school life will be colorful and wonderful.2. Hello, I am. in No.1 Middle School!中間句中間句:1. Its difficult but interesting. 2. I take the subway to school and it takes 25 minutes.3. The early bus takes him
6、to school. 4. The bus ride usually takes about 25 minutes. 5. Last weeks talent show in our class was a great success.6. Studying grammar is a great way to learn a language.7. I have learned a lot by that way.8. We have a lot of rules at my school/home. 9. You have given me so much help that I will
7、never forget.10. The school life is very busy and exciting. There are many activities in our school, such as. 結(jié)尾句:結(jié)尾句:1. Our school is clean and beautiful. There are many trees and flowers around.2. Our teachers have taught us a lot. They not only teach us how to learn, but also teach us how to be a
8、 useful person in society.典例剖析典例剖析(2014河池)河池) 三年的初中生活即將結(jié)束,你馬上就三年的初中生活即將結(jié)束,你馬上就要進(jìn)入高中學(xué)習(xí),請(qǐng)以要進(jìn)入高中學(xué)習(xí),請(qǐng)以My life in the high school 為題,根據(jù)下表所提供的信為題,根據(jù)下表所提供的信息和提示詞,用英語(yǔ)寫一篇小短文,暢息和提示詞,用英語(yǔ)寫一篇小短文,暢想自己未來(lái)的高中生活。想自己未來(lái)的高中生活。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)校園校園1. 校園(校園(campus)寧?kù)o而美麗,)寧?kù)o而美麗,教室寬敞明亮,是學(xué)習(xí)的好地方。教室寬敞明亮,是學(xué)習(xí)的好地方。老師老師2. 老師知識(shí)淵博,嚴(yán)格要求學(xué)生又老師知
9、識(shí)淵博,嚴(yán)格要求學(xué)生又關(guān)愛(ài)學(xué)生。關(guān)愛(ài)學(xué)生。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)同學(xué)同學(xué)3. 與同學(xué)友好相處與同學(xué)友好相處。學(xué)習(xí)學(xué)習(xí)4. 自主學(xué)習(xí)和積極參與小組學(xué)習(xí),自主學(xué)習(xí)和積極參與小組學(xué)習(xí),力爭(zhēng)學(xué)習(xí)取得進(jìn)步力爭(zhēng)學(xué)習(xí)取得進(jìn)步 。課外活動(dòng)課外活動(dòng) 5. 積極參加各種課外活動(dòng),保持身積極參加各種課外活動(dòng),保持身體健康。體健康。提示詞:提示詞: peaceful(寧?kù)o的),(寧?kù)o的),knowledgeable(知識(shí)淵博的),寬敞明(知識(shí)淵博的),寬敞明亮(亮(wide and bright), care for(關(guān)愛(ài)),(關(guān)愛(ài)),learn by oneself(自主學(xué)習(xí)),(自主學(xué)習(xí)),take an active
10、 part in(積極參加),(積極參加),group work(小組學(xué)習(xí)),(小組學(xué)習(xí)),out-of-class activities(課外活動(dòng))(課外活動(dòng))要求要求: 1. 短文必須陳述你的高中校園、老師、同學(xué)、短文必須陳述你的高中校園、老師、同學(xué)、學(xué)習(xí)和課外活動(dòng)五個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容,每個(gè)方面用學(xué)習(xí)和課外活動(dòng)五個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容,每個(gè)方面用23句話表述;句話表述; 2. 所給的提示詞都必須用上(可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮),所給的提示詞都必須用上(可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮),詞數(shù)詞數(shù)80左右(不含已給出句子的詞數(shù));左右(不含已給出句子的詞數(shù)); 3. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名和地名;短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名和地名;
11、 4. 語(yǔ)句通順,意思連貫,書寫規(guī)范。語(yǔ)句通順,意思連貫,書寫規(guī)范。My life in the high school My junior school will be over. And Im going to my high school in September. I think my high school life will be colorful and meaningful. The campus of my high school will_ Wonderful high school life! I cant wait!【審題指導(dǎo)審題指導(dǎo)】細(xì)讀所給的文字提示,提取信息:細(xì)讀
12、所給的文字提示,提取信息:1.1.短文必須陳述你的高中校園、老師、同學(xué)、短文必須陳述你的高中校園、老師、同學(xué)、學(xué)習(xí)和課外活動(dòng)五個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容,每個(gè)方面學(xué)習(xí)和課外活動(dòng)五個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容,每個(gè)方面用用2-32-3句話表述,寫作時(shí)用第一人稱。句話表述,寫作時(shí)用第一人稱。2.2.應(yīng)使用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。應(yīng)使用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。3.3.詞數(shù)詞數(shù)8080詞左右,不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名詞左右,不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名。和地名?!痉段狞c(diǎn)評(píng)范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】My life in the high school My junior school will be over. And Im going to m y h i g h s c
13、 h o o l i n September. I think my high school life will be colorful and meaningful.展望高中生展望高中生活會(huì)很有意義、活會(huì)很有意義、豐富多彩。豐富多彩。colorful和和meaningful充充分體現(xiàn)了作者分體現(xiàn)了作者對(duì)高中生活的對(duì)高中生活的憧憬。憧憬。 The campus of my high school will be peaceful and beautiful. The classroom will be wide and bright. It must be a good place to st
14、udy. The teachers will be know-ledgeable. They will be strict with the students but they care for them, too. I will get along well with分別從校園、分別從校園、老師、同學(xué)、學(xué)老師、同學(xué)、學(xué)習(xí)、課外活動(dòng)幾習(xí)、課外活動(dòng)幾個(gè)方面介紹自己個(gè)方面介紹自己的高中生活。介的高中生活。介紹 中 運(yùn) 用 了紹 中 運(yùn) 用 了peaceful and beautiful, wide and bright, be knowledgeable, my classmates. I wil
15、l learn by myself and take an active part in group work. And I will try my b e s t t o m a k e b i g progress. I will take part in all kinds of out-of-class activities and keep fit.get along well with, learn by myself , take an,active part in, make big progress, keep fit等短語(yǔ),等短語(yǔ),使文章的表現(xiàn)力使文章的表現(xiàn)力更加豐富。更加豐富。Wonderful high school life! I cant wait!總結(jié)全文,說(shuō)總結(jié)全文,說(shuō)明自己的高中生明自己的高中生活將會(huì)很精彩?;顚?huì)很精彩。