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1、佳作賞析佳作賞析議論文議論文現(xiàn)象說(shuō)明類(lèi)現(xiàn)象說(shuō)明類(lèi) (2011蘇州高三聯(lián)合調(diào)研)假如你是班長(zhǎng),看到班上有部分同學(xué)在完成作業(yè)時(shí),不是獨(dú)立完成而是經(jīng)常抄襲他人的作業(yè)。針對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象,你班召開(kāi)班會(huì)課進(jìn)行討論,請(qǐng)你以“My opinion on copying others homework”為題,在班會(huì)課上談?wù)勀阕约旱目捶?。上一?yè)上一頁(yè)主要原因1.作業(yè)量大,偏難;2.懶惰,對(duì)功課不感興趣;3.取悅老師和家長(zhǎng)。你的看法1.抄襲作業(yè)不誠(chéng)實(shí),違反校紀(jì),對(duì)自己不負(fù)責(zé)任;2.勤奮學(xué)習(xí),有困難請(qǐng)教同學(xué)和老師;3.自擬(至少1點(diǎn))。上一頁(yè)上一頁(yè)注意: 1.必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2詞數(shù):150左右。標(biāo)題與開(kāi)
2、頭已為你寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。My opinion on copying others homeworkToday we are going to have a discussion about copying others homework.Here Ill say something about it first._1話題特點(diǎn):這篇書(shū)面表達(dá)為議論文中的現(xiàn)象說(shuō)明類(lèi),試題中給出了一些信息,但不詳細(xì),寫(xiě)作時(shí)需要自己補(bǔ)充一定的內(nèi)容。根據(jù)現(xiàn)象說(shuō)明類(lèi)議論文的特點(diǎn)我們需要從已給出的信息中找出自己認(rèn)為最重要的因素并加以闡述。2寫(xiě)好這類(lèi)文章,需要注意:(1)現(xiàn)象說(shuō)明類(lèi)議論文的特點(diǎn)。強(qiáng)調(diào)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的客觀性,力求簡(jiǎn)
3、潔;圍繞主題闡述;多用書(shū)面語(yǔ),少用口頭語(yǔ)。(2)詳略得當(dāng)。本文重點(diǎn)應(yīng)寫(xiě)你認(rèn)為其中最重要的一個(gè)因素,并說(shuō)明原因。(3)適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié)以使文章顯得豐滿,充實(shí)恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B詞及過(guò)渡語(yǔ)使文章行文流暢,自然得體。上一頁(yè)上一頁(yè)3現(xiàn)象說(shuō)明類(lèi)議論文的寫(xiě)作模式可以歸納為: (1)陳述所給信息中所提出的某一現(xiàn)象。 (2)闡述不同的因素與這一現(xiàn)象的關(guān)系。(3)陳述其中一個(gè)因素與這一現(xiàn)象的密切聯(lián)系并說(shuō)明理由。(4)總結(jié)并提出建議。4常用的句式表達(dá):(1)開(kāi)頭:As we all know, .Recently .It is known to us all that .is being discussed hotly a
4、mong .上一頁(yè)上一頁(yè)(2)說(shuō)明與這一現(xiàn)象有關(guān)的各個(gè)因素:There are many factors that lead to .This is caused by many factors, and among them, the most important are .We can see that .are closely related to the phenomenon.(3)表達(dá)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)并說(shuō)明理由:While among all the elements,I personally think that.becauseIn my opinion,.(4)總結(jié)全文:From the
5、 above,we should.So we should. My opinion on copying others homeworkToday we are going to have a discussion about copying others homework.Here Ill say something about it first.We all know some of our classmates copy others homework instead of doing it independently/on their own/by themselves.On the
6、one hand,they do so because they have too much homework to do at home and at school,some of which is beyond them/too difficult for them.On the other hand,some of the students are so lazy that they are not intersted in their lessons at all.They dont work hard and have to copy others homework just to
7、finish the assignments and please their teachers and parents.上一頁(yè)上一頁(yè)In my opinion,its dishonest of them to copy others homework,which is against the school rules.Whats more,copying others homework means cheating themselves.As middle school students,we should be honest,put our heart into our studies a
8、nd finish our homework by ourselves instead of by copying.When we have any difficulties/problems with our homework,we can turn to our teachers and classmates for help.Only in this way can we make progress and take reponsibility for our future.文章開(kāi)篇便點(diǎn)出了本文要說(shuō)明的現(xiàn)象“抄襲他人作業(yè)”,接下來(lái)說(shuō)明產(chǎn)生這一現(xiàn)象的原因?!癷nstead of doing
9、 it by themselves”,“on the other hand” 以及“so that”等句式的正確運(yùn)用為文章增添了亮點(diǎn)。最后一段中作者表達(dá)了自己對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象的看法,并提出了合理的建議,不僅對(duì)上文的現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行了充實(shí),而且將文章的內(nèi)容進(jìn)一步升華,使全文一氣呵成,渾然一體。(1) 短語(yǔ)類(lèi):have a disussion about.,instead of,on their own,be interested in,have difficulties/problems with.,turn to sb.for help,make progress上一頁(yè)上一頁(yè)(2) 句子類(lèi):狀語(yǔ)從句:The
10、y do so because.Some of the students are so lazy that.When we have any.,we can turn to.定語(yǔ)從句:.,which is against the school rule.倒裝句:Only in this way can we make progress.其他句式:They dont work hard and have to copy.just to finish the.As middle school students,we should.(3) 過(guò)渡語(yǔ):in my opinion,on the one h
11、and.on the other hand習(xí)作過(guò)關(guān)據(jù)一項(xiàng)調(diào)查顯示,有據(jù)一項(xiàng)調(diào)查顯示,有85.8%85.8%的中學(xué)生說(shuō)自己的字跡的中學(xué)生說(shuō)自己的字跡不好看,而他們又不想改善字跡,其理由有很大差不好看,而他們又不想改善字跡,其理由有很大差別。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖寫(xiě)一篇?jiǎng)e。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖寫(xiě)一篇120120個(gè)詞左右的短文,說(shuō)明該個(gè)詞左右的短文,說(shuō)明該現(xiàn)象并發(fā)表自己的看法,開(kāi)頭已給出。現(xiàn)象并發(fā)表自己的看法,開(kāi)頭已給出。上一頁(yè)上一頁(yè)上一頁(yè)上一頁(yè)_【參考范文】 Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, teachers, students and their
12、parents are paying less and less attention to handwriting.According to a recent survey, about 85.8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor.Yet for various reasons, many students dont want to improve their handwriting.51.5 percent of the students think that they can jus
13、t use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting, and 32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practise.10.9 percent think that practising handwriting is useless.上一頁(yè)上一頁(yè)As the saying goes, writing style shows the man.Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students.Therefore, in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.