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1、第三部分 重難題型突破 題型六題型六 書(shū)面表達(dá)書(shū)面表達(dá)一、一篇優(yōu)秀作文必須要符合下列條件：一、一篇優(yōu)秀作文必須要符合下列條件：1. 包含所有要點(diǎn)；包含所有要點(diǎn)；2. 圍繞內(nèi)容適當(dāng)發(fā)揮圍繞內(nèi)容適當(dāng)發(fā)揮(有新意、亮點(diǎn)有新意、亮點(diǎn))，內(nèi)容具體、豐富，內(nèi)容具體、豐富(不能限不能限于回答問(wèn)題或逐句翻譯于回答問(wèn)題或逐句翻譯)；3. 應(yīng)用豐富的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯應(yīng)用豐富的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯;4. 用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚；用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚；5. 沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。解題方法與技巧解題方法與技巧二、學(xué)生答題過(guò)程中常出現(xiàn)的疏漏：二、學(xué)生答題過(guò)程中常出現(xiàn)的疏漏：1.審題不清導(dǎo)致
2、人稱(chēng)審題不清導(dǎo)致人稱(chēng)/時(shí)態(tài)使用錯(cuò)誤；時(shí)態(tài)使用錯(cuò)誤；2.要點(diǎn)不全，要點(diǎn)遺漏或沒(méi)有按照要求增加要點(diǎn)或細(xì)節(jié)；要點(diǎn)不全，要點(diǎn)遺漏或沒(méi)有按照要求增加要點(diǎn)或細(xì)節(jié)；3.不會(huì)分段和使用連詞，結(jié)構(gòu)混亂或語(yǔ)句不連貫；不會(huì)分段和使用連詞，結(jié)構(gòu)混亂或語(yǔ)句不連貫；4.受漢語(yǔ)習(xí)慣的影響，文章語(yǔ)句中式化，表達(dá)有誤；受漢語(yǔ)習(xí)慣的影響，文章語(yǔ)句中式化，表達(dá)有誤；5.書(shū)面不整潔，不打草稿。書(shū)面不整潔，不打草稿。 三、解題方法與技巧：三、解題方法與技巧：1. 學(xué)會(huì)審題。認(rèn)真審題，明確題目要求后才能確定文章主題、學(xué)會(huì)審題。認(rèn)真審題，明確題目要求后才能確定文章主題、體裁、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)等。然后仔細(xì)閱讀要點(diǎn)提示，構(gòu)思語(yǔ)境，拓體裁、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)
3、等。然后仔細(xì)閱讀要點(diǎn)提示，構(gòu)思語(yǔ)境，拓展要點(diǎn)提示。展要點(diǎn)提示。2. 謀篇布局。在草稿紙上羅列要點(diǎn)及所拓展內(nèi)容并列出提綱，謀篇布局。在草稿紙上羅列要點(diǎn)及所拓展內(nèi)容并列出提綱，布置好文章結(jié)構(gòu)和段落。羅列過(guò)程中不僅要注意時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)及布置好文章結(jié)構(gòu)和段落。羅列過(guò)程中不僅要注意時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)及短語(yǔ)句型等的正確使用，更要注意拓展內(nèi)容的準(zhǔn)確性。短語(yǔ)句型等的正確使用，更要注意拓展內(nèi)容的準(zhǔn)確性。 3. 片段描寫(xiě)。按照規(guī)劃好的文章結(jié)構(gòu)和羅列的要點(diǎn)組織語(yǔ)言，片段描寫(xiě)。按照規(guī)劃好的文章結(jié)構(gòu)和羅列的要點(diǎn)組織語(yǔ)言，完成文章。寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中要注意書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)流暢連貫，完成文章。寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中要注意書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)流暢連貫，盡量
4、用最熟悉的、最有把握的詞匯和基本句型，如果遇到不盡量用最熟悉的、最有把握的詞匯和基本句型，如果遇到不會(huì)的詞匯，可以找同類(lèi)詞或短語(yǔ)替換。同時(shí)要符合地道的英會(huì)的詞匯，可以找同類(lèi)詞或短語(yǔ)替換。同時(shí)要符合地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣，避免漢式英語(yǔ)，并注意詞形和時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)的變化。語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣，避免漢式英語(yǔ)，并注意詞形和時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)的變化。 4. 語(yǔ)句提升。巧用連詞，使文章行文更加流暢，邏輯更加清晰。語(yǔ)句提升。巧用連詞，使文章行文更加流暢，邏輯更加清晰。如表達(dá)轉(zhuǎn)折可用如表達(dá)轉(zhuǎn)折可用but, however, otherwise等；表達(dá)遞進(jìn)可用等；表達(dá)遞進(jìn)可用and, besides, whats more等；表達(dá)因果可用等
5、；表達(dá)因果可用so, therefore, as a result等；表達(dá)對(duì)比可用等；表達(dá)對(duì)比可用at the same time, meanwhile， while等；表等；表達(dá)讓步可用達(dá)讓步可用though, although, even if等。等。5. 細(xì)心檢查。在寫(xiě)好短文后，從題目要求上要對(duì)全文進(jìn)行檢查細(xì)心檢查。在寫(xiě)好短文后，從題目要求上要對(duì)全文進(jìn)行檢查和修改。要注意字?jǐn)?shù)是否符合要求；內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)是否全面；語(yǔ)言和修改。要注意字?jǐn)?shù)是否符合要求；內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)是否全面；語(yǔ)言表達(dá)上是否有錯(cuò)誤，大到主謂一致、時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)、習(xí)慣用法，小表達(dá)上是否有錯(cuò)誤，大到主謂一致、時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)、習(xí)慣用法，小到單詞拼寫(xiě)、大小寫(xiě)
6、及標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)，都要細(xì)心檢查。到單詞拼寫(xiě)、大小寫(xiě)及標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)，都要細(xì)心檢查。類(lèi)別一類(lèi)別一 寫(xiě)人敘事寫(xiě)人敘事（5年年4考）考） 寫(xiě)人敘事是近寫(xiě)人敘事是近5年云南中考書(shū)面表達(dá)的高頻命題點(diǎn)，共考查了年云南中考書(shū)面表達(dá)的高頻命題點(diǎn)，共考查了4次，考查角度包括：敘述自己特別的一天、初中的學(xué)習(xí)生活、與次，考查角度包括：敘述自己特別的一天、初中的學(xué)習(xí)生活、與某人一起成長(zhǎng)、自己的談話(huà)交流、快樂(lè)時(shí)光等等。文章大多以一某人一起成長(zhǎng)、自己的談話(huà)交流、快樂(lè)時(shí)光等等。文章大多以一般過(guò)去時(shí)和第一人稱(chēng)為主。一般會(huì)給出一段中文背景提示和般過(guò)去時(shí)和第一人稱(chēng)為主。一般會(huì)給出一段中文背景提示和2點(diǎn)寫(xiě)點(diǎn)寫(xiě)作要求。作要求。命題探究類(lèi)別剖析【
7、開(kāi)頭句】【開(kāi)頭句】1. At the age of six, he/she began to.2. I will never forget.3. I still remember the day.4. The most interesting thing is that.5. What I admire most about her is.6. My/His/Her name is.積累與應(yīng)用【中間句】【中間句】7. He/She is +基數(shù)詞基數(shù)詞+year (s) old. He/She was born in/on+時(shí)間時(shí)間/地地點(diǎn)點(diǎn).8. He/She comes/is from+地
8、點(diǎn)名詞地點(diǎn)名詞.9. He/She is 1.70 meters tall and weighs 52 kilos.10. He/She has long/black.(修飾詞修飾詞)+hair(外貌特征外貌特征).11. He/She is outgoing/friendly.(性格特征性格特征). 12. He/She likes/loves/prefers/is interested in/is good at playing basketball.(興趣愛(ài)好興趣愛(ài)好).【結(jié)尾句】【結(jié)尾句】13. You cant imagine how happy I am!14. I kept pr
9、acticing and never gave up.15. What an unforgettable thing it is in my life!16. Thank you very much for everything youve done for me.17. I have never expressed my thanks and respect to you. 18. I think we should do our best to help people who need help.My English Teacher提示：親愛(ài)的同學(xué)們，三年的初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，你們即將
10、提示：親愛(ài)的同學(xué)們，三年的初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，你們即將離開(kāi)三年來(lái)朝夕相處并給予你無(wú)盡關(guān)愛(ài)的老師們。請(qǐng)以離開(kāi)三年來(lái)朝夕相處并給予你無(wú)盡關(guān)愛(ài)的老師們。請(qǐng)以“My English Teacher”為題寫(xiě)一篇文章。為題寫(xiě)一篇文章。要求：要求：1.語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；個(gè)；2.文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。典例剖析【審題指導(dǎo)】【審題指導(dǎo)】1. 文體：本文要求介紹自己的英語(yǔ)老師，文體為說(shuō)明文；文體：本文要求介紹自己的英語(yǔ)老師，文體為說(shuō)明文；2. 時(shí)態(tài)：回憶過(guò)去的某件事情用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)
11、，介紹日常的生活時(shí)態(tài)：回憶過(guò)去的某件事情用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，介紹日常的生活及工作用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；及工作用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；3. 人稱(chēng)：介紹老師應(yīng)用第三人稱(chēng)；人稱(chēng)：介紹老師應(yīng)用第三人稱(chēng)；4. 寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山：點(diǎn)出我的英語(yǔ)老師是誰(shuí)；介紹具體寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山：點(diǎn)出我的英語(yǔ)老師是誰(shuí)；介紹具體情況：年齡、外貌、愛(ài)好、工作狀態(tài)等；對(duì)老師的評(píng)價(jià)。情況：年齡、外貌、愛(ài)好、工作狀態(tài)等；對(duì)老師的評(píng)價(jià)?！緦?xiě)作導(dǎo)圖寫(xiě)作導(dǎo)圖】【高分范文】【高分范文】My English TeacherI have met many excellent teachers in my junior school. One of them is
12、my English teacher.Her name is Li Mei. She is thirtyfive years old. She is with two big eyes and long curly hair. She has many hobbies, such as reading, singing, dancing, playing sports and so on. Shesfriendly and warm-hearted. She often shows us how to learn English well. She asks us to listen, rea
13、d, speak and write. She even lends English books to us. If we have difficulty in understanding, we can go and ask her. All in all, she is always happy to help us. She is not only a good teacher, but also a friend and a mother. 第第1篇篇(2017重慶重慶A卷改編卷改編)The Story Behind My Photos提示：在過(guò)去的日子里，我們?cè)?jīng)歡笑，也曾經(jīng)哭泣，照
14、片或?qū)⑻崾荆涸谶^(guò)去的日子里，我們?cè)?jīng)歡笑，也曾經(jīng)哭泣，照片或?qū)⑦@些精彩定格，或勾起你對(duì)往事的回憶。請(qǐng)以這些精彩定格，或勾起你對(duì)往事的回憶。請(qǐng)以“The Story Behind My Photos”為題，為題， 寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于照片背后故事的文寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于照片背后故事的文章章。要求：要求：1.語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；個(gè)；2.文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。寫(xiě)作練兵【高分范文】【高分范文】The Story Behind My PhotosThis is a photo that is v
15、ery special to me. In the photo, I was 10 years old. Look, we were playing ping-pong happily.I used to be a ping-pong player. My dad trained me so hard, though he was tired after a days work. Once, I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up. The next morning, I found a piece of paper.
16、It said, “Never give up, dear. I am proud of you！”Now, I spend less time playing ping-pong because of my busy study. But I will never forget what my father told me. How lucky I am to be his daughter!第第2篇篇(2017葫蘆島改編葫蘆島改編)A Happy Thing提示：快樂(lè)無(wú)處不在，在緊張的學(xué)習(xí)生活中，一定會(huì)有許多讓你快提示：快樂(lè)無(wú)處不在，在緊張的學(xué)習(xí)生活中，一定會(huì)有許多讓你快樂(lè)的事情。請(qǐng)以樂(lè)的
17、事情。請(qǐng)以“A Happy Thing”為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，講為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，講述一件讓你快樂(lè)的事。述一件讓你快樂(lè)的事。要求：要求：1.語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；個(gè)；2.文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)?！靖叻址段摹俊靖叻址段摹緼 Happy ThingI like traveling very much. Traveling can make me happy.Last summer vacation, my father took me to Hangzhou on vaca
18、tion. We enjoyed the beautiful scenery every day.When we walked along the West Lake, I felt very relaxed. My father encouraged me to talk with foreigners in English. I told something about China to foreigners. I felt the life was very beautiful.After traveling, I am more and more interested in Engli
19、sh. Traveling not only helps me improve my English but also brings me happiness.第第3篇篇Growing up with Difficulties提示：在初中的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中，每個(gè)人都會(huì)遇到困難。請(qǐng)回顧這提示：在初中的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中，每個(gè)人都會(huì)遇到困難。請(qǐng)回顧這3年的初中生活，以年的初中生活，以“Growing up with Difficulties”為題寫(xiě)一為題寫(xiě)一篇文章，談?wù)勀阍趯W(xué)習(xí)、交友或與家長(zhǎng)溝通過(guò)程中所遇到篇文章，談?wù)勀阍趯W(xué)習(xí)、交友或與家長(zhǎng)溝通過(guò)程中所遇到過(guò)的困難以及解決方法，并談?wù)勀憬鉀Q困難之后的感受。過(guò)
20、的困難以及解決方法，并談?wù)勀憬鉀Q困難之后的感受。要求：要求：1.語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；個(gè)；2文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。【高分范文】【高分范文】Growing up with Difficulties Its natural for all of us to meet different kinds of difficulties and problems when we grow up. In school, I have to take a lot of lessons
21、. Some are interesting while some are boring. During my growing time, a lot of trouble worried me. Thats awful and makes me blue. Although I met with a lot of failure, I still have a lot of gains. I can make friends, learn a number of useful thingsto be kind, friendly. Difficulties play an important
22、 role in my life and make my life colorful. Its common for us to hold a positive attitude to such difficulties.第第4篇篇My Tour Study to _提示：近年以來(lái)，許多學(xué)校開(kāi)展了研學(xué)旅行，它拓展了我們的視野提示：近年以來(lái)，許多學(xué)校開(kāi)展了研學(xué)旅行，它拓展了我們的視野并并豐富了我們的知識(shí)，使我們進(jìn)一步了解社會(huì)、親近自然，豐富了我們的知識(shí)，使我們進(jìn)一步了解社會(huì)、親近自然，從而獲得不同于學(xué)校課堂的生活體驗(yàn)。請(qǐng)以從而獲得不同于學(xué)校課堂的生活體驗(yàn)。請(qǐng)以“My Tour Study to
23、_”為題，敘述你們班級(jí)或?qū)W校研學(xué)旅行的一次為題，敘述你們班級(jí)或?qū)W校研學(xué)旅行的一次經(jīng)歷。經(jīng)歷。要求：要求：1.語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；個(gè)；2文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)?！靖叻址段摹俊靖叻址段摹縈y Tour Study to the City Science Museum In March, my classmates and I had a tour study to the City Science Museum. It was sunny, so we rode our
24、bikes to get there. In the museum, we saw many kinds of inventions such as robots, 3D printers and some ancient things. We also experienced VR technology and space life. We took lots of photos with some dinosaurs and robots. The tour study was very exciting for me. I think I have learned a lot of kn
25、owledge on science and technology outside the classroom. If I have a chance, I will go there again.類(lèi)別二做法建議類(lèi)別二做法建議 近近5年云南中考未直接考查做法建議類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)，但其作為全年云南中考未直接考查做法建議類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)，但其作為全國(guó)書(shū)面表達(dá)的?？冀嵌戎唬忌杂斜匾莆?。國(guó)書(shū)面表達(dá)的?？冀嵌戎?，考生仍有必要掌握?！鹃_(kāi)頭句】【開(kāi)頭句】1. There are some suggestions that.2. If you follow these ways, I believe you c
26、an.3. There is some useful advice about.命題探究積累與應(yīng)用【中間句】【中間句】4. In my opinion, we should.5. Youd better.6. You arent supposed to. 7. Lets do.8. I suggest that you have a rest.9. I totally agree with you.10. Im afraid you cant give it up.【結(jié)尾句】【結(jié)尾句】11. I believe we can .12. I wish you can obey the traff
27、ic rules.13. Please take action!How to Behave Well提示：中國(guó)是一個(gè)禮儀之邦，作為青少年，我們更應(yīng)該在平常的生提示：中國(guó)是一個(gè)禮儀之邦，作為青少年，我們更應(yīng)該在平常的生活中注意自己的行為舉止。假設(shè)你們學(xué)校正在舉辦以活中注意自己的行為舉止。假設(shè)你們學(xué)校正在舉辦以“How to Behave Well”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示，用英語(yǔ)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇參賽短文。寫(xiě)一篇參賽短文。要求：要求：1.語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；個(gè)；2文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名
28、、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。典例剖析(2017甘南州改編甘南州改編)【審題指導(dǎo)】【審題指導(dǎo)】1. 文體：寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于如何舉止文明的參賽短文，屬于說(shuō)明文；文體：寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于如何舉止文明的參賽短文，屬于說(shuō)明文；2. 時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；3. 人稱(chēng)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)主要使用第一人稱(chēng)；人稱(chēng)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)主要使用第一人稱(chēng)；4. 寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)： 說(shuō)明原因；說(shuō)明原因；我們應(yīng)該怎么做，包括三點(diǎn)；我們應(yīng)該怎么做，包括三點(diǎn)； 舉止文明的影響。舉止文明的影響?！緦?xiě)作導(dǎo)圖寫(xiě)作導(dǎo)圖】【高分范文】【高分范文】How to Behave WellIn order to be
29、 civilized students, its very necessary that we should behave well at school.First of all, we are supposed to keep the school environment clean and do not throw the rubbish everywhere. Secondly, we should develop good habits, such as washing ourhands and clothes frequently. Besides, we should make f
30、riends with other students, and we should be polite and become helpful to other students. Last but not the least, school is our second home, so it is our duty to keep it clean and beautiful.So, lets behave well and be civilized students from now on, then our school will be a better place.第第5篇篇How to
31、 Be a Good Student?提示：某班英語(yǔ)課上，就提示：某班英語(yǔ)課上，就“爭(zhēng)當(dāng)中華好少年?duì)幃?dāng)中華好少年”進(jìn)行小組交流活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)進(jìn)行小組交流活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自身情況，以你結(jié)合自身情況，以“How to Be a Good Student？”為題，為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要求：要求：1. 語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；個(gè)；2. 文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。寫(xiě)作練兵【高分范文】【高分范文】How to Be a Good Student?In my opinion，t
32、here are lots of things we should do to become a good student. Firstly, live a healthy life. We should have a balanced diet and do more exercise. Secondly, form a good study habit. We should listen to the teacher carefully, finish homework on time, and never cheat in tests. Thirdly, be a good person
33、 in public. Dont go swimming alone without permission. Taking the mobile phone to school is also forbidden. Dont fight with others. Last but not least, we should be polite to the teachers and get on well with our classmates. 第第6篇篇Lets Build a Green City Together提示：提示：“美麗云南是我家，人人都要愛(ài)護(hù)她。美麗云南是我家，人人都要愛(ài)護(hù)她
34、?！薄皠?chuàng)衛(wèi)活動(dòng)創(chuàng)衛(wèi)活動(dòng)”使得我們使得我們的街道更干凈，河水更清澈的街道更干凈，河水更清澈作為昆明的一份子，我們需作為昆明的一份子，我們需要身體力行，請(qǐng)以要身體力行，請(qǐng)以“Lets Build a Green City Together”為題為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要求：要求：1. 語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；個(gè)；2. 文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)?！靖叻址段摹俊靖叻址段摹縇ets Build a Green City Together As a middle sch
35、ool student of Kunming, its our duty to help build a green city. First of all, wherever we go, we should throw rubbish into dustbins to keep our city clean and tidy, and we shouldnt spit everywhere. Last but not least, we should plant as many trees as possible to protect our citys natural environmen
36、t and make our city more beautiful. In my opinion, a green city is the key to a healthy life. If everyone makes a contribution to build a green city, Kunming will become a better place to live in. Lets take action now!第第7篇篇Lets Go Green提示：假設(shè)你校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部和環(huán)保俱樂(lè)部正聯(lián)合舉辦一場(chǎng)征文活動(dòng)提示：假設(shè)你校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部和環(huán)保俱樂(lè)部正聯(lián)合舉辦一場(chǎng)征文活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括我
37、們?cè)谏钪性撟龅暮筒辉撟龅模热绻?jié)約水電，內(nèi)容包括我們?cè)谏钪性撟龅暮筒辉撟龅模热绻?jié)約水電，不亂扔垃圾，不使用塑料袋等，請(qǐng)以，不亂扔垃圾，不使用塑料袋等，請(qǐng)以“Lets Go Green”為為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要求：要求：1.語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；個(gè)；2文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。【高分范文高分范文】Lets Go Green Its everyones duty to protect the environment. We can do somethi
38、ng to make our earth more beautiful. Firstly，make sure that lights are turned off when they are not used. It can help us save electricity. Secondly, it is also important to save water. We should form the habit of turning off the tap after it is used. Whats more, we should save paper by using both si
39、des of it. Remember not to litter. And try to stop using plastic bags which are harmful to the environment.Going green is very important. Lets work together to create a greener world from now on.類(lèi)別三夢(mèng)想計(jì)劃類(lèi)別三夢(mèng)想計(jì)劃(5年年1考考) 近近5年云南中考針對(duì)夢(mèng)想計(jì)劃類(lèi)作文共考查年云南中考針對(duì)夢(mèng)想計(jì)劃類(lèi)作文共考查1次，為：次，為：2014省卷省卷 “My Plan for the Coming Sch
40、ool Year”。介紹對(duì)未來(lái)的暢想，要求。介紹對(duì)未來(lái)的暢想，要求學(xué)生根據(jù)自己的想法寫(xiě)一篇計(jì)劃類(lèi)的作文。學(xué)生根據(jù)自己的想法寫(xiě)一篇計(jì)劃類(lèi)的作文。積累與運(yùn)用積累與運(yùn)用)【開(kāi)頭句】【開(kāi)頭句】1I believe my life in future will be.2He/She wants to be .when he/she grows up.3If you want to make your dream come true，you should.命題探究【中間句】【中間句】4. First, .second, .finally, .5. We should/are supposed to.6.
41、Everyone can .7. intend/plan to do8. be going to do9. decide to do10. determine to do11. make up ones mind to do12. How time flies!13. If we can do it as the rules, our dream will come true sooner or later.【結(jié)尾句】【結(jié)尾句】14. When I grow up, I want to .15. Im looking forward to .16. I hope we can .17. Whe
42、re theres a will, theres a way.Our Dreams提示：上周五，你們班舉行了我們的夢(mèng)想的主題班會(huì)，在班會(huì)提示：上周五，你們班舉行了我們的夢(mèng)想的主題班會(huì)，在班會(huì)上，同學(xué)們踴躍發(fā)言，有的想成為一名警察，有的想當(dāng)醫(yī)生上，同學(xué)們踴躍發(fā)言，有的想成為一名警察，有的想當(dāng)醫(yī)生。請(qǐng)以。請(qǐng)以“Our Dreams”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要求：要求：1.語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；個(gè)；2文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。典例剖析【審題指導(dǎo)】【審題指導(dǎo)】
43、1. 文體：本文為介紹班里同學(xué)的夢(mèng)想，屬于說(shuō)明文；文體：本文為介紹班里同學(xué)的夢(mèng)想，屬于說(shuō)明文；2. 時(shí)態(tài)：文章主體部分為未來(lái)的事情，用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)；時(shí)態(tài)：文章主體部分為未來(lái)的事情，用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)；3. 人稱(chēng)：介紹班里不同人的夢(mèng)想，用第三人稱(chēng)，介紹自己的夢(mèng)想用人稱(chēng)：介紹班里不同人的夢(mèng)想，用第三人稱(chēng)，介紹自己的夢(mèng)想用第一人稱(chēng)；第一人稱(chēng)；4. 寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)： 介紹召開(kāi)了班會(huì)；介紹召開(kāi)了班會(huì)； 分別介紹了分別介紹了3位同學(xué)及自己的夢(mèng)想；位同學(xué)及自己的夢(mèng)想；總結(jié)：為了夢(mèng)想努力學(xué)習(xí)?？偨Y(jié)：為了夢(mèng)想努力學(xué)習(xí)?！緦?xiě)作導(dǎo)圖寫(xiě)作導(dǎo)圖】【高分范文】【高分范文】Our Dreams Last Friday, o
44、ur class held a class meeting about our dreams. Here is my report. Liu Wei wants to be a teacher when he grows up. He is going to study education. Li Mings dream is to be a policeman. He does sports every day. Su Juan wants to be a movie star. She is going to take acting lessons. And I want to be a
45、doctor who can save many lives. Im sure our dreams will come true one day. So we must study hard for our dreams. 第第8篇篇(2017株洲改編株洲改編)My Plan for the Belt and Road提示：假定你是李華，暑假來(lái)自提示：假定你是李華，暑假來(lái)自“一帶一路一帶一路”國(guó)家的中學(xué)生將參加國(guó)家的中學(xué)生將參加夏令營(yíng)，你想為夏令營(yíng)工作，從清潔工、廚師、英語(yǔ)翻譯和夏令營(yíng)，你想為夏令營(yíng)工作，從清潔工、廚師、英語(yǔ)翻譯和對(duì)外漢語(yǔ)老師這四個(gè)職位中，你選擇哪一個(gè)？請(qǐng)以對(duì)外漢語(yǔ)老師這四個(gè)
46、職位中，你選擇哪一個(gè)？請(qǐng)以“My Plan for the Belt and Road”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要求：要求：1.語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；個(gè)；2文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。寫(xiě)作練兵【高分范文】【高分范文】My Plan for the Belt and Road Id like to join the Belt and Road and I want to work for the summer camp. I want to be a co
47、ok，because I want to cook delicious food for them and make them know more about our food culture. I believe I can make many kinds of food，such as dumplings，noodles and so on. If I become a member of the summer camp, I will prepare delicious food carefully and keep the food clean and safe every day.
48、I will try my best to let them learn more about Chinese food culture. I hope I can succeed in becoming a member in summer camp.第第9篇篇My Dream Job提示：有一份理想的職業(yè)是每個(gè)人夢(mèng)寐以求的，比如教師、醫(yī)生、提示：有一份理想的職業(yè)是每個(gè)人夢(mèng)寐以求的，比如教師、醫(yī)生、售票員等等，請(qǐng)以售票員等等，請(qǐng)以“My Dream Job”為題，談?wù)勀銈兊睦硐霝轭}，談?wù)勀銈兊睦硐肼殬I(yè)。職業(yè)。要求：要求：1.語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔
49、，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；個(gè)；2文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)?！靖叻址段摹俊靖叻址段摹縈y Dream Job Everyone has his dream. My dream is to become a doctor.My friends asked me why Id like to be a doctor. When I was a small boy I had a high fever once. My parents sent me to the hospital but the doctors could do nothing f
50、or me. Then my parents heard there was a very good doctor in another town. So they took me there in no time. Luckily, I was saved in the end. From then on, I decided to become a doctor. I know it is not easy to be a doctor. But Ill try my best to study. I am sure my dream will come true.類(lèi)別四說(shuō)明介紹類(lèi)別四說(shuō)明
51、介紹 近近5年云南中考針對(duì)說(shuō)明介紹類(lèi)作文未直接設(shè)題，但其為全國(guó)年云南中考針對(duì)說(shuō)明介紹類(lèi)作文未直接設(shè)題，但其為全國(guó)中考書(shū)面表達(dá)的?？冀嵌?，考生仍需掌握。中考書(shū)面表達(dá)的?？冀嵌?，考生仍需掌握?！鹃_(kāi)頭句】【開(kāi)頭句】1. As far as I know, it .2. Studies show that.3. I used to .4. Nowadays, more and more people pay more attention to.5. Id like to tell you something about.6. Everything has two sides.It has both a
52、dvantages and disadvantages.命題探究【中間句】【中間句】7. Nowadays, it is generally/commonly believed that., but I wonder that.8. My favorite season is.9. Let me introduce. 10. One of the most important things is.11. Man is now facing a big problem. which is becoming more and more serious.【結(jié)尾句】【結(jié)尾句】12. People us
53、ed to.however, things are quite different today.13. In short, we must work hard to make the world a better place.My Favorite T-shirt提示：每一個(gè)人都有自己喜歡的衣服，不同的款式和不同的顏色，提示：每一個(gè)人都有自己喜歡的衣服，不同的款式和不同的顏色，能讓一個(gè)人看起來(lái)有不同的風(fēng)格。請(qǐng)以能讓一個(gè)人看起來(lái)有不同的風(fēng)格。請(qǐng)以“My Favorite T-shirt”為題，介紹一下你喜歡的原因、你什么時(shí)候穿這件衣為題，介紹一下你喜歡的原因、你什么時(shí)候穿這件衣服、這件衣服由什么
54、制成的等等。服、這件衣服由什么制成的等等。要求：要求：1.語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；個(gè)；2文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。典例剖析【審題指導(dǎo)】【審題指導(dǎo)】1文體：本文是介紹自己喜歡的一件衣服，為說(shuō)明文；文體：本文是介紹自己喜歡的一件衣服，為說(shuō)明文；2時(shí)態(tài)：介紹衣服的顏色、風(fēng)格等特點(diǎn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；時(shí)態(tài)：介紹衣服的顏色、風(fēng)格等特點(diǎn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；3人稱(chēng)：介紹衣服用第三人稱(chēng)人稱(chēng)：介紹衣服用第三人稱(chēng)it；4寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：開(kāi)頭點(diǎn)明我喜歡的衣服是這件開(kāi)頭點(diǎn)明我喜歡的衣服是這件T恤；恤；介紹
55、介紹T恤的顏色、材質(zhì)、喜歡的原因、是朋友作為生日禮恤的顏色、材質(zhì)、喜歡的原因、是朋友作為生日禮物送給我的；物送給我的；總結(jié)：帶給我很多美好的記憶?？偨Y(jié)：帶給我很多美好的記憶?！緦?xiě)作導(dǎo)圖寫(xiě)作導(dǎo)圖】【高分范文】【高分范文】My Favorite T-shirtAmong all my clothes, I like one of the T-shirts best.It is white. It is made of cotton, so it feels comfortable. I like it because there is a photo of my best friend and m
56、e on it. Its a special gift from him. He sent it to me last year for my 14th birthday. I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties with my friends. It makes me remember the time we spent together. This is my favorite T-shirt. It brings me a lot of happy memories.第第10篇篇My Favorite Subject_提示：作為一名中學(xué)生
57、，你學(xué)習(xí)了很多課程，其中肯定有你最喜歡提示：作為一名中學(xué)生，你學(xué)習(xí)了很多課程，其中肯定有你最喜歡的科目，請(qǐng)以的科目，請(qǐng)以“My Favorite Subject_”為題，寫(xiě)為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，簡(jiǎn)述一下你最喜歡的科目、喜歡的理由以及一篇英語(yǔ)短文，簡(jiǎn)述一下你最喜歡的科目、喜歡的理由以及學(xué)習(xí)的方法。學(xué)習(xí)的方法。要求：要求：1.語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；個(gè)；2.文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。寫(xiě)作練兵【高分范文】【高分范文】My Favorite SubjectEnglish Of al
58、l the subjects I like English best. The main reason is that I think it is full of fun and the English teacher really makes his class interesting and lively. He always tries his best to help us learn English better and master good learning skills. Every morning I read English for fifteen minutes afte
59、r I get up. In class, I listen to the teacher carefully and take notes as much as I can. Whenever I have problems I will ask the teacher for help. On weekends, I always practice my spoken English for half an hour. Now the more I learn English, the easier it is for me to master this language.第第11篇篇My
60、 First Gift提示：我們收到的第一份禮物往往是最珍貴的，你的第一份禮物是提示：我們收到的第一份禮物往往是最珍貴的，你的第一份禮物是什么？什么？ 請(qǐng)以請(qǐng)以“My First Gift”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，簡(jiǎn)要為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，簡(jiǎn)要介紹這件東西并談?wù)勀阆矏?ài)它的理由。介紹這件東西并談?wù)勀阆矏?ài)它的理由。要求：要求：1.語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；個(gè)；2.文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。【高分范文】【高分范文】My First Gift Among all the gifts
61、 I have received, I like my first gift best. Its a hand-made calendar. My best friend, Jane, gave it to me on my 14th birthday. She made it by herself. On each page of the calendar, there is a picture of Jane and me with some words. Those words not only encourage me to move on, but also tell me how happy I am. Whenever I look at the calendar, I am touched by something warm. This present is a memory of the wonderful time we spent together. I will keep the gift forever.
云南省中考英語(yǔ)總復(fù)習(xí) 第三部分 重難題型突破 題型六 書(shū)面表達(dá)課件
