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1、開放作文不同于情景作文，(半)開放性作文屬于非限制性作文，即試題中不給出詳細的材料、圖畫、圖表或其他提示內(nèi)容等，而是要求考生根據(jù)所給的試題，展開聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮，正確表達。同時，開放性作文沒有標準答案，老師評卷不是根據(jù)考生所選觀點是否正確進行評定，而是根據(jù)考生的表達水平給分的。由于開放性作文一般沒有提示和要點的限制，從而更好地考查了考生對英語語言的綜合運用能力及考生的想象力和創(chuàng)造力，因此，這種題型也越來越受到高考命題人的青睞。原來只有北京一個地區(qū)使用開放性作文，慢慢地湖南、湖北、安徽、福建、江蘇、江西等一些省份也相繼采用了開放性作文或半開放性作文這種命題形式。一、試題特征1命題式開放性作文，即給
2、出作文題目，要求考生根據(jù)對作文題目的分析、理解，自由發(fā)揮。命題式開放性作文不像圖片式開放性作文那樣受到內(nèi)容或文章體裁方面的限制，命題式開放性作文根據(jù)內(nèi)容要求可以是記敘文、議論文、說明文，也可以是應用文等。2圖片式開放性作文，即給出一幅圖片，要求考生根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容及對圖片的理解，寫出英語作文。圖片式一般有兩種情況，一是事件或事故發(fā)生的圖片，二是夸張式的寓意圖。對于事件或事故發(fā)生的圖片，一般采用記敘文文體；而對于寓意式的圖片，一般采用議論文文體。根據(jù)不同內(nèi)容的圖片，考生可以套用不同的寫作模式。3以湖北為代表的命題形式：不給出具體事例及提示的半開放性作文。二、寫作步驟開放性作文沒有要點提示。面對一幅抽
3、象的圖畫或一個標題，考生往往感到茫然，不知所措。為此，建議考生在寫作時從以下幾個方面入手：1虛擬目標，有的放矢首先，虛擬讀者對象，以便具體地告訴讀者某話題；然后，列出要點，寫出提綱，從而變抽象為具體，使開放性作文成為限制性作文。2理解題意，聯(lián)系生活開放性作文的形式可分為圖片式或命題式。對于圖片式開放性作文，考生必須首先準確描述畫面內(nèi)容；其次，對圖片的寓意深層解讀；最后，結合生活實際進行聯(lián)想，發(fā)表自己的看法，或給人們提出警示或建議。對于命題式開放性作文，首先必須準確理解題目意思，抓住標題中的關鍵詞；其次，確定文章體裁，結合生活實際組織材料。3確立主題，列出提綱不論是圖片式開放性作文，還是命題式開
4、放性作文，都要注意以下幾點：一是審題，包括題目或圖片的內(nèi)容、命題老師的目的或意圖、寫作時需要使用的文章體裁等；二是定文章的主題、結構、層次；三是列出要點和提綱，即哪些東西需要寫，哪些東西不需要寫，做到心中有數(shù)；四是文章中所用的人稱、時態(tài)、語態(tài)；五是文章所需要的詞匯、短語、句型等。這就為后面的寫作做好了充分的準備。4根據(jù)體裁，快速寫作不同的體裁，寫作的方法和思路也不一樣?？忌\用平時所了解到的文體特點，結合提綱，將文章要點組織起來，以便迅速寫出文章。記敘文，通常第一段用一兩句話交代事情發(fā)生的時間、地點、原因等，第二段敘述事情發(fā)生和發(fā)展的經(jīng)過，第三段是事情發(fā)生的影響及人們對此的評價或看法。說明文
5、，通常第一段用一兩句話點出說明對象，第二段按照時間順序、空間順序或邏輯順序進行講解或介紹，第三段提出想法或建議。議論文，通常第一段用一兩句話提出論點，第二段從正反兩方面進行論證，第三段通過對上述第二段的分析，總結得出結論。應用文，首先注意應用文的格式，其次表達清楚所要講的事情；最后要注意語言措辭及禮節(jié)等。三、注意事項1認真審題，即審語境、審人稱、審時態(tài)。2.要緊扣主題，首尾呼應。3注意寫作對象和語言風格，要有讀者意識。4要進行細致描寫，有細節(jié)的支撐。5要有主次之分，詳略得當。6必須符合邏輯。7要做到思想健康，積極向上。8內(nèi)容新穎。新穎的內(nèi)容能夠充分體現(xiàn)考生的創(chuàng)造力，這正好符合新課標所提倡的素質(zhì)
6、教育的要求。四、常用句式1The picture presents to us that.這幅畫向我們展示了2As is seen in the picture./We can see from the picture that.從這幅圖畫中我們可以看到 3So it is a better choice to.因此是更好的選擇。4On one hand，I dont think it is right to.一方面，我認為是不正確的。5Therefore，when we.，it is wise to.因此，當我們時，是很明智的。6I think that this picture tries
7、 to tell us.我想這幅圖是想告訴我們7I sincerely hope that.我真誠地希望8We must learn to.我們必須學會寫作題目(2013湖北卷)請根據(jù)以下提示，并結合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。We all know that “sticks and stones may break our bones”，but we should also be aware that words can hurt people，too.注意：無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；除詩歌外，文體不限；文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；詞數(shù)為120左右。寫作策略一、“三準”確保作文上及格線
8、這是一篇開放性作文。體現(xiàn)其特點的句型有：開始句(扣題介紹自己在語言方面的優(yōu)勢)第一步定體裁目標審題準審題確定方向，行文緊扣主題My deskmate admires my fluent English very much and I usually feel encouraged by his compliments.同位非常羨慕我流利的英語，我通常被他的話所鼓勵。尾段(點明感悟，緊扣主題)We should avoid hurting others if we cant always be encouraging when we speak.說話時，如果我們不能激勵他人，我們應該避免傷害他人
9、。人稱要對：第一人稱時態(tài)要準：時態(tài)需要兩種，舉例部分用一般過去時，而總結反思和感想部分應該用一般現(xiàn)在時。要點要全：一個典型的事例。總結和感想。第二步定人稱、時態(tài)、內(nèi)容要點及關鍵詞目標要點準要點全而不漏，時態(tài)合理運用核心詞匯：羨慕我流利的英語：admire my fluent English造句：make a sentence突然笑起來：burst into langhter/out laughing輟學：drop out of school深深傷某人的心：hurt sb.deeply避免做某事：avoid doing sth.要點一：My deskmate admires my fluent
10、English very much.我同位非常羨慕我流利的英語。要點二：I usually feel encouraged by his compliments.他的話使我深受鼓勵。要點三：One day，when we learned the new word “eccentric” in class，we were asked to make a sentence with it.一天，我們在課上學習新單詞“eccentric”，老師讓我們用這個詞造句。第三步根據(jù)要點提示、句型關鍵詞及時態(tài)翻譯句子目標表達準表達準確得體，避免漢式英語要點四：I volunteered to do it.I
11、said，“My deskmate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him.”我自愿造句，說：“我同位是一個古怪的男孩，他的衣服穿著從不得體。”要點五：Hearing this，the whole class burst into laughter and my deskmates face turned red.一聽到這，全班同學突然笑起來，我同位的臉變紅了。要點六：After class，I learned from the teacher that my deskmate wanted to drop out of school，b
12、ut we helped him.課后，我從老師那里得知，我同位想輟學，但是我們幫助了他。要點七：My mindless words must have hurt him deeply.我無意的話一定深深地傷害了他。要點八：I didnt realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways until then.直到那時我才意識到話語既有積極的方面也有消極的方面。要點九：We should avoid hurting others if we cant always be encouraging when we
13、speak.說話時，如果我們不能激勵他人，我們應該避免傷害他人。二、“四美”走出平庸創(chuàng)高分升級句式一：把要點四改為v.ing作狀語。I volunteered to do it by saying “My deskmate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him.”第四步詞匯、句式升級目標語言美追求高級表達，張揚個性風采升級句式二：用if引導虛擬語氣改寫句式六。After class，I learned from the teacher that my deskmate would have dropped out of school i
14、f he hadnt been helped by others.升級句式三：用倒裝句式升級句式八Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways.要點一句式之間存在并列關系，故可以用and連接句式。要點八、九之間有因果關系，故可以用過渡詞語therefore連接。第五步巧用過渡詞目標銜接美巧妙銜接過渡，讀文如沐春風第一段：點明自己英語語言優(yōu)秀。第二段：一個典型事例。第三段：總結和感想。第六步正確分段目標結構美行文條理清晰，力避一段到底My deskmate admir
15、es my fluent English very much and I usually feel encouraged by his compliments.第七步完善成文目標外在美書寫清晰規(guī)范，卷面漂亮美觀One day，when we learned the new word “eccentric” in class，we were asked to make a sentence with it.I volunteered to do it by saying“My deskmate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him.” H
16、earing this，the whole class burst into laughter and my deskmates face turned red.After class，I learned from the teacher that my deskmate would have dropped out of school if he hadnt been helped by others.My mindless words must have hurt him deeply.Not until then did I realize words could be powerful
17、 in both positive and negative ways.Therefore we should avoid hurting others if we cant always be encouraging when we speak.Test 1(2013湖北七市4月聯(lián)考)請根據(jù)以下提示，并結合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。We can go as far as we think.The great minds，more often than not，think more and have more aggressive ideas of their life than ordinar
18、y people.注意：無須寫標題；除詩歌外，文體不限；文中不得透漏個人姓名和學校名稱； 詞數(shù)為120左右，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)。【參考范文】What we think is our direction and a goal of advancement.It guides us and makes us know what we really want and where we go.Then we spare our efforts to take active steps to make our dreams come true.For example，Thomas Edison
19、had a dream.He dreamed of a lamp that could be operated by electricity，and began where he stood to put his dream into action.Despite more than ten thousand failures，he stood by that dream until he made it a physical reality！And today，his dream lights up the world at night.We think.We choose.And as w
20、e think and choose，so are our lives formed.In the end，forming our own destiny is what ambition is about.Test 2(2013湖北省鄂西示范校高中畢業(yè)班質(zhì)量檢查)請根據(jù)以下提示，結合你生活中的一個事例，用英語寫一篇短文。Things that bring us pain make us grow.注意：無須寫標題；除詩歌外，文體不限；內(nèi)容必須結合你生活中的一個事例；文中不得透漏個人姓名和學校名稱； 詞數(shù)為120左右，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)?！緟⒖挤段摹縂rowing up is not
21、a very enjoyable time.It means we have to work hard.As for my childhood，my parents made me learn to play the violin so I had no time to play with other friends.I was very annoyed.I hated music，just because it was what they wanted me to do.Sometimes I felt puzzled and trapped.I even didnt understand
22、why I was a child.Now looking back，I am so glad that my parents encouraged me to take music lessons.Music can enrich my life.I come to realize my parents are always pushing me along.Everybody is to experience growing pains，which are just small pains in life.A little hard work and sweat never hurt us
23、.If we realize these pains are just small bumps on our road to success，we will realize our growing pains are actually growing gains.Test 3(2013湖北省十堰市兩校高三4月聯(lián)考)請根據(jù)以下提示，結合你生活中的一個事例，用英語寫一篇短文。The ability to focus ones attention is the key to success in doing anything.注意：無須寫標題；除詩歌外，文體不限；內(nèi)容必須結合你生活中的一個事例；文中
24、不得透漏個人姓名和學校名稱； 詞數(shù)為120左右，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)?！緟⒖挤段摹緼 person who is easily distracted by the surroundings will feel restless，unable to achieve his success.This reminds me of what happened when I entered high school as a Senior One student.I was so excited to find that there were various student organization
25、s and afterclass activities intended for us students.It seemed that many of them were suitable for me.During the first term，I was attracted whenever there was a notice from a student group and I was eager to find out more about it.As a result，I didnt spend enough time on my studies，nor could I settl
26、e down to my homework every day. Consequently，I failed an important exam.I have learned a lesson from this experience that one should focus on one thing at a time before he can get it well done，which is especially important for a Senior Three student.Therefore，I intend to set a clear goal for myself
27、 first and then focus all my attention on it.I have been fully aware that only when I have a concentrated mind can I achieve my success in the end.Test 4(2013湖北省武漢市武昌區(qū)高三年級聯(lián)合考試)請根據(jù)以下提示，結合你生活中的一個事例，用英語寫一篇短文。Difficulties arise in the lives of us all.What is most important is dealing with the hard times
28、，coping with the changes，and getting through to the other side where the sun is still shining just for you.注意：無須寫標題；除詩歌外，文體不限；內(nèi)容必須結合你生活中的一個事例；文中不得透漏個人姓名和學校名稱； 詞數(shù)為120左右，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)?！緟⒖挤段摹縏here is no denying that difficulties cannot be completely avoided in our lives.But what really counts is how we
29、 deal with them.Three years ago，when I began my senior high school study，I found it extremely difficult to learn English well because there were so many new words and grammar rules to keep in mind.Hard as I might try，I still did poorly in the English exams.It was the hardest time in my life and I ne
30、arly lost heart and decided to give up when my mother found my problem.She encouraged me that it took a person a lot to deal with tough times and if I chose to keep on，I would be a strong person and on the way to success.In order to prove myself，I studied even harder than ever.Gradually I began to c
31、atch up with other students in my class.At the end of the term I got the highest mark in English.So if we want to meet the shinning sun on the other side of the difficulties，we should first have the courage to overcome them and then enjoy the joy of success.Test 5(2013湖北省武漢名校高三第二次調(diào)研測試)請根據(jù)以下提示，結合你生活中
32、的一個事例，用英語寫一篇短文。You will never change your life until you change something you do daily.The secret of your success is found in your daily routine.注意：無須寫標題；除詩歌外，文體不限；內(nèi)容必須結合你生活中的一個事例；文中不得透漏個人姓名和學校名稱； 詞數(shù)為120左右，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)?！緟⒖挤段摹緼s the proverb goes，“Good habits benefit you all your life.” Indeed，a good
33、 habit is to me what water is to fish.Entering the high school，I took delight in having fast food and ate too much.Consequently，I was so heavily overweight that I suffered a lot from my awkward appearance.What made matters worse was the fact that my classmates played jokes on me at times.From then o
34、n，I made up my mind to avoid snacks and meanwhile to take up jogging to lose weight.Owing to the timely changes，it was not long before I did succeed in creating my new image.Only then did I start to appreciate the significance of forming a good habit.To be honest，the change in my habit means a lot t
35、o me，which contributes to my success as well as helps me regain confidence.注意：無須寫標題；除詩歌外，文體不限；內(nèi)容必須結合你生活中的一個事例；文中不得透漏個人姓名和學校名稱； 詞數(shù)為120左右，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)。In recent years，the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people，especially among youngsters._ _ 【參考范文】In recent years，the volunteering spi
36、rit has spread among the Chinese people，especially among youngsters.Five years ago，several of my classmates and I once served as volunteers for the Beijing Olympic Games.In that period of time，I helped arrange for the sports courts，translate for foreign athletes and visitors，and sometimes guide them
37、 to right places.It delighted me a lot that I had made a contribution to the success of the Games and brought happiness to others.As high school students, we should get actively involved in voluntary activities.In this way，we can learn how to work well in a team，how to improve our interpersonal skil
38、ls and organizational ability.Above all，we can benefit others and gain happiness ourselves.So we should take this chance to learn and to grow.Test 7(2013湖北省八校高三第二次聯(lián)考)請根據(jù)以下提示，結合你生活中的一個事例，用英語寫一篇短文。For every individual，different seasons have different meaning for them.Which is your favorite season？Writ
39、e down your favorite season and its meaning for you.注意：無須寫標題；除詩歌外，文體不限；內(nèi)容必須結合你生活中的一個事例；文中不得透漏個人姓名和學校名稱； 詞數(shù)為120左右，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)?！緟⒖挤段摹縈y favorite season is autumn，a time of clearness and hope.After each long night，I am not exceptionally greeted with the clear sky，the amiable sunshine and the sparklin
40、g yellowness in this amazing season.Those fallen leaves seem naturally to invoke memories.I was born in autumn.A number of autumns have seen my growth，happiness and sadness as well.No matter how bad the previous months were, I possess a new beginning and have the opportunity to make good use of what
41、 I failed to achieve yesterday and I have every reason to expect a more promising tomorrow since this season on.It is the season that never ceases to remind me of new beginnings of my different stages.It has the power and strength to bring contentment，love，hope and joy into my life.Test 8(2013春季湖北省宜
42、昌三校高三年級三月聯(lián)考)請根據(jù)以下提示，結合你生活中的一個事例，用英語寫一篇短文。Telling lies is what we are taught not to do，but in some cases，telling lies seems to be what we have to do.注意：無須寫標題；除詩歌外，文體不限；內(nèi)容必須結合你生活中的一個事例；文中不得透漏個人姓名和學校名稱； 詞數(shù)為120左右，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)。【參考范文】With great importance attached to honesty，children are taught not to te
43、ll lies.However，there are occasions when we realize that telling lies seems to be the only choice.My best friend Li Hua used to be rather poor in English，especially his terrible and strange pronunciation.Hardly could he make himself understood when speaking English.Bearing a heavy load in mind，he fe
44、lt desperate and upset.He dared not speak English in class.When asked questions by our English teacher，he was always nervous and embarrassed. The classmates always made fun of him，saying that he was speaking Japanese！Once I met him in the corridor and thought he should not be teased but encouraged.T
45、herefore I praised that his pronunciation was very special and kind of like Obamas. Believing what I said，he got greatly inspired.He spared no effort to practice speaking English every day.Now，he can speak English fluently with a perfect accent.Recently，he told me that it wasnt long before he knew t
46、hat what I said just a little white lie but he appreciated it badly，without which，he said，he couldnt have achieved such great progress.Test 9(2013湖北省黃岡市部分中學高三上學期統(tǒng)一調(diào)研考試)請根據(jù)以下提示，結合你生活中的一個事例，用英語寫一篇短文。Humor is not only one of the most valuable qualities，but also necessary for a delightful life.It is hel
47、pful in many ways，such as health，work，study and social communication.注意：無須寫標題；除詩歌外，文體不限；內(nèi)容必須結合你生活中的一個事例；文中不得透漏個人姓名和學校名稱； 詞數(shù)為120左右，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)?！緟⒖挤段摹縈y friend Mike must have benefited greatly from humor.He is kind but overweight，which brings him a lot of troubles.Once one of my classmates laughed a
48、t him，“Why are you so fat？” We all stopped to stare at him，wondering how Mike would answer the question.Surprisingly，he just said in a calm voice，“Well，because my size must be large enough to hold my large heart of love.” Hearing his words，we burst into laughter.Not only did Mike take the joke，but he also managed to cope with the embarrassing situation.What an important part humor plays in our daily life！Why not possess a sense of humor and go along the road of life with happiness all the way?
高考英語大二輪 （直擊考點+把脈高考+突破難點）書面表達 開放作文（湖北專版含調(diào)研、真題62張PPT）專題復習課件（含調(diào)研、真題）
