中考英語易錯易丟分專題20書面表達含解析

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1、書面表達 丟分題詳解 （2019 ?貴州省畢節(jié)中考） 每年的 6 月 6 日是我國的“愛眼日”，可見保護中小學生的視力非常重要，為此，學校將在英語文化節(jié)期間舉行一場“愛眼日”英語演講比賽。請你寫一篇英語演講稿，談?wù)勀銓ΡＷo視力重要性的認識和建議。 內(nèi)容如下： 1. 保護視力的重要性（請寫 1 點）； 2. 對保護視力的建議：（1）閱讀時注意用眼衛(wèi)生；（2）少用電子產(chǎn)品；（3）?？淳G色植物；（4）做眼保健操；（5）多做戶外運動。 要求如下： 1. 結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達通順，語言規(guī)范，書寫清晰； 2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實的人名，學校名等信息； 3. 詞數(shù) 80 左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給

2、出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯： Sight Day 愛眼日；electronic products 電子產(chǎn)品；eye-protecting exercises 眼保健操 Dear friends, June 6 is our country’s Sight Day. ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________

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4、________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 【參考范文】 Dear friends, June 6 is our country’s Sight Day. As we all know, eyes are windows of the soul. Everyone understands the impor

5、tance of the eyes. But now more and more students are getting near sighted. So how to protect eyes still remains a question. Here is some advice on how to protect your eyesight. You should not keep your eyes working for two long when reading. You should keep the book about a foot away from you. Aft

6、er reading for an hour or two, you’d better have a rest by working in the distance or looking at the green plants to make your eye relax. You ought to remember not to read in dim light or in the sun. Don’t read in a moving bus or in bed. Besides, try to use less electric products. What’s more, doing

7、 eye-protecting exercises will help you keep good eye sight. Last but not least, we can also try to do more exercise in our spare time. Only by doing these simple things can we keep good eyesight. 【名師點評】 寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起： 認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。 構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān) 寫作材料

8、。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。 初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。 修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。 【寫作亮點】 短文用了一些短語和句式，如：As we all know據(jù)我們所知；more and more,

9、越來越多的；look at看看；ought to應(yīng)該。用了here be和祈使句句型，如： Here is some advice on how to protect your eyesight.和Don’t read in a moving bus or in bed.用了when引導的時間狀語從句，如：You should not keep your eyes working for two long when reading.增加了文章的亮點，也是提分的經(jīng)典句子。 查漏補缺 1. 動筆之前，認真審題 《中考考試說明》指出，書面表達要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意？就是要認真審題，看到考

10、題后，先不要急于動筆，要仔細看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個框架或畫面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據(jù)圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關(guān)系、故事情節(jié)、主體時態(tài)、活動時間、地點等。 2. 圍繞中心，擬定提綱 　　書面表達評分原則有四條： 　?。?）內(nèi)容要點； 　?。?）運用詞匯和結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量； 　?。?）運用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準確性； 　?。?）上下文的連貫性。 由此可見，要點是給分的一個重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點，同學們要充分發(fā)揮自己的觀察力，把情景中給出的各個要點逐條列出。根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、

11、展開和結(jié)尾，設(shè)想幾個承上啟下的連詞，將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語草草記下，形成提綱。寫作時切忌結(jié)構(gòu)分散，廢話連篇，嚴重跑題。書面表達，內(nèi)容廣泛，題材多樣，要弄清考題的要求是寫人、敘事、介紹、評論、圖表、書信、日記、通知、便條還是看圖作文或改寫縮寫。如果是日記，要寫清年、月、日和天氣情況；如果是書信，則要注意書信的格式，注意短文詞數(shù)不要低于或超過規(guī)定的詞數(shù)太多。 3. 語言通順，表達準確 （1）避免使用漢語式英語，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復和呆板。 　?。?）多用簡單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復雜的句型?？蛇m當多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語

12、或情態(tài)動詞等較復雜的句型。 （3）注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。 ①語態(tài)、時態(tài)要準確無誤。 ②主謂語要一致，謂語的人稱和數(shù)要和主語一致。 ③注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。 ④注意冠詞用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。 ⑤注意拼寫、標點符號和大小寫，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。 標點符號要特別注意漢英的不同，例如： 漢語 英語 句號 。 . 省略號 …… ... 頓號 、 無 （5）描寫人物時，要生動具體，例如： ①外表特征：

13、tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking ... ②服飾顏色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black ... ③內(nèi)心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested ... ④感情描寫：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout ... ⑤動作描寫：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch ... （6）上下文要連貫。上下文的

14、連貫性也是評分的一條原則，因此同學們應(yīng)把寫好的句子，根據(jù)故事情節(jié)，事情發(fā)生的先后次序（時間或空間），使用一些表示并列、遞進等過渡詞進行加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學們應(yīng)注意下面過渡詞的用法： 表示并列關(guān)系的過渡詞：and, as well as, or ... 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的過渡詞：but, yet, however ... 表示時間關(guān)系的過渡詞：first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, i

15、mmediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that ... 表示空間關(guān)系的過渡詞：near (to), far (from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside ... 表示比較關(guān)系的過渡詞：in the same way, just like, just as ... 表示對照關(guān)系的過渡詞：but, sti

16、ll, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though ... 表示遞進關(guān)系的過渡詞：also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again ... 表示因果關(guān)系的過渡詞：because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result ... 表示解釋說明的過渡詞：for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually ... 表示強調(diào)的過渡詞：in fact,

17、indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important ... 表示目的的過渡詞：for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, ... 表示列舉的過渡詞：for example, such as ... 表示總結(jié)性的過渡詞：in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in gene

18、ral, in all, in a word, generally speaking ... 4. 不會表達，另辟蹊徑 中考作文給分是以要點和語言準確度而定，不以文采打分。造句越簡單準確越好，造復合句容易出錯，容易被扣分，閱卷場上有句話：＂錯誤面前人人平等，文采好不加分＂。如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡?？傊炀渥右_、得體、符合英語表達習慣。 ①迂回而行 當漢語詞義不會用英語表達時，可以想一個與這個漢語詞義相似的幾種詞義。擴展思路，然后從英語中找出一個與其詞義相近的代替。這樣可有異曲同工之妙。 ②小詞大用 漢語中有些語意看來很復雜很

19、文雅，但在英語中可用一些常用詞表達。下面這些詞可能在你的書面表達中很有用：take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。 ③借花獻佛 有時書面表達中需要的單詞或詞組或許在試卷中的其他地方出現(xiàn)。因為剛剛做過題，記憶猶新，那么就可信手拈來，為我所用。 5. 錦上添花，量力而行 如果你還有時間和精力，想把書面表達寫得更好，那么，請注意以下幾點： ①句型多樣化，不要I（We）... 到底，使人覺得乏味。 ②適當使用一些并列句或主從復合句。 ③進一步描繪人或事物時，適當使用定語從句。 ④

20、適當使用分詞或分詞短語，烘托謂語動詞。 ⑤偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感。 ⑥適當調(diào)換一下狀語在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同。 ⑥上下句子緊接時，其中完全相同的成分可以省略，以節(jié)省篇幅。 6. 書寫工整，卷面整潔 字跡要清晰，讓閱卷人看得清楚，不可字跡潦草，難以辨認，要保持卷面的整潔。 7. 寫完之后，勿忘檢查 中考作文時，由于時間緊、內(nèi)容多，同學們出錯在所難免。因此，改錯這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。中考作文評卷是根據(jù)要點、語言準確性、上下文的連貫性來給分，根據(jù)錯誤多少來扣分。因此，中考時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯誤應(yīng)從以下幾個方面入手： ①格式是否有錯。 ②拼寫有無錯

21、誤。 ③語言是否用錯。 ④時態(tài)、語態(tài)錯誤。 ⑤標點錯誤。 ⑥人稱是否用錯。 【注意】此時不宜在卷面上作較大的改動，以免顧此失彼，影響全局。 總之，只要平時同學們多練習寫作并有意運用上述方法和技巧，合理分配時間，在中考時一定能寫出高質(zhì)量的作文，得到令人滿意的考分。 中考題演練 （一） （2019 ?廣西河池中考） “人生沒有彩排，生命沒有重來”，你平安、健康、快樂地成長是父母最大的心愿。今年6月下旬學校將舉辦一場以“Keep away from the danger!” 為主題的英文演講比賽。假如你是王雷同學，大家推選你參加這次比賽。請跟進以下思維導圖提示，寫一篇英文演講稿。

22、 寫作提示： 寫作要求： 1. 不得使用真實姓名和學校名； 2. 所有的提示詞都須用上，包含以上所有要點，可適當增加細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫： 3. 字跡工整，語言精練，表達準確，條理清楚： 4. 詞數(shù)100詞左右。(演講稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。) Keep away from the danger! Hello! Everyone, I’m Wang Lei. The danger is around us. So we must learn how to keep away from the danger, First, we mustn’t go swi

23、mming without our parents’ or teachers’ permission. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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25、_____ In a word, we must try our best to keep away from the danger! That’s all. Thank you for listening! 【參考范文】 Keep away from the danger! Hello! Everyone, I’m Wang Lei. The danger is around us. So we must learn how to keep away from the danger. First, we mustn’t go swimming without our paren

26、ts’ or teachers’ permission. When we go swimming, we must wear life jackets. Second, we must obey the traffic rules. We should walk on the pavement. When we cross the street, we mustn’t look at the mobile phones. Third, we may have some friends on line, but we mustn’t believe whatever they say. Besi

27、des, don’t meet online friends alone. Fourth, we must wash our hands before having meals. Don’t eat food that goes bad because it is bad for our health. Fifth, when we are in school, we can’t run on the hallways. You should get on well with your classmates and don’t fight with them. If someone threa

28、tens you, call for help. Last but not the least, never try drugs. If you see someone selling drugs, call 110 at once. In a word, we must try our best to keep away from the danger! That’s all. Thank you for listening! 【名師點評】 這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，給我們介紹了生活中應(yīng)如何遠離危險，保證我們的安全。短文有以下幾個優(yōu)點：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要

29、求的所有內(nèi)容，提示詞都使用上了。文章中從六個方面進行了具體的介紹，每個方面前都有表示順序的詞First, Second… Last but not least等，使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)非常清晰，敘述有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達習慣。 【寫作亮點】 文章中使用了簡單句、賓語從句、狀語從句、定語從句、祈使句等結(jié)構(gòu)，句式多變，表達準確、清楚。文章中使用了一些較好的短語和句型，如When we cross the street, we mustn't look at the mobile phones、Third, we may have some fri

30、ends on line, but we mustn't believe whatever they say、Fourth, we must wash our hands before having meals.、You should get on well with your classmates and don't fight with them.、If someone threatens you, call for help.、Last but not the least, never try drugs. If you see someone selling drugs, call 1

31、10 at once.等。 （二） （2019 ?大慶中考） 文娛、體育、戶外等豐富多彩的課外活動為我們的生活增添了生機和活力。請以“After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful”為題，為校園專欄寫一篇英文稿件。 內(nèi)容包括： 1. 簡要描述你參加過的一項課外活動； 2. 該課外活動給你帶來的收獲及感受(交朋友;放松自我)。 寫作要求： 1. 詞數(shù)80詞左右；開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)； 2. 文章不得出現(xiàn)真實的學校名稱與姓名。 After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful Nowaday

32、s after-class activities are becoming more and more important ______________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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34、______________________________________________ 【參考范文】 After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful Nowadays, after-school activities are becoming more and more important. There are many different kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. I joined a volleyball club last year. I am used to

35、 playing volleyball after school. In the volleyball club, I've made lots of friends. We often play volleyball after school. Whether it is hot or cold, we never stop playing it. I feel happy while playing volleyball. And it is also a good way to relax myself. I think I will continue to play volleyba

36、ll after school in the future. All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful. 【名師點評】 這是一篇話題作文，讓我們寫一篇關(guān)于After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful的英文稿件，并鼓勵同學們積極參加課外活動，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來。寫作需要用第一人稱，注意各種時態(tài)的交替運用。內(nèi)容要點包括：簡要描述你參加過的一項課外活動，時態(tài)用一般過去時；你參加過的課外活動給你帶來

37、的收獲和感受，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主和一般將來時為主；最后總結(jié)自己的心得體會。 【寫作亮點】 高分句型一：I am used to playing volleyball after school. 我習慣放學后打排球。be used to doing sth.習慣于做某事。 高分句型二：And it is also a good way to relax myself. 這也是放松自己的好方法。動詞不定式to relax myself用作后置定語。 高分句型三：All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful a

38、nd meaningful. 總之，課外活動使我的生活更加豐富多彩，更有意義。 more colorful and meaningful用作my life的賓語補足語。 模擬題檢測 （一） （2019河南中考模擬） 因?qū)W習壓力大，部分中學生的身體健康狀況有所下降，這一情況已經(jīng)引起社會的關(guān)注和教育部門的高度重視。假若你是來自九年級三班的李華，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，用英語寫一份不少于80詞的倡議書。建議大家積極多參加體育活動，提高身體素質(zhì)。不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名。 要點：1. 鍛煉身體的好處： strong， healthy... 2. 鍛煉身體的方式： play ball games， run

39、ning， swimming... 3. 請你談?wù)剬W校開展體育鍛煉看法和建議。 要求：1. 內(nèi)容必須包括以上要點，可適當發(fā)揮； 2. 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)； 3. 語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范； 4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及校名。 Dear schoolmates, I am Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. ____________________ _____________________________________________

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41、_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【參考范文】 Dear shoolmates, I am Li Hua from Class Three,Grade Nine. Health is very i

42、mportant to us teenagers. Either study or work is based on a strong body. Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy. If we don’t take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily. Just as we often say, “Exercise one hour a day keeps illness away. ” There are many kinds of sports we can do

43、, such as running, swimming and playing ball games. But we have to do too much homework after school, I hope teachers will give us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports. I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us. In order to build ourselves st

44、ronger and stronger,let’s take active part in all kinds of sports in proper time. Li Hua 【名師點評】 本文屬于話題作文。講述鍛煉身體的好處、鍛煉的方式，并建議大家積極參加體育活動。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。 【寫作亮點】 這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如either...or..., be based on, keep healthy, such as,

45、have time to do, take part in, in order to, stronger and stronger以及all kinds of等，增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。 （二） （2019·山東濱州質(zhì)檢題） 假如你是小偉。你的室友大明昨天接到你朋友Maria的電話。她正在研究中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——中秋節(jié)，需要你的幫助?，F(xiàn)在請你根據(jù)大明所留便條的內(nèi)容，給Maria回一封電子郵件。 Xiaowei, Your friend Maria made a phone call to you yesterday. She wants to kn

46、ow the traditional Chinese festival—the Mid-Autumn Festival. She wants you to tell her why we like it and when it is . She also wonders how you spent your Mid-Autumn Festival this year?. Send an email to her at maria1988@. Daming 注意： 1）電子郵件的格式和開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總次數(shù)（80-100詞）； 2）表達完整、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔； 3）提示詞：農(nóng)

47、歷lunar 家人團聚family reunion To: maria1988@ Subject: the Mid-Autumn Festival Dear Maria, How are you? You asked me something about the traditional Chinese festival ---the Mid-Autumn Festival._________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________

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50、______ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Love, Xiaowei 【參考范文】 Dear Maria, How are you? You asked me something about the traditional Chinese festival ---the Mid-Autumn

51、Festival. Mid Autumn Festival is on the 15th day of the eighth month of the Chinese lunar calendar. It is a Chinese traditional holiday with hundreds of years’ history. For Chinese, the moon is a symbol of many good things. The character, moon, is often used to name places and people. Some great poe

52、ts, such as Li Bai, used the moon to express their ideas about love for family. To be the most important, the Mid-Autumn Festival is a great time for family reunion. My favorite part of the Mid-Autumn Festival is that I can enjoy mooncakes and appreciate the moon with my family. This festival, my gr

53、andparents could not stay with us because they were in the USA with my uncle’s family. But they wrote letters to me showing their deep love for me. It was a pity they were not here, but I was still very happy because my dear parents were with me. Love, Xiaowei 【名師點評】 首先能夠知道本文要求寫一封電子郵件，因此注意郵件的格式；

54、給出一個便條，便條中提出Maria想了解中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——中秋節(jié)。文中提到why we like it和when it is，要對為什么我們喜歡它以及中秋節(jié)時間進行介紹，最后Maria想要知道大明是怎么樣過中秋節(jié)的。因此內(nèi)容上不要忘記這三個方面，條理要清晰。 本例文以第一人稱書寫，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。首先對中秋節(jié)介紹——日期和簡介，以及為什么喜歡中秋節(jié)。然后用一般過去時講述這個中秋節(jié)我家是怎么慶祝的。上下文連詞使用得當，語句通順，條理清晰。 【寫作亮點】 本文中作者運用以下短語hundreds of；a symbol of；such as；還有不定式作目的狀語；To be the

55、 most important；stay with。句子的銜接上連詞的使用。如that引導的表語從句My favorite part of the Mid-Autumn Festival is that I can enjoy mooncakes and appreciate the moon with my family. 和because引導的時間狀語從句等：This festival, my grandparents could not stay with us because they were in the USA with my uncle’s family. （三） （2

56、019—2020山東中考質(zhì)檢題） 書面表達根據(jù)所給圖畫，用英語寫一篇約80詞的短文。要求完整敘述故事內(nèi)容。 提示詞：plate 盤子， trash can 垃圾桶, color pen 彩筆， color 給…上色， ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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58、After lunch, Li Hua picked up the plate and wanted to send it to the kitchen. He bumped into his brother named Li Zhong, and the plate fell in two. Li Hua was worried and going to put the broken plate into the trash can. His brother stopped him and said, "Why not turn them into paintings?" Li Hua ag

59、reed happily. Li Zhong brought color pens. They discussed a minute. After a while, two pieces of the plate turned into two beautiful fishes. They were very happy. 【名師點評】 書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。切忌堆砌

60、詞語和句子，注意運用適當?shù)倪B詞使句子連貫流暢。 【寫作亮點】 這是一篇看圖作文，要求根據(jù)圖畫敘述一個故事。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過去時，人稱為單數(shù)三人稱，注意主謂一致問題和一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：He bumped into his brother named Li Zhong,；Why not turn them into paintings?等句式的應(yīng)用，使短文內(nèi)容表達豐富。此外，picked up, bumped into, fell in two, put into, after a while等詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。 （四） （2019—2020學年度

61、質(zhì)檢題） 請根據(jù)下表提示介紹Tom過去和現(xiàn)在的情況,并就此事談?wù)勀愕目捶皩λ慕ㄗh。 過去 喜歡看書,功課好,花很多時間學習和鍛煉。 現(xiàn)在 因沉溺于用手機發(fā)信息和玩電腦游戲?qū)е聦W習沒興趣,上課時不專心聽課 你的看法 玩手機可以使人放松,但… 你的建議 至少兩點 要求: 1. 80-100詞:短文必須包括表格中的信息,條理清晰,觀點明確,意思連貫。 2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校的名稱及其他相關(guān)信息。

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63、Tom has changed a lot in the last few years. He used to like reading books and do well in his lessons. He also spent much time studying and doing exercises at school. But now he is so crazy about sending messages and playing computer games by using mobile phones that he has no interest in his schoo

64、l work and doesn’t listen to teachers as carefully as before in class. Perhaps playing with mobile phones can make him relaxed, but if he spends too much time on it, he will have less time to study. He should pay more attention to his school work. Why not take part in some after-school activities wh

65、en he feels bored? Why not spend more free time chatting face-to-face with his friends? 【名師點評】 該題目屬于記敘文寫作。在寫作時應(yīng)注意要包括提示的四個內(nèi)容：第一部分Tom的過去；第二部分Tom的現(xiàn)在；第三部分你的看法；第四部分你對Tom的建議。例文采用兩段式；用第三人稱敘述內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用現(xiàn)在完成時、一般過去時、一般將來時三種時態(tài)結(jié)合。敘述完整，條例清晰，觀點明確，意思連貫。 【寫作亮點】 短語：in the last few years；do well in；spend…doing …；be crasy about…；make sb …；pay attention to；take part in；chat with。 句型：used to do過去常常干某事； Why not do…？提建議的句型 語法：if引導的條件狀語從句