2020年中考英語考點專項突破題 專題40 書面表達(dá)二（含解析）

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1、專題40 書面表達(dá)二 一、浙江杭州 第二節(jié)：書面表達(dá) 56.假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Linda的電子郵件。以下是郵件的一部分，請你閱讀后回復(fù)，詞數(shù)80左右。 Subject: From: Linda To: Li Ping … I’m really looking forward to meeting your brother when he comes to Rome in the summer. I can show him around the city! Please tell me something about him! How old is he? Wha

2、t does he look like? What kind of person is he and what’s he interested in? Hope to hear from you soon. Love, Linda Subject: From: Li Ping To: Linda Dear Linda, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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5、__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ping 【答案】Dear Linda, Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome. Now let me tell you something about my brother. He is thirteen years old, easy-going an

6、d humorous-we get along really well. He loves different cultures. He is interested in museums and likes trying local food. My brother is also cute. He’s of medium height with short straight black hair. He is good at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans. Thanks again for your help!

7、 Yours, Li Ping 【解析】 這篇作文要求我們對Linda的電子郵件進(jìn)行回復(fù)。寫作前，應(yīng)先閱讀Linda的來信，了解信中她想知道的事情，然后有針對性地給她進(jìn)行介紹。審題可知，Linda在信中提到她想要了解你哥哥的一些情況，她提出了三個問題，“他多大了”；“他是什么樣子的”；“他是怎樣的人以及他的興趣”，回信中應(yīng)對Linda的這些提問進(jìn)行回答，并根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要，補充一些細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實、豐富。短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時、第三人稱來敘述，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先內(nèi)容應(yīng)符合題目要求，并且敘述要注意層次和結(jié)構(gòu)；其次應(yīng)注意英語的表達(dá)問題，應(yīng)符合英文句式的特點以及表達(dá)

8、習(xí)慣，不能寫漢語式的英語?？梢院唵尉浣Y(jié)構(gòu)為主，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式和結(jié)構(gòu)，提升作文檔次。同時語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然。 二、浙江衢州 56.書面表達(dá) 71. 假設(shè)你是Li Ming， 以下是你的南非筆友Seb發(fā)給你的一封電子郵件，請根據(jù)該郵件內(nèi)容給Seb回一封郵件。 要求：1. 考生需按電子郵件格式完成整封郵件； 2. 郵件中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等相關(guān)信息； 3. 詞數(shù)：90~100 【答案】From: LiMing To: Seb Subject: Learning Chinese in Quzhou Hi,

9、 Seb, I’m so glad that you’ll come to live in my city. To improve Your Chinese quickly. You can go and take a course in a Chinese Language School. It can always help you to speak better and learn more. Then, try to experience life here in Quzhou. Of course. I’ll take you around Quzhou. We can vis

10、it the Confucius Temple. It’s the best way to understand our culture. And you can practice speaking Chinese at the same time. It’s very helpful. Hope to see you soon! Yours LiMing 【解析】 本題是書信作文。假設(shè)你是Li Ming， 以下是你的南非筆友Seb發(fā)給你的一封電子郵件，請根據(jù)該郵件內(nèi)容給Seb回一封郵件。注意電子郵件格式。時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時。認(rèn)為閱讀材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，根據(jù)Seb的電子郵件，

11、列出提綱。表達(dá)要條理清楚，語言規(guī)范。要運用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。 三、浙江湖州 61.書面表達(dá) 5月18日是國際博物館日，下圖是你班同學(xué)參觀博物館的情況。請你結(jié)合調(diào)查結(jié)果、自己的參觀經(jīng)歷和感受，寫一份報告，并在英語課上匯報。 注意：1. 詞數(shù)：80-100 (短文首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)) 2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名。 ___________________________________________________________________

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13、_ 【答案】Visiting museums has become one o f the most popular ways for us students to spend our spare time. According to the survey made in our class, almost all the students have been to museums, such as science museums, tea museums and film museums, etc. Among them, the science museum is our favori

14、te. I've been to Huzhou Science Museum and Lu Yu Tea Museum. I like the tea museum very much, because I can learn about the histor and development of tea and watch the tea art performances there as well. What I'm interested in most is the show of beautiful tea sets, which has left a deep impression

15、 on me. Museums make it possible for us. 'students to learn knowledge and experience cultures at the same time. Why not visit more? 【解析】 這是一篇圖表，是同學(xué)參觀博物館的情況，結(jié)合調(diào)查結(jié)果、自己的參觀經(jīng)歷和感受，寫一份報告，并在英語課上匯報。動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料注意人稱和時態(tài)的不同，注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上

16、下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。 四、浙江寧波 六、書面表達(dá) 61.回顧初中三年。有許多事令人難忘。校英語報如Have Your Say欄目正面向九年級畢業(yè)生征文。假如你是李華，請你選擇其中一個話題, 并結(jié)合具體事例, 用英語寫一封信表達(dá)你對某個人的謝意或歉意，參加此次征文活動。 要點如下： say "thanks" to___________ say "sorry" to_________ 1. be not good at... 2. encourage me to… 3. make great progress 4…. 1. argue

17、with… 2. not talk to each other 3. regret doing… 4….. 注意： (1) 短文必須包括你所選擇話題的所有要點, 并適當(dāng)拓展； (2) 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名； (3) 詞數(shù):80-100,書信格式已給出； (4) 首句供參考Looking back on the past three years, I’d like to say... Dear ___________________, _____________________________________________

18、_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Alice, Looking back on the past three years, I'd like to say thanks to you fo

19、r helping me with my English. When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at English. I just hid behind my text book and never said anything in class. Once I did very badly in an English test, and I lost heart. However, you had a patient talk with me and encouraged me to be more active in class. Since t

20、hen, I have worked harder and made great progress. I feel lucky to be your student. Thank you again. Wish you goal luck. Yours, Li Hua (100 words) Possible version 2: Dear Alan, Looking back on the past three years, I'd like t

21、o say sorry to you for arguing with you. When we were in Grade 8, we lost the chance to get the first prize in the football match. I never stopped complaining to you that it was you who missed the goal. But you shouted back that you were not the only reason. You walked off angrily. From then on, we

22、 didn't talk to each other. I have been regretting doing so. Soon we will graduate from our school. Let's forget about the past and become good friends again. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 這個作文要求我們從題目中給出的兩個話題中選擇一個，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語寫一封信表達(dá)你對某個人的謝意或歉意，參加學(xué)校英語報的一個征文活動。題目中利用表格的形式展示了兩個話題的主要結(jié)構(gòu)，具體的內(nèi)容需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力進(jìn)行補充，并用正

23、確的英語表達(dá)出來。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般過去時、第一人稱和第二人稱為主來敘述。文章內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：首先確定一個話題和人物；然后具體說明你感謝他或者向他道歉的原因，這是文章的主體部分，敘述應(yīng)詳細(xì)，合情合理；最后再次重申自己的感謝或歉意，并表達(dá)祝愿。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先文章內(nèi)容應(yīng)完整、充實，注意分清段落和層次；其次需注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能根據(jù)漢語思維逐詞翻譯。句式結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)完整，可以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，提升文章檔次。同時語句直接使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然。 五、金華，義烏，麗水 七、書面表達(dá) 61.某英文網(wǎng)站正在舉辦以“My

24、School Life”為主題的征文活動。假設(shè)你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿。 內(nèi)容要點 參考詞匯 Subjects English, Science,... Teachers/Classmates kind, helpful,... Activities sports, hobbies,... 注意：1. 文中必須包括表格中全部內(nèi)容要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，參考詞匯僅供選擇使用； 2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名； 3. 詞數(shù)：80—100; 4. 短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 My School Life I’m Li H

25、ua from Sunny Hill Middle School in China. I’d like to share my school life with you. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________

26、_________________________ 【答案】例文 Possible version: I’m Li Hua from Sunny Hill Middle School in China. I’d like to share my school life with you. We have many subjects at school such as Chinese, English and so on. I am focused more on Chinese, for I think it’s getting more and mo

27、re widely used throughout the world. Our teachers are kind and helpful. Whenever I have problems, they are always ready to give me a hand. School activities are rich and colorful. I often play basketball with my classmates, which brings me lots of fun. I like reading as well. So I often spend my f

28、ree time reading in the school library. My school life is wonderful and I enjoy it very much. 【解析】 【分析】 【高分句型一】 I often play basketball with my classmates，which brings me lots of fun． 我經(jīng)常和我的同學(xué)打籃球，這給我?guī)砹撕芏鄻啡?。which引導(dǎo)非限定性定語從句。 【高分句型二】 So I often spend my free time reading in the school library．

29、 所以我經(jīng)?；ㄎ业目臻e時間在學(xué)校圖書館閱讀。spend…doing sth花費…做某事。 這是一篇給材料作文。某英文網(wǎng)站正在舉辦以“My School Life”為主題的征文活動。假設(shè)你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，

30、可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。 六、浙江溫州 56.書面表達(dá) 最近，用手機APP買菜的人多了。手機菜場菜品豐富、洗凈配好、預(yù)約送菜上門……外國朋友對此也很感興趣。 請你以A New Use of the Mobile Phone為題，寫一篇110詞左右的英語短文介紹手機買菜帶來的便利，讓外國朋友了解中國人民生活中的這個新變化。 A New Use of the Mobile Phone __________________________________________________________________________

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32、______________________________________________________________________________________ 【小詞典】 acknowledge v.承認(rèn)，認(rèn)可 bone n. 骨骼 chest n. 胸部 cipher n. 標(biāo)記 crowd n. 大眾 elect v. 選舉，推選 franc n. 法國法郎 invisible ad. 不可見的 muscle n. 肌肉 profound adj. 深刻的 radio telescope射電望遠(yuǎn)鏡 reflect n. 反

33、射 signal n. 信號 stimulate v. 刺激 toe n. 腳趾 【答案】A New Use of the Mobile Phone Preparing for meals is tiring. You may have to spend hours getting everything ready for cooking. Now in China, new mobile apps are here to help. These apps provide you with meat, fish, and vegetables, almost every

34、thing you need for a meal. You ,an order whenever you like and decide on the time for them to arrive. If you like. they can be washed, cut and packed for a certain dish. Some apps even guide you to cook step by step, making cooking easier. Compared with the traditional way of going to the market,

35、mobile apps save your time and energy. With such a new use of the mobile phone, you can enjoy a more relaxing life. 【解析】 這是一篇給材料作文。要求以A New Use of the Mobile Phone為題，寫一篇英語短文介紹手機買菜帶來的便利，讓外國朋友了解中國人民生活中的這個新變化。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明

36、，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。 七、 臺州 七、書面表達(dá)（本題有1小題; 共計20分） 76. 似如你是李華, 一個英國游學(xué)團(tuán)要來你們學(xué)校, 學(xué)校需要一些志愿者, 你想成為其中的一員。請讀下面的招霧啟事, 寫一封應(yīng)征郵件。 Volunteers Wanted Some students from the UK will come to our school to

37、 have a study tour. They are interested in Chinese culture. We’ relooking for some volunteers to help us. "Can you introduce yourself(English ability and personality)? Can you plan an activity about Chinese culture and explain your purpose? If you are interested, please email us at Andrew@l63.

38、 com. 注意: （1）請回復(fù)招募啟事中所提及的兩個問題, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮; （2）應(yīng)征郵件中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名和校名等相關(guān)信息; （3）詞數(shù): 80~100; （4）郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計入總詞數(shù)。 Dear Andrew, I’m Li Hua.

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40、 【分析】【高分句型一】 In addition，I'm interested in sports，which is why I'm in good health．此外，我對體育感興趣，這就是為什么我健康狀況良好． which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句． 【高分句型二】 I plan to organiz

41、e an activity about Chinese traditional culture， so that British friends can understand China? better．我計劃組織一次關(guān)于中國傳統(tǒng)文化的活動，讓英國朋友更好的了解中國． plan to do sth計劃做某事；so that 引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句． 【答案】Dear Sir， My name is Li Hua．I'm a 17-year-old girl from Class 3 ，Grade 2．I would like to become a volunteer for the? Ame

42、rican students．（點明目的）My English is good and I can talk with foreigner fluently．In addition，I'm interested in sports，which is why ?I'm in good health．【高分句型一】When my friends get in trouble，I often help them actively．I'm good at taking up with others．Besides I like travelling a lot and I'm quite famili

43、ar with our city．（自我介紹）I plan to organize an activity about Chinese traditional culture so that British friends can? understand China better．【高分句型二】（計劃的活動） I'm sure I can become friends with the?English students．Looking forward to your answers．（愿望） Yours， Li Hua 八、 紹興 九、書面表達(dá)（共1小題，共計20分）

44、18.學(xué)校是否有必要設(shè)立“無作業(yè)日”？對此，你在班中進(jìn)行了調(diào)查。請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇短文在英語課上交流，并闡述你的觀點和理由。 Opinions Reasons most students Yes ◆have free time ◆feel relaxed some students No ◆waste time ◆get bad grades I …… …… 注意：①短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)； ②詞數(shù)：80-100； ③短文首句僅供選擇使用,不計入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯：無作業(yè)日Homework-free Day 短文首句：I've

45、done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. Here are the results. 【答案】 One possible version: ??? I've done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. Here are the results. Most students think it necessary to have Homework-free Day so that they wi

46、ll have more free time to do what they like, such as reading their favorite books, going swimming and so on. They will also feel relaxed and join their friends in playing different games. ??? Some students, however, don't like it. They're afraid that they may waste time or even get bad grades. They

47、 prefer to do homework as usual. ??? In my view, Homework-free Day will certainly help a lot. I can choose to watch some interesting English programs, which will help improve my listening and speaking skills. 【考點】材料作文 【解析】【分析】這是一篇材料類作文。著重通過調(diào)查對“無作業(yè)日"學(xué)生的看法：贊成與反對及理由。主要以第三人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作中應(yīng)適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下

48、文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏切關(guān)系。 【點評】文章中使用了非常好的短語或句子會給文章增色。such as ，例如； Homework-free Day? ，無作業(yè)日；prefer to do sth.更喜歡做某事。 ?I've done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day.?（介詞后接賓語從句）；Most students think it necessary to have Homework-free Day so that they will have more free time to do what

49、 they like.（賓語從句；不定式做主語和結(jié)果狀語從句）； ?I can choose to watch some interesting English programs, which will help improve my listening and speaking skills. （非限制性定語從句）。?還運用了or， however 等使上下文銜接的更好。 九、 嘉興、舟山 六、書面表達(dá)(本題有1小題,共計15分) 61. 假設(shè)你是李華。你在某英文網(wǎng)站上看到一則招募中國志愿者(volunteer)的廣告。請根據(jù)該廣告中所提供的兩個志愿者項目,選擇其中一個,結(jié)合自

50、己的實際情況,給項目負(fù)責(zé)人寫一封電子郵件,表達(dá)你希望參加這個項目的愿望,并闡述理由。 注意: (1)郵件中必須包含招募廣告中的信息,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 (2)文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息。 (3)詞數(shù): 80~100。郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I want to be a volunteer. _______________ Looking forward to your early reply!

51、 Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Sir/Madam， I'm Li Hua，a middle school student from China． I want to be a volunteer．I'm willing to go to a small village in the west of China． I know something about China．I will be glad to take part in th

52、e Project 1．（寫明選擇） I have been good at English since I was a student．【高分句型一】 I'm also willing to be a teacher to teach children English． In my opinion，helping people in need is meaningful． I can help people work on the farm because both my father and my mother are farmers． I can do a lot of work on

53、 the farm．Also，I can visit the old people's home to help the old wash clothes and clean the house and so on．（一一寫出原因） It's meanfuling for me to do something for others． 【高分句型二】 Looking forward to your early reply!

54、 Yours Li Hua 十、長沙 第三節(jié)　書面表達(dá) 55.假如你是李華，

55、你們班輸了上周的籃球賽。Henry認(rèn)為是他未能投進(jìn)最后一球所造成的，有的隊友也因此而責(zé)怪他。請你寫一封英文郵件安慰他，談?wù)勀銓Υ耸碌目捶?，并就如何取得隊友的理解提出建議。 要求： （1）80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）； （2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； （3）信中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名和校名。 Dear Henry, I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game…

56、 【答案】Dear Henry, I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losin

57、g the basketball game. It's not easy being in your situation, and it's normal to have these feelings. Anyway, don't be too hard on yourself. You know, basketball is about team effort. It's never just one person's fault. What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes.

58、Besides, you need to think about how you can do better next time. As a whole, teammates should support and believe in each other. Why don't you sit down and communicate with them? And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. If all of you pull together, you're sure to

59、 win the next one. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 這是一篇給材料的書信作文。假如你是李華，就輸球事件安慰Henry，談?wù)勀銓Υ耸碌目捶?，并就如何取得隊友的理解提出建議。人稱為第二人稱，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。動筆前先要注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料確定寫作內(nèi)容；文章必須包括要點中所給的信息，但不要逐句翻譯，補充兩條個人的觀點并提出建議。注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫，多種句式交叉使用來豐富文章的文采。高分句型一：What matters is that you should learn from the games as wel

60、l as your mistakes. 重要的是你應(yīng)該從比賽中吸取教訓(xùn)，也要從錯誤中吸取教訓(xùn)。What matters is that重要的是，that引導(dǎo)的是表語從句。as well as常用來連接兩個并列的成分，作“也，還”講。高分句型二：And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. 你可以保證你會不遺余力地提高你的技能。that引導(dǎo)的是賓語從句，spare no efforts to do sth.不遺余力做某事。高分句型三：If all of you pull together,

61、you're sure to win the next one. 如果大家齊心協(xié)力，你們一定會贏得下一場比賽。此句是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句；be sure to do sth. 必定做某事。 十一、株洲 第三節(jié) 情景作文 51.假定你是李華，準(zhǔn)備參加“一帶一路”國家中學(xué)生英語演講比賽，主題為“現(xiàn)在引領(lǐng)未來”。請你寫一篇演講稿，包括以下內(nèi)容： (1) 你最難忘的一個書包是怎么得來的？ (2) 你喜歡它嗎？為什么？ (3) 描述你將來的書包。 注意：(1)詞數(shù)80左右； (2) 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； (3) 文中不能出現(xiàn)可能透露考生真實身份的任何信息。

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63、 【答案】I have a beautiful school bag. My grandma bought it for me last autumn as a birthday present. I like it very much. My bag is a blue one, and blue is my favourite colour. On the bag, you can see a little tiger, It's very lovely. There are many books in my bag, such as Chinese books,

64、English books and others. And there is a nice pencil-box, too. Inside the bag, there is a small pocket. I often put some money and keys in it. When I study my lessons, the bag is always together with me. It is my close friend, I will take good care of it. In the future, the bag will better than now

65、. It will be smaller and more useful. I hope bag will not so heavy. Though bag in the future will be small, they have big capacity. Bag should be cheap and fashion, too. As far as I am concerned, our own bag will just be opened by ourselves. How great bag ! 【解析】 1、題干解讀：本文屬于材料作文，主要介紹你的書包以及你喜歡它的原因，最

66、后暢想一下未來的書包是什么樣子的。 2、例文點評：本文采用三段式，第一段講述你的書包的來歷，第二段講述你喜歡這個書包以及原因，第三段暢想一下未來的書包。 3、高分亮點： 單詞短語：There be，such as，too，take good care of, in the future,as far as I am concerned等。 句型：How great bag中how引導(dǎo)的感嘆句。 【點睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如There be，such as，take good care of, in the future, How great bag中how引導(dǎo)的感嘆句等；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢，如too，as far as I am concerned；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)