大學(xué)英語(yǔ)專業(yè)寫(xiě)作課程.ppt

Writing Course (II),Xxh March, 2010,Things we should know about writing,1. What is writing 2. Differences between speaking and writing 3. Differences between Chinese writing and western writing,What is writing,Writing is plain hard work. Writing is a process whereby one records his thoughts and ideas into a visual coded message which can be saved or shared with others.,Parallelism between house-builder and writer,House-builder Start from nothing Many possibilities Follow a process Idea Blueprint (plan) Materials Building House,Writer Start from nothing Many possibilities Follow a process Idea Outline Information Writing Essay,Differences between speaking and writing,Speaking Oral and aural Personal (face to face) Loose grammar structure,Writing Visual Impersonal Strict grammar structure,Differences between Chinese writing and western writing,Chinese Circular / Indirect Subjective Imitation / Proverbs Militant language and tone Emphasizing model and moral lessons,Western Linear / Direct Objective Creativity / Individualism Tell the fact Let the logic speak for oneself,專四作文閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn),要求根據(jù)題目寫(xiě)出150200字的短文。全文必須有明確的主題。每段需有主題句，圍繞主題展開(kāi)的推展句和自然過(guò)渡的結(jié)尾，而且句子之間要有轉(zhuǎn)接詞。句子無(wú)論長(zhǎng)短，必須有主要的重心，簡(jiǎn)練并且生動(dòng)。采用整體評(píng)分方式，滿分為20分，五個(gè)分?jǐn)?shù)段的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)如下：,1513分：文章切題，思想內(nèi)容表達(dá)清楚，行文通順流暢，連貫性好，論證嚴(yán)密，論據(jù)充分，基本上無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。 1210分：文章基本切題，思想內(nèi)容表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)言比較通順，連貫性較好，有極少量語(yǔ)法或語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。 97分：文章基本切題，尚能表達(dá)中心思想，但是說(shuō)理不夠清楚，文字連貫性不太好，有部分語(yǔ)法或語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。 64分：文章基本切題，有些地方思想內(nèi)容表達(dá)不清楚，連貫性差，有明顯語(yǔ)法或語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。 31分：文章條理不清，思路混亂，語(yǔ)言缺乏連貫，句子錯(cuò)誤很多。,Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:,You are to write in three parts.In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.,專四便條評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),格式3分（日期，稱呼，結(jié)尾各1分） 內(nèi)容7分（拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)三個(gè)扣1分，語(yǔ)言較差，含語(yǔ)法和結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤，扣1-1.5分） 總體要求： 語(yǔ)言無(wú)誤，格式正確，內(nèi)容完善，字?jǐn)?shù)夠（40-80詞），可給10分。 2分以下，9分以上，嚴(yán)格掌握。 不到40詞，或超過(guò)80詞扣1分。,Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.,SECTION A COMPOSITION 35 MIN,Tourism is a booming business in China. However, some people worry that too many tourists may bring harm to the environment, while others dont think so. What is your opinion? Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?,SECTION B NOTE-WRITING 10 MIN,Lily, your roommate, is looking for a part-time job in the coming summer vacation. You saw an ad for a private English tutor for a schoolboy. Write her a note, telling her what the job is and strongly recommending it to her.,