中考英語滿分特訓(xùn)方案 第二部分 高頻話題寫作指導(dǎo) 九上 Unit 2 保護環(huán)境課件

九年級（上）九年級（上） Unit 2第二部分第二部分 高頻話題寫作指導(dǎo)高頻話題寫作指導(dǎo)保護環(huán)境保護環(huán)境寫作導(dǎo)圖寫作導(dǎo)圖 從全國近五年環(huán)境保護相關(guān)話題書面表達的命從全國近五年環(huán)境保護相關(guān)話題書面表達的命題來看，寫作角度如下：題來看，寫作角度如下： 1.記敘一次環(huán)保活動。如：記敘一次環(huán)?；顒印Ｈ纾?014邵陽邵陽志愿者活志愿者活動，動，2013襄陽襄陽介紹環(huán)保活動；介紹環(huán)保活動； 2. 保護環(huán)境的措施。如：保護環(huán)境的措施。如：2014龍東龍東保護水資源，保護水資源， 2014賀州賀州節(jié)約。節(jié)約。VoluntaryactivityPlace: train stationClean the benchesPerson: classmatesTime: last weekPick up the rubbishSweep the groundTired but happyHope to improveour environmentActivitiesFeelings寫作范文詳見：寫作范文詳見： http:/亮點句型速亮點句型速成成常用句型：常用句型：Everyone should protect the environment. And the world will become much more beautiful.推薦句型：推薦句型：If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.常用句型：常用句型：We should plant many trees, and we can live better and healthier.We are supposed to plant more and more trees in order to live better and healthier in the future.推薦句型：推薦句型：If we plant more and more trees, we will live better and healthier in the future.1. We should not throw litter onto the ground. 2. Its our duty to protect our environment. 3. It is very important to take care of our environment. 4. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees.5. We are supposed to plant more flowers and trees. 6. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin. 7. Trees are very helpful and important for us. 8. Its everyones duty to love and protect the environment. 9. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. 10. Its necessary to save water.11. Recycling trash is also important.典例剖析典例剖析（20142014邵陽邵陽）假設(shè)你叫王磊，目前，我市正在開展創(chuàng)建假設(shè)你叫王磊，目前，我市正在開展創(chuàng)建“文明衛(wèi)生城市文明衛(wèi)生城市”，學(xué)校也提出了，學(xué)校也提出了“垃圾不落垃圾不落地，校園更美麗地，校園更美麗”的口號，為了積極響應(yīng)學(xué)校的口號，為了積極響應(yīng)學(xué)校號召，上周你和幾位同學(xué)到火車站進行志愿者號召，上周你和幾位同學(xué)到火車站進行志愿者活動，貢獻自己的一份力量。請把你所做的事活動，貢獻自己的一份力量。請把你所做的事寫一封電子郵件告訴你的好朋友寫一封電子郵件告訴你的好朋友Bob。Place: Train station; Time: From 8:00 to 12:00 on Saturday morning; People: You and some classmates;Activities: Clean the benches, pick up the rubbish, sweep the ground; Feeling: A little tired but happy.細讀所給的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：細讀所給的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：1. 文章為電子郵件，要求向朋友講述在響應(yīng)文章為電子郵件，要求向朋友講述在響應(yīng)“文明衛(wèi)文明衛(wèi) 生城市生城市”“”“垃圾不落地，校園更美麗垃圾不落地，校園更美麗”的活動中，的活動中，我和同學(xué)們一起到火車站進行志愿者活動的事情我和同學(xué)們一起到火車站進行志愿者活動的事情（包括時間、地點、人物、（包括時間、地點、人物、 活動、感受）?；顒?、感受）。2. 本文描述自己的經(jīng)歷，寫作時用第一人稱，其他人本文描述自己的經(jīng)歷，寫作時用第一人稱，其他人用第三人稱。用第三人稱。3. 回憶事件通常用一般過去時，抒發(fā)個人情感及感悟回憶事件通常用一般過去時，抒發(fā)個人情感及感悟用一般現(xiàn)在時。做到語句通順，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整用一般現(xiàn)在時。做到語句通順，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔，語法正確。潔，語法正確。4. 詞數(shù)應(yīng)不少于詞數(shù)應(yīng)不少于80詞，不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名。詞，不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名。【審題指導(dǎo)審題指導(dǎo)】Bob, Im writing to tell you about a voluntary activity last week. My classmates and I decided to do something to make it cleaner and tidier.開門見山地引開門見山地引出事件；出事件；動詞的復(fù)合賓動詞的復(fù)合賓語結(jié)構(gòu)，語結(jié)構(gòu)，make sth. adj.， make it cleaner and tidier “使使更清潔、更清潔、更整潔更整潔”，增加，增加了文章的可讀性；了文章的可讀性；【范文點評范文點評】First, we cleaned the benches, and then we picked up the rubbish and advised others not to throw rubbish here and there. At noon, we swept the ground together and then we left. 固定詞組固定詞組cleaned the benches，picked up the rubbish等的等的運用彰顯小作者詞運用彰顯小作者詞匯之豐富，也是增匯之豐富，也是增分的亮點；分的亮點； We were a little tired after long hours of hard work, but we were still very happy. I hope everyone will make a contribution to improving the environment of our city. Hope to write soon. Best wishes! Yours, Wang Lei點明主題并升華，點明主題并升華，a little tired but happy“有點累但有點累但是很高興是很高興”；make a contribu-tion “為為做出貢做出貢獻獻”。彰顯了小。彰顯了小作者詞語運用的作者詞語運用的嫻熟，也給文章嫻熟，也給文章增色不少。增色不少。