中考英語(yǔ)滿(mǎn)分特訓(xùn)方案 第二部分 高頻話題寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo) 九全 Unit 1314 保護(hù)環(huán)境、學(xué)校生活課件

第二部分第二部分 高頻話題寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)高頻話題寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)九年級(jí)（全）九年級(jí)（全） Units 13-14保護(hù)環(huán)境保護(hù)環(huán)境寫(xiě)作導(dǎo)圖寫(xiě)作導(dǎo)圖 從全國(guó)近五年環(huán)境保護(hù)相關(guān)話題書(shū)面表從全國(guó)近五年環(huán)境保護(hù)相關(guān)話題書(shū)面表達(dá)的命題來(lái)看，寫(xiě)作角度如下：達(dá)的命題來(lái)看，寫(xiě)作角度如下：1. 記敘一次環(huán)?；顒?dòng)。如：記敘一次環(huán)保活動(dòng)。如：2014邵陽(yáng)志愿者邵陽(yáng)志愿者 活動(dòng)，活動(dòng)，2013襄陽(yáng)介紹環(huán)?；顒?dòng)；襄陽(yáng)介紹環(huán)?；顒?dòng)；2. 保護(hù)環(huán)境的措施。如：保護(hù)環(huán)境的措施。如：2014龍東保護(hù)水資龍東保護(hù)水資 源，源，2014賀州節(jié)約。賀州節(jié)約。Time:last weekSweep the groundPick up the rubbishPerson:classmatesClean the benchPlace:train stationVoluntary activityHope to improve our environmentTired but happyfeelingsActivities寫(xiě)作范文詳見(jiàn)：寫(xiě)作范文詳見(jiàn)： http:/ 亮點(diǎn)句型速成亮點(diǎn)句型速成常用句型：常用句型：Everyone should protect the environment. And the world will become much more beautiful.推薦句型：推薦句型： If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.常用句型：常用句型：We should plant many trees, and we can live better and healthier.推薦句型：推薦句型： We are supposed to plant more and more trees in order to live better and healthier in the future. If we plant more and more trees, we will live better and more trees, we will live better and healthier in the future.1. We should not throw litter onto the ground. 2. Its our duty to protect our environment. 3. It is very important to take care of our environment. 4. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees. 5. We are supposed to plant more flowers and trees. 6. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin. 7. Trees are very helpful and important for us. 8. Its everyones duty to love and protect the environment. 9. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. 10. Its necessary to save water.11. Recycling trash is also important.典例剖析典例剖析（20142014邵陽(yáng)邵陽(yáng)） 假設(shè)你叫王磊，目前，我市正在開(kāi)展創(chuàng)建假設(shè)你叫王磊，目前，我市正在開(kāi)展創(chuàng)建“文明衛(wèi)生城市文明衛(wèi)生城市”，學(xué)校也提出了，學(xué)校也提出了“垃圾不落地，垃圾不落地，校園更美麗校園更美麗”的口號(hào)，為了積極響應(yīng)學(xué)校號(hào)召，的口號(hào)，為了積極響應(yīng)學(xué)校號(hào)召，上周你和幾位同學(xué)到火車(chē)站進(jìn)行志愿者活動(dòng)，貢上周你和幾位同學(xué)到火車(chē)站進(jìn)行志愿者活動(dòng)，貢獻(xiàn)自己的一份力量。請(qǐng)把你所做的事寫(xiě)一封電子獻(xiàn)自己的一份力量。請(qǐng)把你所做的事寫(xiě)一封電子郵件告訴你的好朋友郵件告訴你的好朋友Bob。PlaceTrain stationTimeFrom 8:00 to 12:00 on Saturday morningPeopleYou and some classmatesActivitiesClean the benches, pick up the rubbish, sweep the groundFeelingA little tired but happy要求：要求： 1. 80詞左右，文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞詞左右，文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞 數(shù)；數(shù)； 2. 文章盡可能包括表格中所有信息，語(yǔ)言流文章盡可能包括表格中所有信息，語(yǔ)言流 暢，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔；暢，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔； 3. 文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名及校名。文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名及校名。Bob, Im writing to tell you about a voluntary activity last week._【審題指導(dǎo)審題指導(dǎo)】細(xì)讀所給的文字提示，可以提取以細(xì)讀所給的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：下信息：1. 1. 文章為電子郵件，要求向朋友講述在響應(yīng)文章為電子郵件，要求向朋友講述在響應(yīng)“文明衛(wèi)生城市文明衛(wèi)生城市”“”“垃圾不落地，校園更美麗垃圾不落地，校園更美麗”的活動(dòng)中，我和同學(xué)們一起到火車(chē)站進(jìn)行志愿者的活動(dòng)中，我和同學(xué)們一起到火車(chē)站進(jìn)行志愿者活動(dòng)（包括時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、活動(dòng)（包括時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、 活動(dòng)、感受）?；顒?dòng)、感受）。2. 2. 本文描述自己的經(jīng)歷，寫(xiě)作時(shí)用第一人稱(chēng)，本文描述自己的經(jīng)歷，寫(xiě)作時(shí)用第一人稱(chēng)，其他人用第三人稱(chēng)。其他人用第三人稱(chēng)。 3. 3. 回憶事件通常用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，抒發(fā)個(gè)人情感回憶事件通常用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，抒發(fā)個(gè)人情感及感悟用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。語(yǔ)句通順，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷及感悟用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。語(yǔ)句通順，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔，語(yǔ)法正確。面整潔，語(yǔ)法正確。4. 4. 詞數(shù)應(yīng)不少于詞數(shù)應(yīng)不少于8080詞，不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校詞，不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名。名?！痉段狞c(diǎn)評(píng)范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】Bob, Im writing to tell you about a voluntary activity last week. My classmates and I decided to do something to make it cleaner and tidier. 開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山地引出開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山地引出事件；動(dòng)詞的復(fù)事件；動(dòng)詞的復(fù)合賓語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)，合賓語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)，make sth. adj.， make it cleaner and tidier “使使更清潔、更清潔、更整潔更整潔”，增加了，增加了文章的可讀性；文章的可讀性；First, we cleaned the benches, and then we picked up the rubbish and advised others not to throw rubbish here and there. At noon, we swept the ground together and then we left.固定詞組固定詞組cleaned the benches，picked up the rubbish等的運(yùn)等的運(yùn)用彰顯小作者詞用彰顯小作者詞匯之豐富，也是匯之豐富，也是增分的亮點(diǎn)；增分的亮點(diǎn)；We were a little tired after long hours of hard work, but we were still very happy. I hope everyone will make a contribution to improving the environment of our city.點(diǎn)明主題并升華，點(diǎn)明主題并升華，a little tired but happy“有點(diǎn)累但有點(diǎn)累但是很高興是很高興”；make a contribution“為為做出貢做出貢獻(xiàn)獻(xiàn)”。彰顯了小作。彰顯了小作者詞語(yǔ)運(yùn)用的嫻熟，者詞語(yǔ)運(yùn)用的嫻熟，也給文章增色不少。也給文章增色不少。 Hope to write soon. Best wishes! Yours, Wang Lei學(xué)校生活學(xué)校生活 寫(xiě)作導(dǎo)圖寫(xiě)作導(dǎo)圖 從云南近四年學(xué)校生活相關(guān)話題書(shū)面表達(dá)的從云南近四年學(xué)校生活相關(guān)話題書(shū)面表達(dá)的命題來(lái)看，此類(lèi)作文命題角度主要集中在初中的命題來(lái)看，此類(lèi)作文命題角度主要集中在初中的學(xué)習(xí)和生活，以及校園中的人物事件等的描述。學(xué)習(xí)和生活，以及校園中的人物事件等的描述。主要涉及的有主要涉及的有：2013云南、云南、2014昆明、昆明、2013云南、云南、2012德宏、德宏、2012普洱、普洱、2011昭通。昭通。Some wishsmake friends; get on well with; share happiness and sadness; help each otherRegretful things learn lots of knowledge; helpful; broaden ones eyes; read interesting booksHappy school daysA talk to myselfjoin in more outdoor activities; value school days; take exercise; a balanced diet; life in the future more and more beautifultoo much homework; no enough time; no outdoor activities; too many rules; quarrel with others 寫(xiě)作范文詳見(jiàn)：寫(xiě)作范文詳見(jiàn)： http:/ 亮點(diǎn)句型速成亮點(diǎn)句型速成常用句型：常用句型：The homework is too much. I have no outdoor activities.推薦句型：推薦句型： I cant join in many outdoor activities because of toomuch homework. There is so much homework that I dont have enough time to take part in outdoor activities.常用句型：常用句型：I have a happy school life.推薦句型：推薦句型： With these special memories, I have a happy and colorful school life. I have a happy school life which I will never forget. 常用句型：常用句型：I like playing football.推薦句型：推薦句型： I like playing football on the playground. I like playing football on the playground with great interest.常用句型：常用句型：I feel very sad today, because I didnt pass the math exam again.推薦句型：推薦句型： I feel terrible today for I failed again in the math exam. How terrible I feel today! I failed again in the math exam.1. My favorite subject is physics.2. Its difficult but interesting.3. Last weeks talent show in our class was a great success.4. Studying grammar is a great way to learn a language.5. It is easy for me to understand.6. Teenagers should be allowed to.7. There are a lot of rules at my school. 8. You have given me so much help that I will never forget.9. The school life is very busy and exciting. There are many activities in our school, such as. 10. Our teachers have taught us a lot. They not only teach us how to learn, but also teach us how to be a useful person in society.11. Our school where are many trees and flowers around is clean and beautiful.典例剖析典例剖析（2013云南）云南）A Talk to Myself提示：提示： 在初中三年的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中，你有許多快在初中三年的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中，你有許多快 樂(lè)，也有許多遺憾。在即將畢業(yè)之際，你樂(lè)，也有許多遺憾。在即將畢業(yè)之際，你 想對(duì)自己說(shuō)點(diǎn)什么呢？請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給題目用想對(duì)自己說(shuō)點(diǎn)什么呢？請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給題目用 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。要求：要求： 1. 語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù) 不少于不少于60個(gè)；個(gè)； 2. 文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以 零分計(jì)。零分計(jì)。【審題指導(dǎo)審題指導(dǎo)】1. 寫(xiě)作的對(duì)象是寫(xiě)作的對(duì)象是“我自己我自己”,行文用第一人稱(chēng)。行文用第一人稱(chēng)。2. 從三年中的快樂(lè)；三年中的遺憾；對(duì)自從三年中的快樂(lè)；三年中的遺憾；對(duì)自 己說(shuō)的話及對(duì)未來(lái)生活的希望三個(gè)方面陳述。己說(shuō)的話及對(duì)未來(lái)生活的希望三個(gè)方面陳述。3. 陳述陳述“我我”在學(xué)習(xí)生活中的快樂(lè)和遺憾時(shí)，用在學(xué)習(xí)生活中的快樂(lè)和遺憾時(shí)，用一一 般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)；如果表達(dá)對(duì)未來(lái)充滿(mǎn)希望，則用般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)；如果表達(dá)對(duì)未來(lái)充滿(mǎn)希望，則用 一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)。一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)。4. 短文應(yīng)包括提示的全部信息：初中三年學(xué)習(xí)和短文應(yīng)包括提示的全部信息：初中三年學(xué)習(xí)和 生活中的快樂(lè)和遺憾；在畢業(yè)之際，要給自己生活中的快樂(lè)和遺憾；在畢業(yè)之際，要給自己 說(shuō)的話。說(shuō)的話。5. 詞數(shù)不少于詞數(shù)不少于60詞，不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名。詞，不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名?！痉段狞c(diǎn)評(píng)范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】A Talk to Myself How time flies! Im leaving school soon. I really have a lot to talk to myself.How time flies！用一個(gè)感嘆句來(lái)感用一個(gè)感嘆句來(lái)感嘆時(shí)間的飛逝，給嘆時(shí)間的飛逝，給讀者留下了深刻印讀者留下了深刻印象，使得文章增加象，使得文章增加文采。文采。 Luckily, my teachers are very friendly. They not only give me knowledge but also tell me how to be a man. And my classmates are helpful. We share happiness and sadness in our school life.not onlybut also使得句子通順使得句子通順連貫，使得文章句連貫，使得文章句式更加豐富，也顯式更加豐富，也顯示作者對(duì)連接詞的示作者對(duì)連接詞的掌握和運(yùn)用水平；掌握和運(yùn)用水平；賓語(yǔ)從句賓語(yǔ)從句how to do的使用使得顯示了的使用使得顯示了作者較高的語(yǔ)言表作者較高的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。達(dá)能力。 However, Im also upset sometimes. I dont take part in outdoor activities quite often because of too much homework. I know its not good for me. Ill try my best to join in more.however的運(yùn)用的運(yùn)用承上啟下，行文承上啟下，行文自然。自然。用固定短語(yǔ)用固定短語(yǔ)take part in，quite often，because of，too much彰顯作彰顯作者詞匯之豐富，者詞匯之豐富，是增分的一大亮是增分的一大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)。 I believe that my life in the future will be more and more beautiful.使用主從復(fù)合句來(lái)使用主從復(fù)合句來(lái)總結(jié)全文，既使文章總結(jié)全文，既使文章句式豐富，又呼吁主句式豐富，又呼吁主題，相信自己以后的題，相信自己以后的生活會(huì)更好。生活會(huì)更好。