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1、第三周　考場作文常見的3類錯誤及防范措施 一、考場作文常見的3類錯誤 考場作文常見的錯誤主要分為三類：詞匯類錯誤、語法類錯誤和漢語式英語。 (一)詞匯類錯誤 考試時，我們很容易出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫錯誤和詞形變化錯誤；而詞性不清和詞匯用法方面的錯誤主要還是受漢語的影響。其應(yīng)對措施是在備考時要多注意容易拼錯或容易出現(xiàn)詞形變化的單詞，真正用心去體會英語詞匯的詞性和運(yùn)用，對一些固定習(xí)語更不能想當(dāng)然地改動。 1．單詞拼寫錯誤 誤：Our English teacher is friendly but very strick with us students. 正：Our English teach

2、er is friendly but very strict with us students. 2．詞形變化錯誤 誤：People throwed cans, paper, bags and so on into the river water. 正：People threw cans, paper, bags and so on into the river water. 3．詞性不清錯誤 誤：Doing a part-time job always effects study. 正：Doing a part-time job always affects study. 4．

3、詞匯用法錯誤 誤：He opened the light after he entered the room. 正：He turned on the light after he entered the room. 5．擅自改動習(xí)語 誤：We lost the game, but we didn’t lose our heart. 正：We lost the game, but we didn’t lose heart. [即時演練]　改正下列句子中的錯誤 1．We must try our best to prevent the enviroment from being po

4、lluted. enviroment→environment 2．There is no doubt that keeping an English diary helps you a lot with writen English.writen→written 3．During my summer vacation, I spent half a month in the country and played very happy.happy→happily 4．We must notice our pronunciation when we speak English.notice

5、→pay_attention_to 5．Just in the front of our house stands a tall tree with a history of 1,000 years. in_the_front_of→in_front_of_ (二)語法類錯誤 一個正確的句子除了用詞得當(dāng)外，語法也應(yīng)該準(zhǔn)確無誤。如果語法不正確，再好的構(gòu)思也難以正確地表達(dá)，語法錯誤的多少會直接影響作文的檔次。英語寫作中語法類錯誤主要表現(xiàn)在：時態(tài)、語態(tài)錯誤、非謂語動詞使用錯誤、主謂一致錯誤、比較級使用錯誤、多余的詞以及平行錯誤等。 1．時態(tài)、語態(tài)錯誤 誤：Children who rai

6、se in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. 正：Children who are raised in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. 2．非謂語動詞使用錯誤 誤：Comparing with other countries, the country pays little attention to the pol

7、lution. 正：Compared with other countries, the country pays little attention to the pollution. 3．主謂一致錯誤 誤：My hobby is widespread, which include drawing, collecting stamps and so on. 正：My hobby is widespread, which includes drawing, collecting stamps and so on. 4．比較級使用錯誤 誤：With the development of

8、 transportation, the world seems to be getting more and more smaller. 正：With the development of transportation, the world seems to be getting smaller and smaller. 5．多余的詞 誤：On one day, he went to the cinema. 正：One day, he went to the cinema. 6．平行錯誤 誤：Then I put my book under my desk, opening it

9、 and started looking for the answer. 正：Then I put my book under my desk, opened it and started looking for the answer. [即時演練]　改正下列句子中的錯誤 1．In the morning, we had bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees.去掉had 2．Not only Tom but also I are tired of one examination after another.are→am 3．They think

10、 students should have their own time to study and it is more quieter at home._more→much或去掉more__ 4．There have been more and more road accidents happened in recent years.happened→happening 5．More and more people entered into the hall, so it became crowded.去掉into (三)漢語式英語 一般來說，英漢兩種語言既有許多相似之處，又有許多不

11、同之處。在寫作時如果想當(dāng)然地去寫，會出現(xiàn)許多漢語式英語，其中主要包括：純漢語式思維和漢語式語序、句子成分殘缺、句子粘連以及搭配不當(dāng)?shù)取? 1．純漢語式思維和漢語式語序 誤：At this school studying, I really very happy. 正：Studying at this school, I am really very happy. 2．句子成分殘缺 誤：There are many students don’t support the project. 正：There are many students who don’t support the pr

12、oject. 3．句子粘連 誤：On the other hand, dogs are our best friends, bring us a lot of fun. 正：On the other hand, dogs are our best friends, which/and bring us a lot of fun. 4．搭配不當(dāng) 誤：We walked a far way before planting trees. 正：We walked a long way before planting trees. 誤：Under the help of the teach

13、er, I have made great progress in my English. 正：With the help of the teacher, I have made great progress in my English. [即時演練]　改正下列句子中的錯誤 1．We are impossible to finish the work in such a short time. We_are_impossible→It_is_impossible_for_us 2．It’s known that the cost in big cities is very expen

14、sive.expensive→high 3．He has greatly improved his spoken English by this way.by→in或way→means 4．I haven’t heard from your letter for a long time and I miss you very much.your_letter→you 5．He has three sons, all of them work in Beijing.在逗號后加and或them→whom 二、防范出現(xiàn)錯誤的2個措施 寫對句子是作文得高分的關(guān)鍵和保證，考場上要避免上述低級錯

15、誤，可采取以下兩個措施。 (一)確定主語 英語句子無論多長都有自己的主語(祈使句省略了主語you)。動手寫句子首先要確定主語，其次要特別注意漢語與英語的區(qū)別。例如： ①北京八月多雨。 誤：Beijing rains much in August. 正：It rains much in Beijing in August. ②寫得很匆忙，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)書中滿是錯誤。 誤：Written in a hurry, we found the book full of mistakes. 正：Written in a hurry, the book was found full of mist

16、akes (by us)． (二)確定謂語動詞 英語中沒有動詞就構(gòu)不成句子，但動詞千變?nèi)f化，稍不注意就會寫錯句子。在寫句子時應(yīng)特別注意以下幾個方面： 1．注意及物與不及物動詞的正確運(yùn)用。 誤：The living standard of the people has raised in the past twenty years. 正：The living standard of the people has risen/has been raised in the past twenty years. 2．注意延續(xù)性與非延續(xù)性動詞的正確運(yùn)用。 誤：He has left his

17、 hometown for twenty years. 正：He has been away from his hometown for twenty years. 3．注意一些不可用于被動語態(tài)的動詞。 誤：Many stars are appeared in the sky at night. 正：Many stars appear in the sky at night. [綜合演練提能]　 Ⅰ.以下句子含有考生常犯的錯誤，請改正 1．Dr. Smith, together with his wife, are to arrive on the evening flight.

18、are→is 2．The car hitted the old man and drived away.hitted→hit;_drived→drove 3．It is high time we do something to reduce traffic accidents.do→did或在do前加should 4．There are many students are planting trees on the hill.去掉第二個are或在students后加who 5．Eat at school is very convenient for students. 句子改為：It

19、_is_very_convenient_for_students_to_eat_at_school. 6．It was Sunday, they all went for a picnic in the woods.在逗號后加so或was→being 7．Would you please meet my uncle at the airport because this is the first time visit to the US？去掉time 8．While having our dinner, the doorbell rang. 在having_前加we_are或the_d

20、oorbell_rang→we_heard_the_doorbell_ringing 9．Recently our village has taken place great changes. 句子改為：Recently_great_changes_have_taken_place_in_our_village. 10．Fishing is his favorite hobby, and he also likes collecting coins. he_also_likes_collecting_coins→collecting_coins_also_gives_him_pleas

21、ure Ⅱ.下面的考生作文中含有10處錯誤，請改正 (2020·南昌市第三次模擬)生活中，朋友間免不了會有沖突和誤會，解決方法之一就是及時道歉。假如你是李華，Henry是你最要好的朋友，你們約好昨晚7點(diǎn)半在新華書店門口見面?？墒怯捎趮寢屧卺t(yī)院看病，回家晚了，你得在家照顧妹妹。又因忘帶手機(jī)而沒能及時聯(lián)系到Henry而失約了。請給Henry寫一封道歉信以化解誤會。 內(nèi)容包括： 1．表示歉意；2.解釋失約的原因；3.請求原諒。 注意：1.不得在文中出現(xiàn)作者的真實(shí)姓名； 2．語句連貫，詞數(shù)100左右。作文的標(biāo)題、開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 A Letter of Apology

22、 Dear Henry， I am really sorry __________________________________________________________ I won’t let things like that happen again. Yours， Li Hua [求診病文] A Letter of Apology Dear Henry， ①I am really sorry that I can not meet you at 7：30 last night. ②I do hope you didn’t wait too long outside

23、 Xinhua Bookstore. ③On yesterday afternoon, I had to look after my younger sister until my mother returned back home. ④She was ill and stayed at the doctor’s so that she arrived at home very late. ⑤I ran all the way to the bus stop only finding the last bus had already left. ⑥I had to call a taxi,

24、but it was already half an hour later. ⑦I was going to call up you, but I had forgotten my mobile phone at home. ⑧Finally, I had no choice but to go back home, disappointing and sad. ⑨I sincere hope that you will forgive me and we can be best friends as usual. ⑩I won’t let things like that happen a

25、gain. Yours， Li Hua [診斷結(jié)果] 第①句：can→could 第③句：On_yesterday→Yesterday;_去掉back或returned→came 第④句：去掉arrived后面的at 第⑤句：finding→to_find 第⑥句：later→late 第⑦句：call_up_you→call_you_up;_forgotten→left_behind 第⑧句：disappointing→disappointed 第⑨句：sincere→sincerely 第二步用高級表達(dá)增分(用時9周) 閱卷時，一篇高考作文往往在1分鐘內(nèi)就被判定生死，大眾化的詞匯、平庸的表達(dá)已使長時間工作的閱卷老師產(chǎn)生了視覺疲勞。在詞匯方面：如果一篇作文中突然出現(xiàn)幾個與眾不同、讓人眼前一亮的詞匯，閱卷老師的給分也絕不會吝嗇；在句式方面：如果考生多運(yùn)用一些并列句和復(fù)合句等高級句式，并注意句式的靈活多變，使文章讀起來抑揚(yáng)頓挫，讓考生深厚的語言功底得以體現(xiàn)，閱卷老師一定會毫不猶豫地將你的作文定位于五檔線。