2020版高考英語(yǔ)大二輪復(fù)習(xí) 專題六 寫作規(guī)范練（二）

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1、寫作規(guī)范練(二) (限時(shí)：35分鐘) 寫作(共兩節(jié)，滿分35分) 第一節(jié)　短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分) 假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。 修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。 [2019·湖南長(zhǎng)郡中學(xué)適應(yīng)性考試]It is one

2、 of most exciting experiences in my life. My relationship with the motorcycles begin when I was a child. The feelings are difficultly to explain. There is an important difference among cars and motorcycles. Cars forgive mistakes, but motorcycles don't. There are two important period in my life relat

3、ing to the motorcycles: the beginning and today. My father bought we a little motorcycle. My sisters and brother already knew how to ride motorcycles. I was at five years old, and I remember perfectly the first day which my father taught me to ride it. I was not afraid but I drove all afternoo

4、n on the tennis court. 答案與解析： It is one of most exciting experiences in my life. My relationship with the motorcycles when I was a child. The feelings are to explain. There is an important difference cars and motorcycles. Cars forgive mistakes, but motorcycles don't. There are two importan

5、t in my life to the motorcycles: the beginning and today. My father bought a little motorcycle. My sisters and brother already knew how to ride motorcycles. I was at five years old, and I remember perfectly the first day my father taught me to ride it. I was not afraid I drove all a

6、fternoon on the tennis court. ①在one of后加the　“one of the＋形容詞的最高級(jí)＋名詞復(fù)數(shù)”為固定搭配，意為“最……的……之一”，故在one of后加the。 ②begin改為began　根據(jù)后面的when I was a child可知，此處敘述發(fā)生在過(guò)去的事情，應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，故將begin改為began。 ③difficultly改為difficult　此處應(yīng)用形容詞作表語(yǔ)，表示主語(yǔ)的狀態(tài)或特征，故將difficultly改為difficult。 ④among改為between　among表示三者及以上的“在……中間”；between

7、表示在兩者之間，一般與and搭配使用。此處介紹的是汽車和摩托車的區(qū)別，故將among改為between。 ⑤period改為periods　period為可數(shù)名詞，此處前有two修飾，應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故將period改為periods。 ⑥r(nóng)elating改為related　句中已有謂語(yǔ)are，且與此處無(wú)連詞連接，故應(yīng)用非謂語(yǔ)形式。又因relate與其邏輯主語(yǔ)之間為被動(dòng)關(guān)系，應(yīng)用過(guò)去分詞表示被動(dòng)，故將relating改為related。 ⑦we改為us　此處作動(dòng)詞bought的賓語(yǔ)，應(yīng)用賓格形式，故將we改為us。 ⑧刪除at　本句為主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，直接用表示年齡的短語(yǔ)“數(shù)詞＋year(s)

8、 old”作表語(yǔ)，不需要介詞，故刪除at。 ⑨在which前加on或which改為when　此處是定語(yǔ)從句，從句中缺少狀語(yǔ)，而先行詞day表示時(shí)間。which在從句中代指先行詞day，作介詞on的賓語(yǔ)，與介詞on構(gòu)成從句的狀語(yǔ)，或者用副詞when，故在which前加on或?qū)hich改為when。 ⑩but改為and　本句中的“我不害怕”和“我在網(wǎng)球場(chǎng)騎了一下午摩托車”之間為并列關(guān)系，并非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故將but改為and。 第二節(jié)　書面表達(dá)(滿分25分) [2019·桂林、賀州市調(diào)研]假定你是高三學(xué)生李華，你在校園網(wǎng)上看到一則招募暑假英語(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)志愿者的廣告，請(qǐng)你寫一封信申請(qǐng)參加。內(nèi)容包括

9、： 1．自身的英語(yǔ)情況； 2．相關(guān)經(jīng)驗(yàn)。 注意： 1．詞數(shù)100左右； 2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯：英語(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)English Summer Camp Dear Sir/Madam， My name is Li Hua and I'm a student in a high school. ________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________

10、_______________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly， Li Hua 參考范文： Dear Sir/Madam， My name is Li Hua and I'm a student in a high school. I'd like to apply t

11、o be a volunteer of the English Summer Camp. First of all, I'm very fond of English, and I often take an active part in all kinds of activities related to English. ①Having a good knowledge of English grammar and going to the English corner every Sunday afternoon do a lot of good to my spoken Englis

12、h. ②Second, I've taken part in plenty of voluntary work since Senior 1, through which I have gained much valuable experience. I find it meaningful to help people and consider it a pleasure. Last but not least, I've got a great deal of experience in organizing English activities. All in all,

13、I'd be honored if you can choose me. I'll make every effort to do my job and you won't regret it. Yours truly， Li Hua 一句多譯： ①M(fèi)y spoken English is excellent due to the fact that I have a good knowledge of English grammar and go to the English corner every Sunday afternoon. ②Secondly, I've taken part in plenty of voluntary work since Senior 1, which helped me gain lots of valuable experience. - 4 -