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景點介紹類作文寫作指導,介紹旅游景點1.整體介紹：地理位置、歷史背景、來此旅游的必要性。2.介紹地方特色：風景名勝、人文。3.衣食住行方面的信息。1.語言要生動形象2.語言表達多樣化3.時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時,必備詞匯,1人口2面積3氣候4政治5經(jīng)濟6文化7教育8交通9自然資源10名勝,populationareaclimatepoliticseconomycultureeducationtransportationnaturalresourcesaplaceofinterest/touristattractions,必備詞匯,11景色12壯觀的13歷史珍寶14方便的15坐落于16因...而聞名17富有/盛產(chǎn)18具有..的歷史19有..的人口20.占地..的面積,scenerymagnificenthistoricaltreasureconvenientbelocated/situatedinbeknown/famousforberichinhaveahistoryofhaveapopulationofcoveranareaof...,常見錯誤(句子表達)1.ShaolinTempleatthefootofSongshanmountain.2.ShaolinTempleinDengfengcityofHenanprovince.病句問題：無謂語動詞正確句子：ShaolinTemple_________________atthefootofSongshanmountain.,is/islocatedat,常見錯誤(句子表達)3.ShaolinTemple,whichissurroundedwithforestsandhills.4.ShaolinTemple,whichislocatedinDengfengcityofHenanprovince.病句問題：無主句，就無從句。正確句子：見10班佳句欣賞。,,常見錯誤(句子表達)5.Henanhasverygoodweatherisfitfortravel.病句問題：一個簡單句中兩個謂語動詞，之間又無連詞連接，又不是從句，則為病句。正確句子：(加連詞)Henanhasverygoodweatherandisfitfortravel.(變從句)Henanhasverygoodweather,whichisfitfortravel.,常見錯誤(句子表達)5.Henanhasverygoodweatherisfitfortravel.正確句子：(用with結構)Withverygoodweather,Henanisfitfortravel.(it形式賓語)ThegoodweathertheremakesitfitfortouriststotravelinHenan.,表達升級,1.少林寺(1)位于河南省登封市嵩山腳下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3)少林功夫名揚天下。普通版：ShaolinTemplewaslocatedatthefootofSongshanMountain,inDengfengcityofHenanprovince.Itwasbuiltin495ADintheNorthernWeiDynasty.ItwasfamousfortheShaolinKungFu.,表達升級,1.少林寺(1)位于河南省登封市嵩山腳下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3)少林功夫名揚天下。升級版：LocatedatthefootofSongshanMountain,ShaolinTemplewasfamousforitsShanolinKungfu.,(非謂語結構巧結合),表達升級,少林寺(1)位于河南省登封市嵩山腳下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3)少林功夫名揚天下。升級版：Shaolintemplewasbuiltin495AD,soithasalonghistory.Builtin495ADintheNorthernWeiDynasty,Shaolintemplehasalonghistory.,豐富內(nèi)容加從句,表達升級,少林寺(1)位于河南省登封市嵩山腳下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3)少林功夫名揚天下。升級版：WhatattractstouristsallovertheworldisShaolinKungfu.,豐富表達加從句,表達升級,2.其它信息:氣候適宜；交通方便。普通版：Theweatherthereispleasantandthetransportationisconvenient.,表達升級,2.其它信息:氣候適宜；交通方便。升級版：Notonlyistheweatherpleasant,butalsothetransportationisconvenient.并列結構運用notonly..butalso倒裝,表達升級,2.其它信息:氣候適宜；交通方便。升級版：Withthepleasantweatherandconvenienttransportation,youcanenjoyawonderfultripthere.,10班佳句欣賞,一.巧用從句要用對。(6句)1.TheShaolinTempleislocatedatthefootofSongshanMountain,whichissituatedinDengfengcity.2.Manyforeigners,whoarefromallovertheworld,cometolearnShaolinKungfu.(有主句才有從句)3.ItiswellknownforShaolinKungfu,whichisverypopularallovertheworld.3.Itsmypleasuretobeyourguide.4.ShaolinTempleisoneofthebesttemplesinChina.,10班佳句欣賞,一.巧用從句要用對。(6句)4.ThereasonwhyitissopopularisthatitisfamousforShaolinKungfu.5.OneofthemostimportantthingsisthatShaolinTempleisfamousforitsShaolinKungfu.6.ThetrafficinHenanisconvenient,becauseyoucangowhereveryouwantbybus.,10班佳句欣賞,二.思維開闊巧拓展。(6句)1.ShaolinTempleisoneofthebesttemplesinChina.2.Apartfromthis,itwillbeconvenienttogooutbecauseofthesmoothtransportation.3.BecauseofShaolinKungfu,ShaolinTempleisbecomingmoreandmorepopularallovertheworld.,10班佳句欣賞,二.思維開闊巧拓展。(6句)4.Whenyougetthere,youwillbegreatlyimpressedbyitsbeautifulview.Theweatherisfineandtheairthereispleasanttobreathe.5.TheShaolinKungfuisavaluabletreasureinourtraditionalculture.6.Ithasalonghistory,becauseitwasbuiltintheNothernWeiDynasty.,10班佳句欣賞,三.學以致用高境界。(3句)1.YoumustkeepyoureyesopenifyouarewanttomakeyourtriptoSongshanMountainenjoyableandworthwhile.2.ItisconvenientforyoutovisitShaolinTemple.3.Ifyouwanttogo,Illprovideguideserviceforyouandgiveyouawarmwelcome.,書面表達(報紙第2期)假定你是李華，你的加拿大筆友Tom將于八月來中國的少林寺旅游，來信向你了解有關旅游景點的情況。請你用英語給他寫封回信，內(nèi)容主要包括：1.少林寺相關情況:(1)位于河南省登封市嵩山腳下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3)少林功夫名揚天下2.其它信息:氣候適宜；交通方便。3.表示愿意提供導游服務。,DearTom,IamgladtohearthatyourecomingtoChinainAugust.ImwritingtotellyoumoreaboutShaolinTemple.ShaolinTemple,whichissurroundedbyforestsandhills,islocatedatthefootofSongshanMountain,inDengfengcityofHenanprovince.Itissaidtohavebeenbuilt,in495AD,duringtheNorthernWeiDynasty.ItiswellknownforshaolinKungfu,whichhasbecomepopularallovertheworld.Besides,theniceweatherandconvenienttransportationherecanmakeyourtripmoreenjoyable.Idliketoactasyourguide,ifyoudontmind.Imsureyouwillhaveagoodtime.,Yours,LiHua,