2019中考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí) 寫(xiě)作 關(guān)于My friends.doc

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關(guān)于My friends 1.寫(xiě)作步驟：定基調(diào)—列提綱、寫(xiě)句子—巧銜接—添佳句—成篇章 2.寫(xiě)作任務(wù): 為了提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作能力，你和你的美國(guó)筆友Jack約定你每周就一個(gè)話題寫(xiě)一篇短文發(fā)給他，他對(duì)你的作文進(jìn)行點(diǎn)評(píng)指導(dǎo)。假如這次的話題是“My friends”，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文介紹你的兩位朋友(一位與你相似，一位不同于你)，然后發(fā)給Jack。 思路點(diǎn)撥 1.定基調(diào) 體裁：描述與朋友之間的異同，屬于描寫(xiě)性質(zhì)的文體。 時(shí)態(tài)：描述人物現(xiàn)在的情況，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 人稱(chēng)：描述他人時(shí)，用第三人稱(chēng)。 2.列提綱、寫(xiě)句子 列提綱 寫(xiě)句子 引出話題 I have lots of good friends. Although we don’t see each other often, we know each other very well. Here are two of my best friends Jenny and Linda. 介紹朋友 和你相似的朋友 (1) Jenny ______________(和我相似) in some ways. (2) We both ______________(長(zhǎng)著小眼睛，戴眼鏡). (3) We are both ______________(個(gè)子高，有點(diǎn)胖). (4) We are both ______________(外向的). (5) Both of us enjoy ______________(一起讀書(shū)). 和你不同的朋友 (6) Linda ______________(和我不同). (7) She ______________(長(zhǎng)著烏黑的大眼睛). (8) She ______________(比我矮、瘦). (9) She ______________(比我安靜). (10) At school, we are both hard-working, but she ______________(更加努力), so she always ______________(取得比我更好的成績(jī)). 表達(dá)觀點(diǎn) I don’t care if friends are the same as me or different (11)______________(只要他們好). 3.巧銜接 (1)寫(xiě)我和朋友相同點(diǎn)時(shí)可用and和also羅列；還可運(yùn)用詞匯的重復(fù)使前后句銜接自然，語(yǔ)意連貫，如similar to, we both, we are both, both of us等。 (2)從寫(xiě)和我相似的朋友轉(zhuǎn)到寫(xiě)和我不同的朋友時(shí)，以及在寫(xiě)某一點(diǎn)Linda與我不同時(shí)，可用but作為對(duì)比和轉(zhuǎn)折的連接紐帶；此外，還可重復(fù)使用含有than的比較級(jí)的句子來(lái)描述與朋友之間的不同，句式的重復(fù)也可使文章更銜接。 4.添佳句 Good friends are like stars. You don’t always see them, but you know they are there. 摯友猶如天上的星星。你不時(shí)?？匆?jiàn)，但是你知道他們?cè)谀莾骸? 5.成篇章 I have lots of good friends. Although we don’t see each other often, we know each other very well. Here are two of my best friends Jenny and Linda. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 參考答案 2.列提綱、寫(xiě)句子 (1) is similar to me (2) have small eyes and wear glasses (3) tall and a little bit heavy (4) outgoing (5) reading together (6) is different from me (7) has big black eyes (8) is shorter and thinner than me (9) is quieter than me (10) is more hard-working; gets better grades than me (11) as long as they’re good 5.成篇章 I have lots of good friends. Although we don’t see each other often, we know each other very well. Here are two of my best friends Jenny and Linda. Jenny issimilar tome in some ways.We bothhave small eyes and wear glasses.We are bothtall and a little bit heavy,and we are bothoutgoing.Also, both of usenjoy reading together. ButLinda is different from me! She has big black eyes. She is shorter and thinnerthanme. Linda is quieterthanme. At school, we are both hard-working, but she is more hard-working, so she always gets better gradesthan me. I don’t care if friends are the same as me or different as long as they’re good. I think good friends are like stars. You don’t always see them, but you know they are there.