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專題十五　應(yīng)用文寫作 挖命題 【考情探究】 考點(diǎn) 考核內(nèi)容 考查方式 考情分析 2018.11 2018.6 2017.11 2017.6 2016.10 求助郵件 應(yīng)聘信 邀請信 邀請郵件 溝通郵件 應(yīng)用文寫作 1.日常英語的詞匯量及詞匯應(yīng)用能力 2.英語句子結(jié)構(gòu)的理解和掌握能力 3.日常英語的語言表達(dá)和組織能力 要求考生根據(jù)所給的情境,寫一篇80詞左右的短文。情境包括目的、對象、時間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容等;提供情境的方式有提綱、圖畫、圖表等 乘機(jī)時錢包丟失,向航空公司寫求助信 應(yīng)聘學(xué)校 英語協(xié)會 志愿者 春節(jié)邀請外 教到自己家 里一起過春節(jié) 組織郊游的 活動邀請 作為交換生到加拿大學(xué)習(xí)的信息獲取 分析解讀　　寫作是對考生綜合語言輸出能力的考查。而應(yīng)用文寫作是對考生寫作基本能力的考查,要求考生根據(jù)所給的信息,能使用準(zhǔn)確的語法和詞匯、用比較好的句式和詞匯表達(dá)規(guī)定的內(nèi)容。其設(shè)題取材非常廣泛,內(nèi)容非常豐富,一般是和學(xué)生生活比較接近的內(nèi)容。 應(yīng)用文的形式多樣,可以是郵件、信、通知等。應(yīng)用文只是形式載體,其考查的核心還是考生用英語表述事情的能力。因此,考生在寫作時要注意:1.內(nèi)容要包含所有的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)題目的要求組織文章結(jié)構(gòu),連貫地表達(dá)自己的意思;2.要使用準(zhǔn)確的語法和豐富的詞匯;3.使用比較高級的句式結(jié)構(gòu);4.使用有效的語句間連接成分,使結(jié)構(gòu)完整緊湊。 【真題典例】 假定你是李華,乘坐FL753航班抵達(dá)倫敦后發(fā)現(xiàn)錢包遺失。請給航空公司寫一封郵件 說明情況并尋求幫助。內(nèi)容包括: 1.行程信息 2.錢包特征; 3.聯(lián)系方式。 注意: 1.詞數(shù)80左右; 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。 本文是一封求助郵件。寫作時要注意求助的重點(diǎn)突出,問題的說明要簡潔清楚。 題目明確列出的要點(diǎn)有三條,但是一定要注意題目中所含有的航班信息。 注意句子之間的順暢連接和連接詞的使用。 寫作用詞上要注意表現(xiàn)出禮貌和感謝。 參考范文 范文鑒賞 Dear Madam/Sir, I am writing to report the loss of my wallet. I flew business class on your FL753 from China to London on November 1st, 2018. But it was really a pity that on my arrival in London Heathrow Airport, I found my wallet gone. I guess it must have slipped out of my pocket during the flight. It is a black leather one and in it are my ID card, 2 credit cards as well as some money.Besides the items mentioned above, there is also a family photo, which means a lot to me. If anybody happens to find it, would you be kind enough to tell me at xxx @ gmail.com? Thank you very much. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 1.寫作重點(diǎn)突出。范文開門見山,先明確郵件的目的。 2.結(jié)構(gòu)安排合理。文章第一句指出郵件的目的。第二段簡潔而清楚地講述事情的原委。不僅在很短段落內(nèi)交代清楚了航班信息,而且對錢包特征給予了明確的描述。第三段則提供了聯(lián)系方式。郵件的信息完整。 3.用語禮貌,符合求助信的特點(diǎn)。 過專題 【五年高考】 A組　自主命題浙江卷題組 Writing 1(2018浙江6月) 假定你是李華,你校英語協(xié)會招聘志愿者,接待來訪的國外中學(xué)生。請你寫信應(yīng)聘,內(nèi)容包括: 1.口語能力; 2.相關(guān)經(jīng)驗(yàn); 3.應(yīng)聘目的。 注意: 1.詞數(shù)80左右; 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫 答案 [寫作提示] 1.本文是一封求職信,以第一人稱為主,時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時。 2.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):(1)口語能力;(2)相關(guān)經(jīng)驗(yàn);(3)此次應(yīng)聘的目的。 One possible version: Dear Sir/Madam, On seeing your notice on the bulletin board, I feel excited to write this letter for the position. Owing to studying in the English department, I can talk in English fluently. To be honest, I have just won first prize in the Spoken English Competition, so there is no doubt that there is not any problem for me to communicate with foreigners. What’s more, I have ever served as a receptionist in our school’s 70th anniversary celebration, making myself more confident. In order to practise my speaking skills and get more experience, I’m eager to be taken on for this job. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Writing 2(2017浙江11月) 假定你是李華,得知外教Mr. Hall寒假不回國,想邀請他到你家過春節(jié)。請給他寫一封信,內(nèi)容包括: 1.時間; 2.一同過節(jié)的家人; 3.活動。 注意: 1.詞數(shù)80左右; 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。 答案 [寫作提示] 1.題目要求有三個要點(diǎn),但是,要注意其在敘述部分“暗含”的要點(diǎn):外教寒假不回國;邀請他到家過春節(jié)。 2.本文屬于邀請信,因此時態(tài)要用現(xiàn)在時或?qū)頃r。 3.要注意語言的禮貌、客氣,并且尊重對方的文化習(xí)俗。 One possible version: Dear Mr. Hall, Knowing that you will not go home in the winter holiday, I’d like to invite you to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival, which falls on January 19. It’s traditionally a time for family reunion, so all my family will be there. We will have a big Chinese-style dinner first, followed by chatting and some interesting games. At 8 in the evening we can watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV together. All my family will be happy if you can come. Yours, Li Hua Writing 3(2017浙江6月) 假定你是李華,計劃組織一次郊游,請給你的英國朋友Chris寫封郵件邀請他參加。內(nèi)容包括: 1.參加者; 2.時間、地點(diǎn); 3.活動:登山、野餐等。 注意: 1.詞數(shù)80左右; 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。 答案 [寫作提示] 1.本文是一封邀請英國朋友參加郊游的郵件,因此,時態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。 2.注意本文的要點(diǎn):時間、地點(diǎn)、參加者和活動,不可以遺漏要點(diǎn)。在表述的時候不可逐字翻譯,可以將一些信息包含在從句、分詞結(jié)構(gòu)中。 3.注意句子之間的順暢連接以及高級句式的使用。 One possible version: Dear Chris, How is everything going these days? I am writing to invite you to join my class in an outing organized by me this Saturday, June 10th. We will start at 6 o’clock early in the morning from the school gate, and then take a bus to Yinling Mountain, where we will climb the mountain in the morning and then have a picnic at noon. If you could come, there is no need for you to take food but you’d better wear sports shoes and suitable clothes. We will be really glad if you can come. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua Writing 4(2016浙江10月) 假定你是李華。下學(xué)期你將作為交換生(exchange student)去加拿大一所高中學(xué)習(xí),住在Lynn家里。請給Lynn寫一封郵件,內(nèi)容包括: 1.介紹自己; 2.告知到達(dá)時間; 3.詢問應(yīng)做何準(zhǔn)備。 注意: 1.詞數(shù)80左右; 2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。 答案 [寫作提示] 這是一篇非常符合考試說明要求的應(yīng)用文寫作題目。文章是以郵件為載體交流信息。解題時注意以下幾點(diǎn): (1)因?yàn)楸疚纳婕暗亩际乾F(xiàn)在和將來的信息,因此時態(tài)要用現(xiàn)在時和將來時。 (2)文章必須包括三個要點(diǎn):自我介紹、到達(dá)時間和咨詢?nèi)绾螠?zhǔn)備。 (3)要注意三個信息之間的順暢連接,同時要注意使用較好的句子結(jié)構(gòu),如從句、非謂語動詞等。 (4)注意句子一定要高級且精煉,字?jǐn)?shù)不要太少或太多,一般以70至90字為宜。 (5)浙江新高考的應(yīng)用文和以往的題目以及目前其他省份的應(yīng)用文有一定的不同之處,要特別留意。除了字?jǐn)?shù)不同,在格式上也稍有不同。其他省份的應(yīng)用文會在原題中提供了應(yīng)用文的格式,但是浙江新題型中沒有提供格式,因此要特別注意這一點(diǎn)。在寫作時要加上正確的應(yīng)用文格式。 One possible version: Dear Lynn, I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I’m happy to know that I’ll be staying with your family in the next few months while I’m studying at the local high school. Thank you for having me! I will arrive in Toronto on August 20th and get to your place late that afternoon. I wonder if you could give me some advice so that I can get myself better prepared for my stay in Canada. Looking forward to seeing you! Best wishes, Li Hua B組　統(tǒng)一命題、省(區(qū)、市)卷題組 Writing 1(2018課標(biāo)全國Ⅰ改編) 假定你是李華,你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國朋友家做客,發(fā)郵件向你詢問有關(guān)習(xí)俗。請你回復(fù)郵件,內(nèi)容包括: 1.到達(dá)時間; 2.合適的禮物; 3.餐桌禮儀。 注意: 1.詞數(shù)80左右; 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。 答案 [寫作提示] 1.本文是回復(fù)一封郵件,主要人稱為第二人稱,寫作主體時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。 2.文章要點(diǎn):①到達(dá)時間;②合適的禮物;③餐桌禮儀。 One possible version: Dear Terry, I am delighted when receiving your letter asking what customs you should pay attention to when visiting a friend. Here are my tips for you. First of all, bear in mind that you had better arrive punctually or some time earlier than the appointed time, which is of great significance to show your politeness. Additionally, to be respectful, you might as well bring an appropriate gift, like some fruits. Most importantly, it’s vital that you should mind your table manners. For instance, never speak with your mouth full of food, which may be similar to your own custom. In brief, do as the Chinese do when in China. I do hope you will have great fun at your friend’s home. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Writing 2(2018課標(biāo)全國Ⅱ改編) 你受學(xué)生會委托為校宣傳欄“英語天地”寫一則通知,請大家觀看一部英文短片Growing Together,內(nèi)容包括: 1.短片內(nèi)容:學(xué)校的發(fā)展; 2.放映時間、地點(diǎn); 3.歡迎對短片提出意見。 注意: 1.詞數(shù)80左右; 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。 答案 [寫作提示] 本文為提綱式作文,屬于應(yīng)用文中的書面通知?？刹捎萌稳綄懽鞣▽懽?。 第一步　審題立意,布局謀篇——“啟”:審題確定主題、體裁、主要人稱和主體時態(tài)。主題:在學(xué)校宣傳欄“英語天地”發(fā)布邀請大家觀看短片的書面通知;體裁:書面通知;人稱和時態(tài):以第一、二人稱為主要人稱,以一般現(xiàn)在時或一般將來時為主體時態(tài)。 第二步　確定、提煉和理順要點(diǎn),順勢承上啟下,巧妙轉(zhuǎn)折過渡——巧“承”妙“轉(zhuǎn)”,即注意段落之間、句子之間的銜接與過渡。結(jié)合要點(diǎn)文章可分三段來寫。第一段:介紹短片內(nèi)容——學(xué)校的發(fā)展;第二段:說明放映的時間和地點(diǎn);第三段:表達(dá)愿望——希望大家對短片提意見。 第三步　緊扣主題,遣詞造句——“合”:照應(yīng)開頭和主題的完美的結(jié)尾,是畫龍點(diǎn)睛之筆。緊扣主題組詞成句,做到語言得體、準(zhǔn)確無誤,避免重復(fù);遣詞造句時,注意高級詞匯、短語或句式的使用。 One possible version: Notice Dear schoolmates, It is a great honor to be on behalf of our school to inform you that we’ll invite you to see an English short film named Growing Together,which is about the development of our school. We have arranged that the short film will be on show from 16:00 to 17:00 at our school theater tomorrow. Don’t miss the chance of taking part in this collective activity. I do hope you can give us some valuable suggestions about the short film. Please give your feedback in time and contact us at your convenience. Students’ Union Writing 3(2018北京,第一節(jié)) 假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華,你的英國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國文化感興趣,計劃明年來北京上大學(xué)。他向你咨詢相關(guān)信息。請給他回郵件,內(nèi)容包括: 1.表示歡迎; 2.推薦他上哪所大學(xué); 3.建議他做哪些準(zhǔn)備工作。 注意:1.詞數(shù)不少于50; 2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。 Dear Jim, Yours, Li Hua 答案 [寫作提示] 1.仔細(xì)審題,注意交際用語; 2.要點(diǎn)齊全,合理添加細(xì)節(jié); 3.注意詞句的使用,關(guān)注文章的整體性。 One possible version: Dear Jim, I’m happy to hear from you. Welcome to Beijing for your study! Since you have long been interested in Chinese culture, I think Beijing Language and Culture University is an ideal place for you. The university is known for its language and culture courses intended for international students. I believe you will have a rewarding experience there. To be frank, studying for a degree in a different culture is never easy. You’d better learn some basic Chinese before you come. That way, you may adjust yourself to the life here in Beijing soon. If you have any other questions, do let me know. Yours, Li Hua Writing 4(2018北京,第二節(jié)) 假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華,請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序,寫一篇英文周記,記述你們上周接待外國學(xué)生,帶領(lǐng)他們體驗(yàn)中國茶文化的全過程。 注意:詞數(shù)不少于60。 答案 [寫作提示] 1.介紹、參觀; 2.演示、觀看; 3.指導(dǎo)、體驗(yàn); 4.合影。 One possible version: Last week, a group of international students visited our school. To help them better understand our tea-drinking culture, we took them to the tea room in our school, where I introduced the history of tea-making and different kinds of tea and so on. All the international students were quite interested in my introduction. Then I showed them how to make tea. I sat at a table, explaining every step of the process while making tea. All of them were amazed. They couldn’t wait to have a try for themselves. Soon the tea room became lively with every international student trying to make their own tea. We had a lot of fun, practicing, and enjoying the tea. In the end, we took a group photo, with cups or tea in our hands, to record this unforgettable experience. Writing 5(2018天津改編) 假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的機(jī)器人興趣小組組長李津,你的美國朋友Chris就讀于天津某國際學(xué)校,他曾在機(jī)器人技能競賽中獲獎。你打算邀請他加入你的團(tuán)隊(duì),參加即將于7月底在天津舉行的世界青少年機(jī)器人技能競賽。請根據(jù)以下提示代表興趣小組給他寫一封電子郵件。 (1)比賽的時間、地點(diǎn); (2)邀請他的原因; (3)訓(xùn)練計劃將發(fā)送其郵箱,請他提出建議。 注意: (1)詞數(shù)不少于80; (2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫; (3)開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯: 世界青少年機(jī)器人技能競賽the World Adolescent Robotics Competition Dear Chris, I have good news to tell you. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Jin 答案 [寫作提示] 1.本文是一封電子郵件,主要人稱為第一人稱和第二人稱,主體時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。 2.文章要點(diǎn): ①說明寫郵件的目的;②介紹比賽的時間和地點(diǎn);③邀請他的原因;④告知Chris訓(xùn)練計劃將發(fā)送到他的郵箱并請他提出自己的建議。 One possible version: Dear Chris, I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition is scheduled to be held at the end of July in Tianjin. I’m writing to invite you to join our team to prepare for it. As far as I know, you once won a prize in a robotics competition. Therefore, I think not only will it be a golden opportunity for you to show your great talent, but also you can offer us guidance, which is of great significance for us to perform well in the coming competition. Our training plan is to be sent to your e-mail box. I would appreciate it if you could give us your personal advice after reading it. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Jin Writing 6(2017課標(biāo)全國Ⅰ改編) 假定你是李華,正在教你的英國朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語。請你寫封郵件告知下次上課的計劃。內(nèi)容包括: 1.時間和地點(diǎn); 2.內(nèi)容:學(xué)習(xí)唐詩; 3.課前準(zhǔn)備:簡要了解唐朝的歷史。 注意: 1.詞數(shù)80左右; 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。 答案 [寫作提示] 1.本文為電子郵件,屬于書信類。主要人稱為第一人稱和第二人稱,寫作時態(tài)以一般將來時為主體時態(tài)。 2.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):①上課的時間和地點(diǎn); ②上課的內(nèi)容:學(xué)習(xí)唐詩;③課前要求:簡要了解唐朝的歷史。 One possible version: Dear Leslie, I am writing to inform you of our course schedule of our next class, which is about poetry of the Tang Dynasty. We will have it this Friday, in Classroom 602, Building 6. In order to learn it better, you need to do some preparations before the next class. At first, please read some materials about poetry of the Tang Dynasty, which plays a significant role in our literature. Besides, you’d better read about the history of Tang Dynasty, since it will be of great benefit for you to understand the background of the poems. You are so diligent and I am glad to teach you. I sincerely look forward to our next class and your reply. Yours, Li Hua Writing 7(2017課標(biāo)全國Ⅱ改編) 假定你是李華,想邀請外教Henry一起參觀中國剪紙(paper-cutting)藝術(shù)展。請給他寫封郵件,內(nèi)容包括: 1.展覽時間、地點(diǎn); 2.展覽內(nèi)容。 注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右; 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。 答案 [寫作提示] 1.本文為提綱式作文,體裁為書信。人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主,以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時為主體時態(tài)。 2.文章要點(diǎn): 1)展覽時間、地點(diǎn); 2)展覽內(nèi)容:中國傳統(tǒng)剪紙藝術(shù)的歷史和作品。 One possible version: Dear Henry, I’m Li Hua, one of your students. I’m writing to invite you to visit the paper-cutting exhibition. Paper-cutting is one of Chinese traditions and I’m sure you will like it. The exhibition will be held in the local museum next Saturday. Some famous Chinese artists will perform on that day. Meanwhile, some beautiful paper-cutting works, collected from all over the country, will be exhibited there. It will be a feast. If you like, you can also join in paper-cutting. I’m sure it will be an unforgettable experience for you. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua Writing 8(2017課標(biāo)全國Ⅲ改編) 假定你是李華。你所在的校乒乓球隊(duì)正在招收新隊(duì)員。請給你的留學(xué)生朋友Eric寫封郵件邀請他加入,內(nèi)容包括: 1.球隊(duì)活動; 2.報名方式及截止日期。 注意: 1.詞數(shù)80左右; 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。 答案 [寫作提示] 1.本文為提綱類作文。人稱應(yīng)以第一、二人稱為主,時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時、一般將來時為主。 2.寫作要點(diǎn):①導(dǎo)入話題:鑒于Eric對乒乓球運(yùn)動的興趣,特告知他校乒乓球隊(duì)招收新隊(duì)員的消息;②介紹球隊(duì)活動,可從日常訓(xùn)練安排以及比賽活動入手;③告知Eric報名方式,提醒他務(wù)必在截止日期前完成報名。 One possible version: Dear Eric, I’m writing to invite you to join our school table tennis team. I have been told that our school team is recruiting new members. Knowing that you are keen on playing table tennis, I wonder if you’d like to join. Team members need to receive training after school every day and are often offered opportunities to watch table tennis competitions, which will benefit us most. If you are interested in it, you can visit the school website to sign up. The closing date is 15th June. I hope to meet you in the school team. Yours, Li Hua Writing 9(2017北京,第一節(jié)改編) 你的英國朋友Jim所在的學(xué)校要組織學(xué)生來中國旅行,有兩條線路可以選擇:“長江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim來信希望你能給些建議。請你給他回信,內(nèi)容包括: 1.你建議的線路; 2.你的理由; 3.你的祝愿。 注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右; 2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。 Dear Jim, Yours, Li Hua 答案 [寫作提示] 1.本文為提綱類作文。體裁為應(yīng)用文中的書信。時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。 2.先介紹建議的旅游線路,再陳述理由,最后表達(dá)祝愿。 One possible version: Dear Jim, I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China. Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization, from which you can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice. Hope you’ll have a good time in China. Yours, Li Hua Writing 10(2017天津改編) 假設(shè)你是李津,與你以前的外籍教師Mrs. Green一直保持聯(lián)系。近日她來信詢問你的近況,請根據(jù)以下提示給她回復(fù)一封郵件。 (1)簡要介紹自己的學(xué)習(xí)和生活; (2)告知你已成為八月底在津舉辦的第十三屆全運(yùn)會的志愿者,并介紹為此所做的準(zhǔn)備(如深入了解天津等); (3)希望她有機(jī)會重訪天津。 注意: (1)詞數(shù)80左右; (2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫; (3)開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯:第十三屆全運(yùn)會the 13th National Games Dear Mrs. Green, I’m so glad to hear from you. Yours, Li Jin 答案 [寫作提示] 1.本文為提綱式作文,體裁為應(yīng)用文。人稱以第一人稱為主,時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。 2.寫作要點(diǎn): (1)介紹自己的學(xué)習(xí)和生活; (2)告訴Mrs. Green你已成為第十三屆全運(yùn)會的志愿者,并介紹你為此所做的準(zhǔn)備; (3)希望Mrs. Green重訪天津。 One possible version: Dear Mrs. Green, I’m so glad to hear from you. With the college entrance examination drawing near, I am engaged in preparing for it. Meanwhile, I pay close attention to the 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin at the end of August. I’m glad to tell you that I have become a volunteer for it and I have made a lot of preparations for it. After class, I often surf the Internet to get more information about the history and culture of Tianjin. Practicing my oral English is also becoming my schedule. I do hope you can return to Tianjin as soon as possible. Yours, Li Jin Writing 11(2017北京,第二節(jié)改編) 假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序,寫一篇英文周記,記錄畢業(yè)前夕你們制作以“感恩母?！睘橹黝}的畢業(yè)紀(jì)念視頻的全過程。 注意:詞數(shù)80左右。 提示詞:視頻 video 答案 [寫作提示] 1.本文應(yīng)以第一人稱為主,時態(tài)以一般過去時為主。 2.制作畢業(yè)紀(jì)念視頻的全過程應(yīng)該包括討論分工、收集素材、編輯制作以及放映視頻四個方面。 One possible version: 　　Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to do something. After a heated discussion, we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school. Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We debated over what to put into the video. Some compromises were unavoidable, but the video turned out perfect. Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The students and teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a great sense of achievement. 【三年模擬】 A組　2017—2019年模擬基礎(chǔ)題組 Writing 1(2019浙江五校聯(lián)考) 假如你是李華,你的好友Tom想約你明晚和他家人共進(jìn)晚餐,但你因故不能應(yīng)約。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語給他寫一封電子郵件: 1.表示歉意; 2.解釋原因; 3.彌補(bǔ)方法。 注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右; 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。 答案 [寫作提示] 1.本文是致歉信,注意使用禮貌用語。 2.要點(diǎn)要全部包括,不能有遺漏和省略。 3.要點(diǎn)只是提綱,要在此基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié),不要逐字逐句翻譯,要注意謀篇布局。 4.注意運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文,同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)讓文章更有文采。 5.注意本文主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時。 One possible version: Dear Tom, Thank you for your invitation to have dinner at your home tomorrow evening. Unfortunately, it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family, because I will be fully occupied then for an important exam coming the day after tomorrow. I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of such a happy get-together, and I hope that all of you enjoy a good time. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting afterward?If so, please don’t hesitate to drop me a line about your preferable date. I do long for a pleasant chat with you. Please allow me to say sorry again. Yours, Li Hua Writing 2(2019浙江紹興11月聯(lián)考) 為了迎接2019年元旦,學(xué)校學(xué)生會開始在廣大師生中征集元旦慶祝活動方案(scheme)。假定你是李華,請你給學(xué)生會寫一封信,提出自己的建議,內(nèi)容包括: 1.你設(shè)計的活動方案; 2.你的設(shè)計理由及相關(guān)活動的意義。 注意: 1.詞數(shù)80左右; 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。 答案 [寫作提示] 1.注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn):方案;理由;意義。 2.時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時或一般將來時。 3.注意使用合適的連接詞,使語句順暢。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,使文章更精彩。 One possible version: Dear Student Union, Having learned that you are collecting schemes for the approaching New Year celebration, I’ve got some ideas to share with you. As we all know, New Year represents a new beginning, so it’s strongly recommended that teachers and students share their new year resolutions, which will serve as a strong motivation in the following year. Additionally, a New Year’s Gala will be definitely welcomed, and it would be better if some traditional shows can be included. What’s more, New Year is also a good chance to spread kindness, so it is a good choice to hold a charity sale in the playground. I sincerely hope my suggestions will be taken into consideration, and that the New Year celebration will be a brilliant success. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Writing 3(2019浙江稽陽聯(lián)考) 假定你是李華,你的英國朋友Peter來信就下周三要參加孔子學(xué)院(the Confucius Institute)的面試征詢你的意見。請你寫封回信,內(nèi)容包括: 1.寫信目的; 2.提出建議(至少2條); 3.表示祝愿。 注意: 1.詞數(shù)80 左右; 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。 答案 [寫作提示] 1.本文是建議信,注意語言要簡潔明了。 2.文章的主要時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。 3.三個明確的要點(diǎn)和介紹中的暗含要點(diǎn)都不要遺漏。 One possible version: Dear Peter, Glad to receive your letter asking me for some advice on the interview for the Confucius Institute scheduled for Wednesday. I’m writing to remind you of what to prepare for. First, I think you need to read some books about Confucius, which helps you to understand traditional Chinese cultures better. It would also be beneficial to learn a few Chinese greetings. Additionally, wearing Han-style clothes will make you stand out among the candidates and impress the interviewers greatly. I do hope my humble proposals could be practical. Wish you good luck! Yours Sincerely, Li Hua Writing 4(2019浙江杭州模擬) 假定你是李華,最近你的美國筆友Robert要來杭州體驗(yàn)中國傳統(tǒng)文化,請你給他回復(fù)一封郵件,并為他設(shè)計杭州一日游的活動,幫助他體驗(yàn)中國傳統(tǒng)文化。內(nèi)容包括: 1.打算去的地方; 2.具體的活動安排; 3.安排的理由。 注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右; 2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。 答案 [寫作提示] 1.注意要點(diǎn)和背景。 2.主要時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和將來時。 3.注意句子的銜接要合理順暢。 One possible version: Dear Robert, I’m glad that you will come to Hangzhou soon, where there are lots of places of interest. To experience traditional Chinese cultures better, I do recommend the West Lake tour. We can begin our tour by going sightseeing along the West Lake. I bet you will be attracted. Along the West Lake, not only can you watch the wonderful scenery, but also you will find many historical relics, from which you can learn a lot of traditional cultures. Sincerely waiting for your coming! Yours, Li Hua Writing 5(2019浙江十校聯(lián)盟高三期中