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1、 建議信是向別人提出合理的建議,讓對(duì)方接受建議信是向別人提出合理的建議,讓對(duì)方接受自己的想法、主張,解決有關(guān)問(wèn)題。建議信不是自己的想法、主張,解決有關(guān)問(wèn)題。建議信不是投訴信,觀點(diǎn)要合情合理,注意禮貌當(dāng)先。同時(shí),投訴信,觀點(diǎn)要合情合理,注意禮貌當(dāng)先。同時(shí),建議信要簡(jiǎn)潔明確、理由充足,具有合理性和說(shuō)建議信要簡(jiǎn)潔明確、理由充足,具有合理性和說(shuō)服力。通常包括:服力。通常包括:1. 說(shuō)明寫信目的。說(shuō)明寫信目的。2. 提出建議與改進(jìn)措施并給予忠告。提出建議與改進(jìn)措施并給予忠告。3. 表達(dá)希望采納建議并期盼回復(fù)。表達(dá)希望采納建議并期盼回復(fù)。文體概述文體概述常用語(yǔ)塊常用語(yǔ)塊 1. 給某人提建議給某人提建議 _
2、 2. 如下如下 _ 3. 在做某事時(shí)遇到困難在做某事時(shí)遇到困難 _ 4. 利用利用 _ 5. 向某人征求意見(jiàn)向某人征求意見(jiàn)_ask sb. for advicegive sb. some advice (on)as followshave difficulty/trouble in doing sth.make use of6. 制訂計(jì)劃制訂計(jì)劃 _7. 認(rèn)為認(rèn)為有用有用 _8. 參加參加 _9. 聽從某人的建議聽從某人的建議 _10. 把把考慮在內(nèi)考慮在內(nèi) _take sth. into account/considerationmake a planfindhelpful/useful/
3、beneficialtake part in/participate infollow ones advice11. 得到改善得到改善 _12. 有所好轉(zhuǎn)有所好轉(zhuǎn) _13. 依我看來(lái)依我看來(lái) _14. 我已收到你的來(lái)信,得知你我已收到你的來(lái)信,得知你 _15. 我建議我建議 _ I would like to suggest that/I would like to make a recommendation that/I am writing to advise you of/If I were you, I would/May I suggest that/I would like to
4、put forward the suggestion thatget improvedchange for the betterin my opinion/in my view/from my point of viewI have received your letter saying that you套用句式套用句式 1. 你就你就向我尋求建議,我會(huì)盡力提一些建向我尋求建議,我會(huì)盡力提一些建設(shè)性的建議。設(shè)性的建議。 2. 我覺(jué)得如果能夠我覺(jué)得如果能夠?qū)?huì)很有幫助的。將會(huì)很有幫助的。1. You have asked me for my advice with regard toand I
5、will try to make some constructive suggestions.2. I feel that it would be beneficial if3. 我希望這些建議會(huì)對(duì)你有所幫助。我希望這些建議會(huì)對(duì)你有所幫助。4. 我相信你會(huì)考慮我的建議的。我相信你會(huì)考慮我的建議的。5. 如能看到如能看到我會(huì)非常開心的。我會(huì)非常開心的。3. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful.5. I would be more than happy to see4. I trust youll take my sugges
6、tion into account./I trust youll take good consideration of my suggestion.習(xí)作修改習(xí)作修改(做短文改錯(cuò),背經(jīng)典范文做短文改錯(cuò),背經(jīng)典范文)Dear Roy, I am glad to receive your letter ask for my advice to how to learn Chinese well. Here are few suggestions. First, this is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn
7、from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspaper and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.asking on a it newspapers Beside, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chine
8、se words more easier. You can also make more Chinese friends. He will tell you a lot about China or help you learn Chinese. Try and write to me in Chinese the next time. Best wishes!Yours truly,Li HuaBesides easily They and 1. ask asking現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ),表示現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ),表示主動(dòng)關(guān)系。主動(dòng)關(guān)系。2. to onadvice后常搭配介詞后常搭配介詞on。
9、3. 在在few前加前加a根據(jù)句意,此處為提一些建議,根據(jù)句意,此處為提一些建議,表示肯定意義,用表示肯定意義,用a few。4. this it考查句型考查句型it is + adj.+ to do sth.意意為為“做做是是的的”。5. newspaper newspapers因?yàn)橐驗(yàn)閚ewspaper為可數(shù)名詞,而且與前后的為可數(shù)名詞,而且與前后的books, magazines屬于并列關(guān)系,故用復(fù)數(shù)形式。屬于并列關(guān)系,故用復(fù)數(shù)形式。6. Beside Besides此處表示補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明關(guān)系此處表示補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明關(guān)系“此外此外/而且而且”,beside意為意為“在在旁邊旁邊”。7. easier
10、easily修飾謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用副詞形式。修飾謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用副詞形式。8. He They根據(jù)前一句話中的根據(jù)前一句話中的more Chinese friends可知用可知用They。9. or and此處兩個(gè)動(dòng)作為此處兩個(gè)動(dòng)作為“順承順承”關(guān)系,關(guān)系,而非而非“選擇選擇”關(guān)系。關(guān)系。10. 去掉去掉next time前的前的the相對(duì)于現(xiàn)在的相對(duì)于現(xiàn)在的“下下一一”,next前不用前不用the。課堂練習(xí)課堂練習(xí)假定你是李華,請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給材料,給假定你是李華,請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給材料,給Lora寫一寫一封回信。要點(diǎn)如下:封回信。要點(diǎn)如下:1. Lora打算利用暑假打工。打算利用暑假打工。2. Lora父母不同意的理
11、由。父母不同意的理由。3. 你給你給Lora的具體建議。的具體建議。注意:注意:1. 詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右。左右。2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。以使行文連貫。3. 開頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。開頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。Dear Lora, I have just read your letter in the magazine. I know that you want to work part-time this summer. But your parents dont allow you to do so. I understand your situation.
12、I think your parents may have their reasons. They may regard learning as the most important task for you. Perhaps theyd like you to make use of this summer holiday to study. Besides, they may think you are too young to work.I think you had better have a talk with your parents. If they agree, you sho
13、uld make a detailed plan for your study and work, ask your friends to work together with you, and tell your parents not to worry about you because you are old enough to manage things properly. Anyway, I would be more than happy to wish you a pleasant summer.Yours truly,Li Hua課外作業(yè)課外作業(yè) 假定你是李華,最近你們班從英國(guó)
14、轉(zhuǎn)來(lái)了一名假定你是李華,最近你們班從英國(guó)轉(zhuǎn)來(lái)了一名新生新生Jenny。這是她第一次遠(yuǎn)離家鄉(xiāng),她很想念父。這是她第一次遠(yuǎn)離家鄉(xiāng),她很想念父母及家人,有時(shí)候思念至深,常常獨(dú)自一個(gè)人深母及家人,有時(shí)候思念至深,常常獨(dú)自一個(gè)人深夜哭泣。對(duì)此,請(qǐng)你給夜哭泣。對(duì)此,請(qǐng)你給Jenny寫一封建議信,要點(diǎn)寫一封建議信,要點(diǎn)如下:如下:1. 鼓勵(lì)鼓勵(lì)Jenny堅(jiān)定求學(xué)信念,志存高遠(yuǎn),四海為家。堅(jiān)定求學(xué)信念,志存高遠(yuǎn),四海為家。2. 就就Jenny的目前狀況,提兩到三個(gè)建議。的目前狀況,提兩到三個(gè)建議。注意:注意:1. 詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右。左右。2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。使行文連貫。
15、3. 開頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。開頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。Dear Jenny, I am so glad to have a talk with you. I understand your present situation for I have had a similar experience before. People often miss their parents the first time they leave home. Most people do have to leave home for higher education or employment. I think
16、 you should realize that present separation will help with your academic development and your improvement of personal ability.Try to make friends on your school campus, and share ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now. Maybe you will still miss your parents, but your new friends will bring happiness and joy to your new life. Also I suggest you take an active part in different kinds of activities in school. You will get much pleasure from it. Wish you happy every day.Yours faithfully,Li Hua