2019版七年級英語上冊 滿分沖刺 第18講 寫作改錯講義 （新版）牛津版.doc

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2019版七年級英語上冊 滿分沖刺 第18講 寫作改錯講義 （新版）牛津版 假如你是李華, 學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行“優(yōu)秀教師”的選舉活動，你想選舉你的英語老師Daniel為本學(xué)期“優(yōu)秀教師”, 請你給組委會寫一封推薦信講明你選他的理由。 要求： 1. 詞數(shù)50左右； 2. 敘事清楚，語句通順，語意連貫； 3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名與校名； 4. 文章開頭已給，不計入總詞數(shù)。 Dear Sir, Thanks for reading my letter. I want to recommend (推薦) my English teacher Daniel to be the Best Teacher of the year. Sample Dear Sir, Thanks for reading my letter. I want to recommend (推薦) my English teacher Daniel to be the Best Teacher of the year. I’m very like Daniel. He look very young. He’s about thirty years old. He favourite color is black. Because he is always wear black T-shirt. He can plays basketball very good. He is very good at it. He is funny, he also vey strict. He wants we study hard. We all like her. Yours sincerely Li Hua 題一：語法填空 I’m very like Daniel. He look very young. He’s about thirty years old. He favourite color is black. Because he is always wear black T-shirt. He can plays basketball very good. He is very good at it. He is funny, he also very strict. He wants we study hard. We all like her. 內(nèi)容提升 話題范疇：描寫人 目的：推薦當(dāng)選 the Best Teacher of the year 要點(diǎn)：談理由 選材：詳寫性格特征，教學(xué)特點(diǎn) 結(jié)構(gòu)：總分總結(jié)構(gòu)，有始有終 拓展詞匯 helpful, kind, caring, patient, smart… be strict with sb. in sth. encourage sb. to do help sb. with/(to) do get along well with sb. treat sb. as… We can get…/enjoy…/improve… 改進(jìn)之后 Dear Sir, Thanks for reading my letter. I want to recommend (推薦) my English teacher Daniel to be the Best Teacher of the year. I like Daniel very much. He looks young and handsome. He is good at playing basketball. He is very kind and he treats us as friends. But he is also strict with us in study. He often encourages us to speak English aloud and helps us to speak English well. We can really enjoy ourselves and improve our listening and speaking skills in his class. All my classmates feel lucky to be his students. So I hope Daniel can be the Best Teacher of the year. Best wishes. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 第18講 寫作改錯 題一：I’m very like Daniel. He look very I like Daniel very much. looks young. He’s about thirty years old. He His favourite color is black. Because he is , because always wear black T-shirt. He can wears ?a ?T-shirts plays basketball very good. He is very good at play well it. He is funny, he also very strict. and/but is He wants we study hard. We all like her. us to him